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dead man · 03-31-2020, 12:37 AM

i'll be
happy to lay here and its probably likely
the time has come, the walrus said, to call it a night
walking Northwest chasing all of the lights
dragging whips and chains i left rihanna the knife
calmly reciting Auld Lang Syne. firing shots at the sky
they read my palm and told me i had already died
its constant vibration from some other Beside
parallel preamble this preposterous ride
let me off

Adverse · 03-31-2020, 10:01 AM

Cool little piece here sir, enjoyed it even though it was short in length feel like the scenery changed enough that it took me around the world and back which a lot of writers fail to do with even an essay so cheers on that

Inno · 04-02-2020, 12:54 PM

This was cool, some what more light hearted from your usual drops. Is this finished? Seems like it’s not to me but I’m probably wrong. Anyway Do you write poetry? If you do I’d love to see it, this seems like poetry but that’s just me. Keep posting

Exis · 04-22-2020, 11:55 PM

I would love you to add on to this...I'm not a topical lyricist but this is inspirin'...thankyou.

03-31-2020, 12:37 AM	#1
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	off i'll be happy to lay here and its probably likely the time has come, the walrus said, to call it a night walking Northwest chasing all of the lights dragging whips and chains i left rihanna the knife calmly reciting Auld Lang Syne. firing shots at the sky they read my palm and told me i had already died its constant vibration from some other Beside parallel preamble this preposterous ride let me off __________________ Zack Wicks for president

03-31-2020, 10:01 AM	#2
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Cool little piece here sir, enjoyed it even though it was short in length feel like the scenery changed enough that it took me around the world and back which a lot of writers fail to do with even an essay so cheers on that

04-02-2020, 12:54 PM	#3
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	This was cool, some what more light hearted from your usual drops. Is this finished? Seems like it’s not to me but I’m probably wrong. Anyway Do you write poetry? If you do I’d love to see it, this seems like poetry but that’s just me. Keep posting

04-22-2020, 11:55 PM	#4
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	I would love you to add on to this...I'm not a topical lyricist but this is inspirin'...thankyou.