The Butterflow Effect

Concrete · 12-04-2013, 03:48 AM

knowledge is key - you're locked in a mental prison
trapped by the ignorant bars your pencil envision
creativity caged in brain-cells is a special condition
concrete rifts this volition to make a split decision
listen children, all these cheetahs are little kittens
I'm dissing bitten writtens to ridden bullshit skills
tryin pull this shit, can't reach me like Bushwick Bill

the blood will spill and fade these shady attacks
haters retract facing facts with blades in their backs
I am taking it back - to silence the feeble minded
they can't rewind it because this shit is timeless
deprived of brightness minors wanna test the finest
spineless fake smiles seen all trough the grapevine
fools wanna take mine better go low like a bassline
this aint a hate crime meaning my deeds are decent

meeting the needs of beings with need for beatings
leaving them leaches leaking, bleeding and weeping
sweeping these streets to simply sweeten the deals
keeping the creed, retrieved freedom, fuck Sweden
a legion of Norwegian heathens reaves the region
keepin on dreamin is fruitless like depletion of semen
a reason to commit treason and diss my penmanship?
you real like inflated tits, potent as dead mans dick

dunno what your end game is - you got it twisted
keep insisting on hitching to terms like "consistence"
sifting trough my imagery yet never get the picture
such ignorant indifference cant figure the scriptures
rather write poetry pieces to impress hoes n bitches
you illerate hipster trickers, my inner poet twitches
as my flow is ripping the tides to a new culture shift
cultivate these vulgar drifts with more doper spits

put more needles in you then your acupuncturist
cos the junture is - between the past and the fresh
seperate mass from flesh to put that ass to rest
concrete is way passed any test - above any law
your meager haymaking attempt was the last straw
I see trough trash talk coming from a glass jaw
smashed by a hacksaw <-- just me being impulsive
don't think you bounce back while keying repulsive

Crete's compulsive, observe my verbs as hurtful omens
token murders reoccurs by the spur of the moment
the words spoken shivers down the spines of killers
flows deliver similar to shimmering rivers of elixirs
so drink the liquor of wicked slickness, have a zip
I unlatch my wizz so cats n kids can catch my drift
adapt to this, if you choose to snooze you lose
assume freethinkers got a loose screw, screw you
I groove through roofs you rendezvous with blues

impending doom booms and will eventually damage
no need for mind games, you're mentally challenged
take any challenge, simple and plain, let me explain..
I'll put sickness in your veins just to witness the pain
only stitches remains as your nerves crumbles quick
got a couple of clips to burst your bubble bitch
humble you quick and teach you what subtlety is
force you to cuddle and kiss with a puddle of piss

this is no subtle diss..

I despise generic kids from the grit of my heart
straight outha the assembly line, easily pick you apart
think you're smart? C rips fools clearly missing clues
you're like hollow men, I still see the bitch in you
that wants dick in you, so fuck sexual preferences
establish some skills if you wanna settle our differences
offended kids can't comprehend this, don't be strident
battling is like a vacation, I just RESORT to violence

violating your friction, I ain't cut for your commission?
fuck your click son - split your wig, that's my division
listen, I spit suberb emissions like nuclear fissions
you belivin' in yourself... is just being superstitious
super vicious, to put it blatant, rhymes blaze amazing
like a chemo-patients the haters is facing radiation
seek salvation, no angels here only demon-strations

like an evil agent, I killed you all with my last blow
call me necrophile also, molesting you dead assholes
with crass flows, let's be candid, kill yall like cancer
disgraces like you couldn't dignify this with answers
chanceless pranksters, a chainsaw is heavensent
decompose bodyparts, leave no shreds of evidence

you'll never see negligence
from my this filled with lead

recollect, don't forget, feeders get fed
just nourished you with a pill - that is red

veritas · 12-04-2013, 01:54 PM

why end with the horrocore sir? It seemed beneath your skill set tbh. the first and fourth segments were genius. much props.

Split · 12-05-2013, 07:40 AM

Crete's compulsive, observe my verbs as hurtful omens
token murders reoccurs by the spur of the moment
the words spoken shivers down the spines of killers
flows deliver similar to shimmering rivers of elixirs
so drink the liquor of wicked slickness, have a zip

dope

good rhymes, some questionable concepts but still dope overall. pick more challenging rhymes next time! keep keyin

dead man · 12-05-2013, 11:39 AM

you real like inflated tits, potent as dead mans dick

……

Concrete · 12-07-2013, 06:41 PM

Thanks for peepin' n feedin' guys.

