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Old 05-05-2020, 10:14 AM   #1
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The ordering of chaos is always the supreme purpose,
Awaken from hibernating just to make the wack nervous.
See I’m sort of secret service when I Kafka clever versus
With the silence of the Seventh Seal to reveal measured sources
Everything is always four horses for the psyche of leveraged forces
Instant mine bender time rearranger.......Covid is nothing I’ve never been a stranger to danger.
Now let your thoughts of anger from that constant stranger bow to the Best Of All Possible Worlds appraiser.
Now let’s see, start with does relentless pretentiousness come inside of your sentences?
Be they disguised as apathy or failed repentance’s. Observe: my pedigrees tremendousness.
This is the sort of simpleness your supposed synthesis of the differences I use when I go Limitless.
It’s like a fist....that will never miss....lol consider this:
The John Stockton of all of the these records, here’s another assist down towards your gutter of piss.
See how there is still an element that encourages and provokes Hope of maybe you learning?
Questions as statements. Erase thoughts of your known inner greatness. This leads to discerning.

This is a mental skill to develop to Remember the future.
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The cerebral assassin, the molder of minds, the Omni potent being. Time transcending traveler, wisdom incarnate. Veritas needs no intro but I guess I have to. He’s not know in the battling world but who doesn’t know veritas? The guy us always original and if you pay attention to his bars, dude brings the heat.. The gawd.
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Old 05-05-2020, 10:28 AM   #2
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Nice. Crazy vocab laced with strong imagery had held my attention from start to finish:

"Be they disguised as apathy or failed repentance’s. Observe: my pedigrees tremendousness.
This is the sort of simpleness your supposed synthesis of the differences I use when I go Limitless."

Over 9000 then? Lol. This just rolled off the tongue; a mix of philosophical musing and straight braggodociousness that balanced out nicely. I liked the superpower-esque sign off as well. It was a good closer to put the rest of the piece in context.

Keep posting. Please rtf.

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