Week 4 - PancakeBrah (0-1) vs. Shogun Dinero (0-0) - PANCAKEBRAH WINS BY NS

Mike Wrecka · 10-14-2013, 12:01 PM

Season 2

Rules

Verse Due Date - Thursday 23:59 PST

Voting Deadline - Sunday 23:59 PST

Line Limits - 16 - 48 Max can be higher if both agree

Voting - Must vote on 3 battles and post voting links in this thread, preferably all in one post.

If you don't vote on 3 battle you will be given a loss. If you lose by votes and don't vote on other battles you receive a one week suspension.

Topic

Salt

Good Luck @PancakeBrah @Shogun Dinero

PancakeBrah · 10-14-2013, 12:06 PM

Check

Sho Money EMG · 10-14-2013, 04:51 PM

I'm here, 16 Cake

PancakeBrah · 10-17-2013, 08:18 PM

Salt.

Like similac, a statuette colored of mildew on ash,
opaque, but on sunny days it's like seeing through glass,
a still life silhouette with borderlines thin as your lash
the same hue that's cast after the kindling's scratched,
on a Dead Sea's shore, an ode to the wicked, the crass,
the scorned. Visible across the fjord as a witness to wrath,
now garden borne, slave to the minutes that pass,
the waves that'd crash, and the thunder's tinnitus claps.
Martyr to those of a similar path. A model, explorer.
The Godless emoji, fraught with modern impatience;
"What with Lot walking so slowly..." God isn't patient.
Turncoat curiosity, "Just one more look at Sodom, Gomorrah."
And then, the whiff of iodized salt. The simplest twist.
There's no parable. No lesson learned, presented as gift.
Just another stupid bitch, another poem, and someone who didn't exist.

10-14-2013, 12:01 PM	#1
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	Week 4 - PancakeBrah (0-1) vs. Shogun Dinero (0-0) - PANCAKEBRAH WINS BY NS Season 2 Rules Verse Due Date - Thursday 23:59 PST Voting Deadline - Sunday 23:59 PST Line Limits - 16 - 48 Max can be higher if both agree Voting - Must vote on 3 battles and post voting links in this thread, preferably all in one post. If you don't vote on 3 battle you will be given a loss. If you lose by votes and don't vote on other battles you receive a one week suspension. Topic Salt Good Luck @PancakeBrah @Shogun Dinero __________________ A.bove T.he R.est

10-14-2013, 04:51 PM	#3
Sho Money EMG Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Location: Zooyork Posts: 2,124 Battle Record: 7-12 Rep Power: 0	I'm here, 16 Cake __________________ Sho Money \| Camp Bell Team Alpha EMG This site is whack

10-17-2013, 08:18 PM	#4
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	Salt. Like similac, a statuette colored of mildew on ash, opaque, but on sunny days it's like seeing through glass, a still life silhouette with borderlines thin as your lash the same hue that's cast after the kindling's scratched, on a Dead Sea's shore, an ode to the wicked, the crass, the scorned. Visible across the fjord as a witness to wrath, now garden borne, slave to the minutes that pass, the waves that'd crash, and the thunder's tinnitus claps. Martyr to those of a similar path. A model, explorer. The Godless emoji, fraught with modern impatience; "What with Lot walking so slowly..." God isn't patient. Turncoat curiosity, "Just one more look at Sodom, Gomorrah." And then, the whiff of iodized salt. The simplest twist. There's no parable. No lesson learned, presented as gift. Just another stupid bitch, another poem, and someone who didn't exist. __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

10-14-2013, 12:06 PM	#2
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	Check