Wise Wiggles · 12-16-2013, 12:09 AM

Lol at potent as a dead man's dick!

12-04-2013, 03:48 AM	#1
Concrete Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2013 Location: Oslo Posts: 179 Battle Record: 5-0 Rep Power: 2158978	The Butterflow Effect knowledge is key - you're locked in a mental prison trapped by the ignorant bars your pencil envision creativity caged in brain-cells is a special condition concrete rifts this volition to make a split decision listen children, all these cheetahs are little kittens I'm dissing bitten writtens to ridden bullshit skills tryin pull this shit, can't reach me like Bushwick Bill the blood will spill and fade these shady attacks haters retract facing facts with blades in their backs I am taking it back - to silence the feeble minded they can't rewind it because this shit is timeless deprived of brightness minors wanna test the finest spineless fake smiles seen all trough the grapevine fools wanna take mine better go low like a bassline this aint a hate crime meaning my deeds are decent meeting the needs of beings with need for beatings leaving them leaches leaking, bleeding and weeping sweeping these streets to simply sweeten the deals keeping the creed, retrieved freedom, fuck Sweden a legion of Norwegian heathens reaves the region keepin on dreamin is fruitless like depletion of semen a reason to commit treason and diss my penmanship? you real like inflated tits, potent as dead mans dick dunno what your end game is - you got it twisted keep insisting on hitching to terms like "consistence" sifting trough my imagery yet never get the picture such ignorant indifference cant figure the scriptures rather write poetry pieces to impress hoes n bitches you illerate hipster trickers, my inner poet twitches as my flow is ripping the tides to a new culture shift cultivate these vulgar drifts with more doper spits put more needles in you then your acupuncturist cos the junture is - between the past and the fresh seperate mass from flesh to put that ass to rest concrete is way passed any test - above any law your meager haymaking attempt was the last straw I see trough trash talk coming from a glass jaw smashed by a hacksaw <-- just me being impulsive don't think you bounce back while keying repulsive Crete's compulsive, observe my verbs as hurtful omens token murders reoccurs by the spur of the moment the words spoken shivers down the spines of killers flows deliver similar to shimmering rivers of elixirs so drink the liquor of wicked slickness, have a zip I unlatch my wizz so cats n kids can catch my drift adapt to this, if you choose to snooze you lose assume freethinkers got a loose screw, screw you I groove through roofs you rendezvous with blues impending doom booms and will eventually damage no need for mind games, you're mentally challenged take any challenge, simple and plain, let me explain.. I'll put sickness in your veins just to witness the pain only stitches remains as your nerves crumbles quick got a couple of clips to burst your bubble bitch humble you quick and teach you what subtlety is force you to cuddle and kiss with a puddle of piss this is no subtle diss.. I despise generic kids from the grit of my heart straight outha the assembly line, easily pick you apart think you're smart? C rips fools clearly missing clues you're like hollow men, I still see the bitch in you that wants dick in you, so fuck sexual preferences establish some skills if you wanna settle our differences offended kids can't comprehend this, don't be strident battling is like a vacation, I just RESORT to violence violating your friction, I ain't cut for your commission? fuck your click son - split your wig, that's my division listen, I spit suberb emissions like nuclear fissions you belivin' in yourself... is just being superstitious super vicious, to put it blatant, rhymes blaze amazing like a chemo-patients the haters is facing radiation seek salvation, no angels here only demon-strations like an evil agent, I killed you all with my last blow call me necrophile also, molesting you dead assholes with crass flows, let's be candid, kill yall like cancer disgraces like you couldn't dignify this with answers chanceless pranksters, a chainsaw is heavensent decompose bodyparts, leave no shreds of evidence you'll never see negligence from my this filled with lead recollect, don't forget, feeders get fed just nourished you with a pill - that is red

12-05-2013, 07:40 AM	#3
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,898 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899399	Crete's compulsive, observe my verbs as hurtful omens token murders reoccurs by the spur of the moment the words spoken shivers down the spines of killers flows deliver similar to shimmering rivers of elixirs so drink the liquor of wicked slickness, have a zip dope good rhymes, some questionable concepts but still dope overall. pick more challenging rhymes next time! keep keyin __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com

12-05-2013, 11:39 AM	#4
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	you real like inflated tits, potent as dead mans dick …… __________________ Zack Wicks for president

12-16-2013, 12:09 AM	#6
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	Lol at potent as a dead man's dick! __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

12-07-2013, 06:41 PM	#5
Concrete Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2013 Location: Oslo Posts: 179 Battle Record: 5-0 Rep Power: 2158978	Thanks for peepin' n feedin' guys.