07-06-2020, 04:15 PM | #1 |
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Zaddy 0-1 vs Wanderer 0-1 - WANDERER WINS
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07-06-2020, 04:22 PM | #2 |
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07-06-2020, 05:05 PM | #3 |
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07-06-2020, 05:47 PM | #4 |
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07-08-2020, 03:19 PM | #5 |
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A Sweaty crackhead in a bowling alley?? & that top lip’s looking sore Lockpicking & theft to fund a drug habit only time he moving pins for a score Fuck’s up with ur mouth?! Those lips got Botox fillin em? Ur at the end of the line. Looks like u already got hooked by a fisherman & That chick know u scared of guns... she baffled by this man Wonders why she gotta be the one with a strap around her shoulder, carrying the can Guy in the bottom left think he knows the truth but our friend is mistaken Fuck holding out sex on the beach... that girl won’t even kiss u in any location U know she sent ME nudes. Pic was on my desktop til I moved it to trash Seems we got one thing in common... both had a thumbnail with ur girls ass Whole squad gatecrash ur date night. Headshot... scope’s on him Be a different scene when ur arm’s around wifey as the red dots closing in Last edited by Wanderer; 07-08-2020 at 03:26 PM. |
07-09-2020, 06:48 PM | #6 |
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07-10-2020, 09:48 PM | #7 |
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9-19?!?! Jesus Christ u suck, no wonder why no1 wud ever fear ya You rly should just hang it up.. ur picture couldn’t make it any clearer Ugly outfit & a weird stache? I think logging out is what’s best for u kid.. Oooh ok we get it ur jus a dummy.. well then I wna knw who the dude to the left of u is Dawggg I’m either a hazard w the set or I’m a master w the tec.. These hands will leave u with black eyes.. u’ll think it was The Lazarus Effect “I mustache you a question!” Tehehe Jajaja that was a hair joke We don’t even need to take a look at ur shirt to knw ur a square bloke These hands can cause disasters but a tool can buck it faster & if a rd won’t kill u then a dummy’ll end your life like Puppet Masters Wan ain’t champin here, he’s too bummy & old - his bars always let us down Brooo we knw u arent the dummy in gold.. ur NEVER the one wearin a crown |
07-10-2020, 11:56 PM | #8 |
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This wasn’t that close
Wanderer, this is the best I’ve seen from you. Opener was flames. Fillin em and fisherman doesn’t rhyme And is completely lazy lol. That bar could have been dope. Sex on the beach was dope too. Zelph idk what’s going on here this was not your best work. Lazarus bar was cool but I’m the only one that’s ever seen the movie so. Other then that your verse seemed super rush. I know you’re better thsn this doggy. Vote wanderer |
07-12-2020, 08:58 AM | #9 |
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great photoshop work Zelph
pins is a great start fisherman was simple but hit lol strap was cool sex on the beach was a heaterrr last two were solid concepts that coulda been executed a lil better vs hang it up was ehhh, simple as fuck ok misdirection with dummy lazarus was tight square bloke ? lol nahhh puppet master was a banger didnt like the closer zelph was up and down.. i mean lazarus and puppet were srraight heat but square bloke was awful.. wand’s first 8 were heavvyyy and basically took it for him, def becoming one of the reads i look forward to.. v wanderer
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07-13-2020, 11:59 AM | #10 |
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Wanderer got this but it was close
I expected better from Zelph but this was an obvious key. Couple good concepts that were executed poorly. Wanderer is coming into his own. Not somebody to take lightly going forward. Probably use a fake pic though bro because that face is straight AMMO
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07-13-2020, 12:20 PM | #11 |
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A Sweaty crackhead in a bowling alley?? & that top lip’s looking sore
