The Watching(horrorcore)

Natural · 12-30-2013, 07:25 AM

l'll stalk you're hallways and check the bathroom stall gates
I'll wire tap you're phone and count the time of call lengths
I'm always lurking even if you don't see me in the shadows
My stealth is working because you don't hear me in the gravel
I'm behind you're vehicle when you wanna take a break n travel
I'm even seein you when you sleep and ya dreams unravel
I'm right there as a vivid depicted nightmare that you gotta battle
Just don't fall asleep or you'll be victim of my demonic hassle
A chronic ass hole that will lasso onto every inch of fear
I'll have you wishing you didn't exit the womb and venture here
Ill beat you senceless in an instant with a vicious malicious sneer
Am I inflicted with a sickness? Yes and its not clear if there's a cure

PancakeBrah · 12-30-2013, 11:50 AM

Tag is correct. Not horror core. Also not gewd.

e11even · 12-30-2013, 04:39 PM

That last line tho.

I think its pretty corny to mislabel OMs just for views. Overall though, good rhyming. Not very interesting, as I've heard a better version from T-Pain(of all ppl). But this was ok. Keep droppin.

Natural · 12-30-2013, 05:25 PM

I think its pretty bitch made to give poor feed for your entertainment or for the small chance it gets a significant rise out of me.
In my opinion this fits horrorcore close enough. Perhaps a little lacking in blood but that's not an absolute must. There are plenty of other ways to have a piece give off a creepy give and this is one of them.

FR33KtheG33K · 12-30-2013, 05:59 PM

the only thing I didn't like about it was the repetitive use of the im..im...im... I .. but this shit was alright. I tried to search 'pancake brah' for user posts and nothing came up but the stats under his name tell a different story, I searched through about four pages at random and still couldn't find nothing. I guess he got some tug in this forum because of the way the tags are changed which I find pretty stupid - to use your position to try and degrade someone else but its whatever, ill be looking for his posts when I have time to compare his work, I guess its just a battle netcee but regardless I want to see what the hype is about and why he feels inclined to disrespect every post Natural puts up. I fuck with your drops besides the minor flaws and look forward to reading them every time I see the name, so I guess this dude just got some type of personal vendetta against you. id like to see the battle. anyway back to the topic at hand - the drop though not horrorcore did give off an eerie vibe as I was reading and that's what matters I guess.

12-30-2013, 07:25 AM	#1
Natural Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 659 Rep Power: 0	The Watching(horrorcore) l'll stalk you're hallways and check the bathroom stall gates I'll wire tap you're phone and count the time of call lengths I'm always lurking even if you don't see me in the shadows My stealth is working because you don't hear me in the gravel I'm behind you're vehicle when you wanna take a break n travel I'm even seein you when you sleep and ya dreams unravel I'm right there as a vivid depicted nightmare that you gotta battle Just don't fall asleep or you'll be victim of my demonic hassle A chronic ass hole that will lasso onto every inch of fear I'll have you wishing you didn't exit the womb and venture here Ill beat you senceless in an instant with a vicious malicious sneer Am I inflicted with a sickness? Yes and its not clear if there's a cure

12-30-2013, 04:39 PM	#3
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	That last line tho. I think its pretty corny to mislabel OMs just for views. Overall though, good rhyming. Not very interesting, as I've heard a better version from T-Pain(of all ppl). But this was ok. Keep droppin. __________________ Ahem.

12-30-2013, 05:59 PM	#5
FR33KtheG33K subterranean dweller Join Date: Dec 2013 Posts: 24 Rep Power: 0	the only thing I didn't like about it was the repetitive use of the im..im...im... I .. but this shit was alright. I tried to search 'pancake brah' for user posts and nothing came up but the stats under his name tell a different story, I searched through about four pages at random and still couldn't find nothing. I guess he got some tug in this forum because of the way the tags are changed which I find pretty stupid - to use your position to try and degrade someone else but its whatever, ill be looking for his posts when I have time to compare his work, I guess its just a battle netcee but regardless I want to see what the hype is about and why he feels inclined to disrespect every post Natural puts up. I fuck with your drops besides the minor flaws and look forward to reading them every time I see the name, so I guess this dude just got some type of personal vendetta against you. id like to see the battle. anyway back to the topic at hand - the drop though not horrorcore did give off an eerie vibe as I was reading and that's what matters I guess. __________________ Padded Room Diaries: Entry One. Entry Two, Genius vs. Insanity Margin scribble Entry Three: Sporadic thoughts. Entry 4: Bars Attacks Rebel Yell Series: Rebel Yell

12-30-2013, 11:50 AM	#2
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	Tag is correct. Not horror core. Also not gewd.

12-30-2013, 05:25 PM	#4
Natural Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 659 Rep Power: 0	I think its pretty bitch made to give poor feed for your entertainment or for the small chance it gets a significant rise out of me. In my opinion this fits horrorcore close enough. Perhaps a little lacking in blood but that's not an absolute must. There are plenty of other ways to have a piece give off a creepy give and this is one of them.