Week 10: Adverse 5-3 vs. Plot 4-2 - AD WINS

[Blue Bayou]

NBL Season XIV

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[Adverse]

Check will probably go 10-12

[Plot]

Aight

[Adverse]

This dude's a cuck and his chicks with me, blistered knees n suckin
The Plot thickens when he walks in on us, because the twist is that he loves it
Usually I'd argue against his gun bars, say this fraud ain't squeezin’
But 4 wins?! You must be toting gats with all the people you robbed this season
You can write more lines than me, fam it won't matter it still ain't enough
Because this that Chris D’Elia, if you answer me with 16, you're still getting FUCKED
It's over once he sees the red light on the hamma, GONE!
That shotty hit ya body and leave Plot Twisted. - M. Night Shyamalan
Sleepin on me? Catch you while you nappin, then i let the rifle aim
Cock it back and flip the mattress like I'm tryna hide a stain
No self esteem having ass, and we all know how important confidence is
Only time you gonna see a ‘Plot full of himself’ is when i dig a grave n toss him in it

[Plot]

Late as lol...

Pump action shot gun, you bout to get those slugs
When this fire-fly in your face it wont be no glow bugs.
Your so wack cunt, no one thinks your rhymes are ill
Anyone picking Adderall..outta their fuckin mind on pills.
Sketchy as fuck, you've never shown skills or raw appeal
Just coz your styles bocce dont mean u got balls of steel.
Wants to be a tropic but noone wanna surf with this wack kid
We all avoid clickin Ad', and they dont want Ad in the clique.
Guy dont even know hes stupid, nows time for his execution
Dumb cunt is so naive, hes prob making some resolutions.
Schooling this nerd, blasting with both of these 3 gats
Coz idgaf what Ad dishin, I always got dees in maths.

[evaD]

This dude's a cuck and his chicks with me, blistered knees n suckin
The Plot thickens when he walks in on us, because the twist is that he loves it
Nice name play but think you could’ve worded it better and made the rhyme stronger for better impact
Usually I'd argue against his gun bars, say this fraud ain't squeezin’
But 4 wins?! You must be toting gats with all the people you robbed this season
Decent
You can write more lines than me, fam it won't matter it still ain't enough
Because this that Chris D’Elia, if you answer me with 16, you're still getting FUCKED
This is nice
It's over once he sees the red light on the hamma, GONE!
That shotty hit ya body and leave Plot Twisted. - M. Night Shyamalan
Dope
Sleepin on me? Catch you while you nappin, then i let the rifle aim
Cock it back and flip the mattress like I'm tryna hide a stain
Flip the mattress seems a bit weird but it kinda works
No self esteem having ass, and we all know how important confidence is
Only time you gonna see a ‘Plot full of himself’ is when i dig a grave n toss him in it
Nice closer



Pump action shot gun, you bout to get those slugs
When this fire-fly in your face it wont be no glow bugs.
Nice
Your so wack cunt, no one thinks your rhymes are ill
Anyone picking Adderall..outta their fuckin mind on pills.
Decent
Sketchy as fuck, you've never shown skills or raw appeal
Just coz your styles bocce dont mean u got balls of steel.
Don’t really get this
Wants to be a tropic but noone wanna surf with this wack kid
We all avoid clickin Ad', and they dont want Ad in the clique.
Could’ve been done better I think
Guy dont even know hes stupid, nows time for his execution
Dumb cunt is so naive, hes prob making some resolutions.
NY eve? Haha cool I guess
Schooling this nerd, blasting with both of these 3 gats
Coz idgaf what Ad dishin, I always got dees in maths.
Lol


I think adverse edged this one but it was close. Plot had some original ideas but a couple misses and adverse had the higher hitters

Vote - ad

[Artifice]

cool drops from both...

i thought ad's opener was decent, the gun bar/robbed was dope imo... the plot twisted/shyamalan was fire too... mattress didn't do much for me but the closer was also a cool name play. Not sure if they've been used on him before (I haven't gone and read the back catalog of battles here) but they seemed creative enough.

