WEEK 2: ispaz 0-0 VS Sinacog 0-0 ISPAZ WINS

UPN Zuch · 10-09-2020, 01:47 PM

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iSpaz · 10-09-2020, 06:03 PM

goin 10

iSpaz · 10-10-2020, 01:17 PM

Fuck it, I'll drop..

I get money. Ain't nothin funny when I pull up with this knife.
Because when I'm in Sin city.. the gamble's how hard he prays for his life.
You a lame. Nobody say ya name cuz you ain't ever been with the shits.
If anyone talkin Deadly Sin, they talkin bout ya Lust for dick on ya lips.
You lightweight. I fight great but I'm better with that aim tho.
So when I lift the AR, it's to put that red dot thru ya dome like Kano.
Im mental. Opposite of gentle the way I let the Mac spit.
So I'll let the whole drum roll through ya ear.. nd I aint talking band practice.
More gun bars. I got a hundred scars and I'm full throttle.
I'll blast the heater to ya neck till ya head pop off like a wine bottle.

Sinacog · 10-10-2020, 07:24 PM

Clockwork orange; round of applause because I'm w(r)rapped in the gauze/
I am God; I killed the prophets of the Bible with a idle/idol bible/
I caught ruins in ancient Egypt; meaning I saw locusts swarming
Soaked in gauze/god because I am God; I am Jesus Christ; sea the light
I am the biblical plague; you are all death; like dead
Because I am what's left; I am a plague; I am bubonic plague
I am the night/knight in shinning armor; battling karma
I am the armor of God; the karma of god
I am what's left; the order of the serpent
I am the serpentine; the bursting of screams from a herde of gleam

Adverse · 10-10-2020, 08:45 PM

Spaz had some super general stuff in here, like the wine bottle line. But I did like the opener and I also liked the drum roll bar. Those were standouts deadly sin could have been executed better but a good idea overall a decent inaugural verse welcome to the league

Sinacog what’s to be said? Classic Sinacog. No punches no personals just blasphemous claims. Only this time there’s a twist NONE OF IT RHYMED. Awful as usual but you don’t heed advice so carry on

V/Spaz

Mac · 10-10-2020, 08:49 PM

I get money. Ain't nothin funny when I pull up with this knife.
Because when I'm in Sin city.. the gamble's how hard he prays for his life.
cool

You a lame. Nobody say ya name cuz you ain't ever been with the shits.
If anyone talkin Deadly Sin, they talkin bout ya Lust for dick on ya lips.
i didn't get this tbh

You lightweight. I fight great but I'm better with that aim tho.
So when I lift the AR, it's to put that red dot thru ya dome like Kano.
neither this

Im mental. Opposite of gentle the way I let the Mac spit.
So I'll let the whole drum roll through ya ear.. nd I aint talking band practice.
okk

More gun bars. I got a hundred scars and I'm full throttle.
I'll blast the heater to ya neck till ya head pop off like a wine bottle.
okk

vs.

nothing

someone kickc sinacog out of the league.. ez wins for whoever that matches him

good showing ispaz you didnt really need much

v/ispaz

TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO · 10-12-2020, 03:33 PM

Ispaz gets this

Cool verse. Not gonna break this down because I didn’t feel anything from Sinacog.

Vote - ispaz

Barcotic · 10-12-2020, 03:50 PM

Deadly Sin & Sin City the only decent concepts I took from this batt. tbph
And even they missed bc of the rout taken, IMO.

Still

Spaz gmv

Sin trolls opponents, trolls voting an trolls disc.
I really don't kno why he's allowed to participate. Shit makes zero sense

Orc · 10-12-2020, 04:46 PM

I’ve got nothing to say to Sinacog. I genuinely might ban him later.

iSpaz was cool, he didn’t have to try. I don’t know who it is but he seems like he has the basics down and could be decent if he put forth some effort and used some fresher concepts.

Wanderer · 10-12-2020, 05:19 PM

Ispaz

Sin city was interesting
Drum roll was ok

Everything else fell short. Potential here though

Sinacog

Nada.

Vote iSpaz

Hush · 10-12-2020, 10:52 PM

Sinacog pure dogshit in here man

Ispaz had some good wording

Vote spaz

El Muffin · 10-13-2020, 03:03 AM

Why every sinacog verse read like a rant from that Nigga in “ Red Dragon”

Universe · 10-13-2020, 08:47 AM

Yeah, the fact that Sin is even allowed into leagues is a bit ridiculous at this point. Just handed iSpaz a W and 5 points on a silver platter... and I'm over here battling Barc and Wand lol. The fuck.

Level of competition should be taken into account when awarding points, etc. How this would work? Who knows... But this was a straight gimme.

iSpaz is good though. Great flow and some decent concepts.

Vote - iSpaz

Ajax · 10-13-2020, 02:32 PM

I'm not sure there's much need to critique here. Sin is obviously either a troll account or a very confused 13 year old Thai boy with access to way too much anime who speaks English as a fourth language.