Lockpicking & theft to fund a drug habit only time he moving pins for a score nice! Fuck’s up with ur mouth?! Those lips got Botox fillin em? Ur at the end of the line. Looks like u already got hooked by a fisherman cool hah & That chick know u scared of guns... she baffled by this man Wonders why she gotta be the one with a strap around her shoulder, carrying the can lol Guy in the bottom left think he knows the truth but our friend is mistaken Fuck holding out sex on the beach... that girl won’t even kiss u in any location okish U know she sent ME nudes. Pic was on my desktop til I moved it to trash Seems we got one thing in common... both had a thumbnail with ur girls ass not feeling this Whole squad gatecrash ur date night. Headshot... scope’s on him Be a different scene when ur arm’s around wifey as the red dots closing in I feel this but could have been executed in a more harsh way vs. 9-19?!?! Jesus Christ u suck, no wonder why no1 wud ever fear ya You rly should just hang it up.. ur picture couldn’t make it any clearer this is kinda simple Ugly outfit & a weird stache? I think logging out is what’s best for u kid.. Oooh ok we get it ur jus a dummy.. well then I wna knw who the dude to the left of u is too wordy, could have found a different approach. This is ok Dawggg I’m either a hazard w the set or I’m a master w the tec.. These hands will leave u with black eyes.. u’ll think it was The Lazarus Effect cool “I mustache you a question!” Tehehe Jajaja that was a hair joke We don’t even need to take a look at ur shirt to knw ur a square bloke ok lol These hands can cause disasters but a tool can buck it faster & if a rd won’t kill u then a dummy’ll end your life like Puppet Masters yeah this is a different approach.. nice Wan ain’t champin here, he’s too bummy & old - his bars always let us down Brooo we knw u arent the dummy in gold.. ur NEVER the one wearin a crown not feeling this mate I had predicted Zaddy to win this but he came off a bit simple and repetitive with the dummy concepts. if he had sharpened up his bars he would've taken this. On the other hand, wanderer came direct and creative, funnier bars. I have him here v/wanderer |
07-13-2020, 12:59 PM | #12 |
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A Sweaty crackhead in a bowling alley?? & that top lip’s looking sore
Lockpicking & theft to fund a drug habit only time he moving pins for a score this is cool, good pic use Fuck’s up with ur mouth?! Those lips got Botox fillin em? Ur at the end of the line. Looks like u already got hooked by a fisherman lol enjoyable reference, good hit & That chick know u scared of guns... she baffled by this man Wonders why she gotta be the one with a strap around her shoulder, carrying the can solid again Guy in the bottom left think he knows the truth but our friend is mistaken Fuck holding out sex on the beach... that girl won’t even kiss u in any location lolish, like the ref but feel you couldve done more here U know she sent ME nudes. Pic was on my desktop til I moved it to trash Seems we got one thing in common... both had a thumbnail with ur girls ass thumbnail ref seems kinda played Whole squad gatecrash ur date night. Headshot... scope’s on him Be a different scene when ur arm’s around wifey as the red dots closing in solid closer vs. 9-19?!?! Jesus Christ u suck, no wonder why no1 wud ever fear ya You rly should just hang it up.. ur picture couldn’t make it any clearer huh? Ugly outfit & a weird stache? I think logging out is what’s best for u kid.. Oooh ok we get it ur jus a dummy.. well then I wna knw who the dude to the left of u is what? Dawggg I’m either a hazard w the set or I’m a master w the tec.. These hands will leave u with black eyes.. u’ll think it was The Lazarus Effect Not a pic diss and Lassie Walrus Effect seems like a reach “I mustache you a question!” Tehehe Jajaja that was a hair joke We don’t even need to take a look at ur shirt to knw ur a square bloke this stoooopid These hands can cause disasters but a tool can buck it faster & if a rd won’t kill u then a dummy’ll end your life like Puppet Masters this was a better use of dummy but hes a nutcracker so it doesnt technically work Wan ain’t champin here, he’s too bummy & old - his bars always let us down Brooo we knw u arent the dummy in gold.. ur NEVER the one wearin a crown huh? lol no Wand was pretty consistent throughout with good uses of the pic.. EVerytime i come into a Zelph battle i'm sectretly hoping he wins but this wasn;t his week Wand gets my vote
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