Week 4: Wanderer (1-0) vs. Ender (1-2) - WAND WINS

[Blue Bayou]

NBL Season XIV

Rules

Due Dates:
• Verses are due THURSDAY by 11:59 PM PST.
• Goal is for voting to end Saturdays
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ
• To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance


Line Limit:
• Min. = 10 lines
• Max. = 20 lines
• The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.


Voting:
• I do not have time to count links, and I know nobody wants to post them because it’s tedious. Do your part and vote or I’m making house calls.

General Rules:
• 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
• 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
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means you will disqualified.
• A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged.
• If your opponent doesn't check in,
you still have to post a verse.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.

@Wanderer
@Ender

[Wanderer]

Check

[Ender]

Check.

[Wanderer]

Bodied by AK & Flow. Dude been shaky with his pen
So It’s easy to Descend, fluked against Larkin... & it’s all been downhill since then
Lol @ ur girl model material. I’m behind her with the glocks til I squeeze homes
Those 2 rounds coming out her face’ll never resemble prominent cheek bones
Probs bagged a fat chick & she still never climax, man I gotta chuckle
U could try a furniture fuck. All that weight on one table legs are bound to buckle
Act tough & get clapped instead, walking tall like ur clan impressed
Stepping long term steroid abuse... it cost u heavy to expand ur chest
Run at u. sticks got custom grips, that’s a gamer pad but I ain’t into tech
I’m charging... & when I rage & pull hard that machine make u disconnect
Pro stance when I grip the pistol so watch ur mouth, I sell this dominance
Bitch I ain’t ur most trusted friend but say anything & It’ll be held in confidence

[Ender]

Apologies for lateness. If I can get an extension I will post tomorrow, otherwise Wanderer will have to take the no-show win. Sorry about this.

[Wanderer]

Ext is fine by me @Blue Bayou

[Ender]

Empty threats and cheap talk are all this clown has
I go bare hands at a writer and shut down that Jazz
How's this bitch got a win, been a joke at Netcees forever
Something smells fishy here, quick Wanderer clamp your knees together
My verses are immaculate, I could only lose with cheap rigging
Yours are flawless too, whenever I think you've hit rock bottom you keep digging
Pussy bitch, my verses get praise yours belong in the fucking bin
Only time anyone's said "sharp verse Wanderer" you were in the middle of ducking him
I start funerals for boring writers once I've fired the glocks
At least now you'll have an excuse for always thinking inside the box
My writing compels voters to give props even when I've keyed shit
Your writing compels <--- voters to give you one every time they read it

[FGR]

Wands openers wording seemed a little choppy to me.
Cheek bones cool...
Disconnect was a nice hit...opener was a little iffy with wording but alright
VS
Opener was blah.... Smells fishy was kinda corny...
Sharp verse was ok... Inside the box has been done to much...
Closer was cool...
Close battle...both had a hit and both had misses ..
I think imma give it to wand..slightly harder hits and fresher.. end had some shit that's been done before.. fishy/close ur legs is a joke from being a kid... Inside the box... Even the sharp angle has been done that way alot ..I gave it some props tho for a personal tie in but
VOTE WANDERER no hate fellas

[Ryno]

Descend, steroid abuse were cool
VS
Opener, wasn’t feeling much after that.
Maybe the Sharp vs wanderer line

V/Wand... I enjoyed his as a whole more.
Better concepts

[Saint]

Not the best Wand verse I've seen this season but his concepts i feel put him over Ender. Ender i guess had an attempt w/ his closer.

Wand: Machine disconnect

Vote Wand

[NoetiC]

wanderer -

verse was ok, wasnt really feeling it much, lines about guns and violence dont hit at all online


Ender -

My verses are immaculate, I could only lose with cheap rigging
Yours are flawless too, whenever I think you've hit rock bottom you keep digging

cool

you had lines too that resorted to guns and violence which i didnt feel at all, but overall i think your verse flowed better and didnt have as many gunplay type of lines


vote - Ender

[Neighbor]

Bodied by AK & Flow. Dude been shaky with his pen
So It’s easy to Descend, fluked against Larkin... & it’s all been downhill since then
Probs bagged a fat chick & she still never climax, man I gotta chuckle
U could try a furniture fuck. All that weight on one table legs are bound to buckle
Run at u. sticks got custom grips, that’s a gamer pad but I ain’t into tech
I’m charging... & when I rage & pull hard that machine make u disconnect
Pro stance when I grip the pistol so watch ur mouth, I sell this dominance
Bitch I ain’t ur most trusted friend but say anything & It’ll be held in confidence

vs.

How's this bitch got a win, been a joke at Netcees forever
Something smells fishy here, quick Wanderer clamp your knees together
My verses are immaculate, I could only lose with cheap rigging
Yours are flawless too, whenever I think you've hit rock bottom you keep digging
Pussy bitch, my verses get praise yours belong in the fucking bin
Only time anyone's said "sharp verse Wanderer" you were in the middle of ducking him


Generous w/ the quotes here, but I felt Wanderer's lines were just more cutting & landed better. Although, I could see ppl voting for Ender here. Great trade between you two, an enjoyable read & not an easy decision

v/ Wanderer

[Blue Bayou]

Wand wins