So, its pretty clear that iSpaz won. I dug the internal rhyme schemes and the short, to the point, wording... I think it could have used some more wit/originality in the concepts (and I still think that having a whole verse of gun punches doesn't work well unless they are REALLY well executed), but it was a pretty entertaining little verse. So, cheers.

iSpaz wins.

Destroyer · 10-14-2020, 10:33 PM

Spaz had bars but beyond that, Sinacog didn’t have one reference to what type of dragon he was not one. As such, I was unsure how to really read into his battle verse to see where he was coming from. Was he a dark dragon, a black dragon, a dream dragon, I don’t know. Spaz had sin city, the drum and even a Mac will spit reference in there, which honestly, with me, is going to go a long way.

Anyway, vote spaz

TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO · 10-14-2020, 11:46 PM

Spaz you had some decent stuff here. Could definitely win some battles in this league.

Sinacog is a no.

Vote Spaz

evaD · 10-15-2020, 02:16 AM

Drum roll was the highlight from me other than the Mac spit reference. Didn’t get the deadly sins bar though? Cool verse

Vote - spaz

UserName · 10-15-2020, 03:12 PM

spaz -

I get money. Ain't nothin funny when I pull up with this knife.
Because when I'm in Sin city.. the gamble's how hard he prays for his life.

Didn't need much. This was cool. Drum line was okay as well.

Sin -

nope.

V - Spaz

Dope girl · 10-15-2020, 03:25 PM

Vote-Spaz
reason
Spaz came harder with his bars compare to Sin
Sin didn't have bars make me go wow

Hush · 10-15-2020, 06:41 PM

Spaz got this the other dude is a pure asshole

10-09-2020, 06:03 PM	#2
iSpaz Gang shit on my brain Join Date: May 2015 Posts: 265 Battle Record: 10-11 Rep Power: 161234	goin 10 __________________ But don't say I can't rap like I'm not a Rap God, Like I won't break your fucking favorite rapper's rap jaw

10-10-2020, 01:17 PM	#3
iSpaz Gang shit on my brain Join Date: May 2015 Posts: 265 Battle Record: 10-11 Rep Power: 161234	Fuck it, I'll drop.. I get money. Ain't nothin funny when I pull up with this knife. Because when I'm in Sin city.. the gamble's how hard he prays for his life. You a lame. Nobody say ya name cuz you ain't ever been with the shits. If anyone talkin Deadly Sin, they talkin bout ya Lust for dick on ya lips. You lightweight. I fight great but I'm better with that aim tho. So when I lift the AR, it's to put that red dot thru ya dome like Kano. Im mental. Opposite of gentle the way I let the Mac spit. So I'll let the whole drum roll through ya ear.. nd I aint talking band practice. More gun bars. I got a hundred scars and I'm full throttle. I'll blast the heater to ya neck till ya head pop off like a wine bottle. __________________ But don't say I can't rap like I'm not a Rap God, Like I won't break your fucking favorite rapper's rap jaw Last edited by iSpaz; 10-10-2020 at 01:57 PM.

10-12-2020, 03:33 PM	#7
TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO I <3 girls an good at sex Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 149 Battle Record: 4-4 Rep Power: 132754	Ispaz gets this Cool verse. Not gonna break this down because I didn’t feel anything from Sinacog. Vote - ispaz __________________ They think I’m dope and I Cedar Point

10-12-2020, 03:50 PM	#8
Barcotic Needs no introduction Join Date: Mar 2016 Location: Toronto Posts: 4,496 Battle Record: 29-31 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Survivor Tournament - Pros vs. Joes - Key Grand Prix - Fight Night XX - NBL Tag Team - NBL Picture League - Battle Arena - Battle Arena Pics - BA Tag Team (2x) - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - BAL Battle Royale - NPL Roast Rep Power: 3061968	Deadly Sin & Sin City the only decent concepts I took from this batt. tbph And even they missed bc of the rout taken, IMO. Still Spaz gmv Sin trolls opponents, trolls voting an trolls disc. I really don't kno why he's allowed to participate. Shit makes zero sense __________________ Dummies finna die if they coming into mine boastin Twin glocks'll spark. Waterpark; everybody running when the slides open

10-12-2020, 10:52 PM	#11
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,036 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181420	Sinacog pure dogshit in here man Ispaz had some good wording Vote spaz __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

10-10-2020, 07:24 PM	#4
Sinacog R.Killsbury 3000 Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,299 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129215	Clockwork orange; round of applause because I'm w(r)rapped in the gauze/ I am God; I killed the prophets of the Bible with a idle/idol bible/ I caught ruins in ancient Egypt; meaning I saw locusts swarming Soaked in gauze/god because I am God; I am Jesus Christ; sea the light I am the biblical plague; you are all death; like dead Because I am what's left; I am a plague; I am bubonic plague I am the night/knight in shinning armor; battling karma I am the armor of God; the karma of god I am what's left; the order of the serpent I am the serpentine; the bursting of screams from a herde of gleam