Plot had a cool opener, and some cool wordplay ideas but they seemed a little stretched to me... adderall/ad at all im' guessing? and the naive/ny eve was a cool concept but it's also a bit of a stretch. closer again decent idea but the execution didn't land hard.

overall, Ad had stronger hits and an overall more polished drop,so he gets my vote. enjoyed the read guys.

v/ Adverse

[Orc]

This dude's a cuck and his chicks with me, blistered knees n suckin
The Plot thickens when he walks in on us, because the twist is that he loves it

Funny twist on an obvious play. Saved it

Usually I'd argue against his gun bars, say this fraud ain't squeezin’
But 4 wins?! You must be toting gats with all the people you robbed this season

Well worded again. Makes it hit

You can write more lines than me, fam it won't matter it still ain't enough
Because this that Chris D’Elia, if you answer me with 16, you're still getting FUCKED

This is fire

V

Pump action shot gun, you bout to get those slugs
When this fire-fly in your face it wont be no glow bugs.

Light jab

Your so wack cunt, no one thinks your rhymes are ill
Anyone picking Adderall..outta their fuckin mind on pills.

Good idea could have been better developed to hit

Wants to be a tropic but noone wanna surf with this wack kid
We all avoid clickin Ad', and they dont want Ad in the clique.

This was a good personal

3 v 3

Difference maker for me is that Ads execution was more fluid and developed. Plot had good ideas but rushed the wording which hurt the effectiveness. Adverse is becoming a real problem

Vote Adverse

[Maximus]

This dude's a cuck and his chicks with me, blistered knees n suckin
The Plot thickens when he walks in on us, because the twist is that he loves it
HA, NICE FLIP
Usually I'd argue against his gun bars, say this fraud ain't squeezin’
But 4 wins?! You must be toting gats with all the people you robbed this season
COOL
You can write more lines than me, fam it won't matter it still ain't enough
Because this that Chris D’Elia, if you answer me with 16, you're still getting FUCKED
AIGHT
It's over once he sees the red light on the hamma, GONE!
That shotty hit ya body and leave Plot Twisted. - M. Night Shyamalan
AIGHT AGAIN
Sleepin on me? Catch you while you nappin, then i let the rifle aim
Cock it back and flip the mattress like I'm tryna hide a stain
HMM, NOT FEELING
No self esteem having ass, and we all know how important confidence is
Only time you gonna see a ‘Plot full of himself’ is when i dig a grave n toss him in it
COOL FLIP

VS

Pump action shot gun, you bout to get those slugs
When this fire-fly in your face it wont be no glow bugs.
I LIKE THIS
Your so wack cunt, no one thinks your rhymes are ill
Anyone picking Adderall..outta their fuckin mind on pills.
NAH, A STRETCH FOR ME
Sketchy as fuck, you've never shown skills or raw appeal
Just coz your styles bocce dont mean u got balls of steel.
AIGHT
Wants to be a tropic but noone wanna surf with this wack kid
We all avoid clickin Ad', and they dont want Ad in the clique.
OK, LIGHT
Guy dont even know hes stupid, nows time for his execution
Dumb cunt is so naive, hes prob making some resolutions.
HMM, OK
Schooling this nerd, blasting with both of these 3 gats
Coz idgaf what Ad dishin, I always got dees in maths.
COOL CONCEPT BUT I THIS COULDA BEEN MUCH BETTER I THINK

Good showing from both of ya. I felt like Adverse OD'd on the nameflips but he had enough consistency and less misses to take the win IMO. Plot had some cool shit also, i liked his opener mostly, also some of his concepts coulda been fleshed out much better, not just the last one. but still a solid showing from both

V/ADVERSE

[Resin M-I-C]

twist was cool
gats ok
felt delia coulda been nasty, ok here m night ok..
m night was a solid concept.. delivery a lil simple but works
stain was funny, great concept
closer was aight

vs

firefly coulda been fire, fell a lil flat
ellipses messed with the flow but it was good
bocce was ehh
clickin add hittt
resolutions? i dunno man
wasnt feelin the closer


just a bit more consistancy here for the winner.. although there a good amount of nameplays he just came overall better

v adverse

[Blue Bayou]

5-0 Ad wins