10-10-2020, 08:45 PM	#5
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Spaz had some super general stuff in here, like the wine bottle line. But I did like the opener and I also liked the drum roll bar. Those were standouts deadly sin could have been executed better but a good idea overall a decent inaugural verse welcome to the league Sinacog what’s to be said? Classic Sinacog. No punches no personals just blasphemous claims. Only this time there’s a twist NONE OF IT RHYMED. Awful as usual but you don’t heed advice so carry on V/Spaz

10-10-2020, 08:49 PM	#6
Mac Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 480 Battle Record: 7-12 Rep Power: 1856622	I get money. Ain't nothin funny when I pull up with this knife. Because when I'm in Sin city.. the gamble's how hard he prays for his life. cool You a lame. Nobody say ya name cuz you ain't ever been with the shits. If anyone talkin Deadly Sin, they talkin bout ya Lust for dick on ya lips. i didn't get this tbh You lightweight. I fight great but I'm better with that aim tho. So when I lift the AR, it's to put that red dot thru ya dome like Kano. neither this Im mental. Opposite of gentle the way I let the Mac spit. So I'll let the whole drum roll through ya ear.. nd I aint talking band practice. okk More gun bars. I got a hundred scars and I'm full throttle. I'll blast the heater to ya neck till ya head pop off like a wine bottle. okk vs. nothing someone kickc sinacog out of the league.. ez wins for whoever that matches him good showing ispaz you didnt really need much v/ispaz

10-12-2020, 04:46 PM	#9
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,163 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899393	I’ve got nothing to say to Sinacog. I genuinely might ban him later. iSpaz was cool, he didn’t have to try. I don’t know who it is but he seems like he has the basics down and could be decent if he put forth some effort and used some fresher concepts.

10-12-2020, 05:19 PM	#10
Wanderer Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: England Posts: 589 Battle Record: 24-33 Champed - NPL Roast Rep Power: 7457541	Ispaz Sin city was interesting Drum roll was ok Everything else fell short. Potential here though Sinacog Nada. Vote iSpaz

10-13-2020, 03:03 AM	#12
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	Why every sinacog verse read like a rant from that Nigga in “ Red Dragon” __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

10-13-2020, 08:47 AM	#13
Universe Everything's Connected Join Date: Nov 2017 Location: Niagara Falls, Canada Posts: 1,001 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League(2x) - GWL Picture challenge(2x) - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 10178706	Yeah, the fact that Sin is even allowed into leagues is a bit ridiculous at this point. Just handed iSpaz a W and 5 points on a silver platter... and I'm over here battling Barc and Wand lol. The fuck. Level of competition should be taken into account when awarding points, etc. How this would work? Who knows... But this was a straight gimme. iSpaz is good though. Great flow and some decent concepts. Vote - iSpaz __________________ ..Passed the Present and Future..

10-13-2020, 02:32 PM	#14
Ajax Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 344 Battle Record: 5-4 Rep Power: 95150	I'm not sure there's much need to critique here. Sin is obviously either a troll account or a very confused 13 year old Thai boy with access to way too much anime who speaks English as a fourth language. So, its pretty clear that iSpaz won. I dug the internal rhyme schemes and the short, to the point, wording... I think it could have used some more wit/originality in the concepts (and I still think that having a whole verse of gun punches doesn't work well unless they are REALLY well executed), but it was a pretty entertaining little verse. So, cheers. iSpaz wins. __________________ https://soundcloud.com/ajaxinstrumentals

10-14-2020, 11:46 PM	#16
TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO I <3 girls an good at sex Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 149 Battle Record: 4-4 Rep Power: 132754	Spaz you had some decent stuff here. Could definitely win some battles in this league. Sinacog is a no. Vote Spaz __________________ They think I’m dope and I Cedar Point

10-15-2020, 02:16 AM	#17
evaD Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 695 Battle Record: 19-10 Champed - BA Show And Prove - Summer Classic XI Rep Power: 4156647	Drum roll was the highlight from me other than the Mac spit reference. Didn’t get the deadly sins bar though? Cool verse Vote - spaz __________________

10-15-2020, 03:12 PM	#18
UserName K I N G Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 685 Battle Record: 15-10 Rep Power: 3228865	spaz - I get money. Ain't nothin funny when I pull up with this knife. Because when I'm in Sin city.. the gamble's how hard he prays for his life. Didn't need much. This was cool. Drum line was okay as well. Sin - nope. V - Spaz __________________ First Class

10-15-2020, 03:25 PM	#19
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,788 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	Vote-Spaz reason Spaz came harder with his bars compare to Sin Sin didn't have bars make me go wow

10-15-2020, 06:41 PM	#20
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,036 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181420	Spaz got this the other dude is a pure asshole __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk