Week 2:Plot VS Jabari Black PLOT WINS 8-7

Flow · 03-25-2019, 02:49 PM

Week Two

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.

DUE THURSDAY

@Plot
@Jabari Black

*The 1-2 league and it's mini LR league are one bar Vs one bar.*

Plot · 03-28-2019, 11:16 AM

Got you murdered Black, it’s a death sentence however I word it
The Shottys undisputed: when the 12 delivers it’s a unanimous verdict.

Jabari Black · 03-28-2019, 06:00 PM

I pop the tool! Get the drop on Plot then I’m ridin through/
Shoot up ya neighborhood! The choppa fuck up the block like a karate move/

zelti · 03-28-2019, 06:24 PM

Damn both of these were dope af. Plot good shit on that, that was fire. JB same to you but I feel yours flowed a bit smoother and had more swag to it. Tough one and gonna be close but I have JB

Vote Jabari Black

Blas · 03-28-2019, 07:05 PM

both were dope flow/structure/concept wise i just felt like plots was slightly more complex seeing as JBs choppa wp was easy to see coming. edge to plot just for being less obvious the route he was taking even though they are both cool af tbh

v/ plot

Saint · 03-29-2019, 05:02 AM

I liked Plots here good flip on that 12 concept.
Bit surprising JB's liked the concept but shoulda ended like a move or something specific imo, still ok line..

Vote-Plot

Ghost1 · 03-29-2019, 08:34 AM

literally nothing fresh to me in plots boxing flip

choppa block was cool enough to me

v jb

Cred · 03-29-2019, 09:04 AM

Plot was cool honestly, jb had a fresh twist on a played concept n god wording

Jabari Black dub

White LGI · 03-29-2019, 01:36 PM

Best I seen so far....dope shit guys...but I liked plot better....I hate a loser has to come from this though, prolly the best lines of the week

Chyeahhh!!! · 03-29-2019, 02:10 PM

I've got Plot here with a nicely worded fresh gunbar concept. JB you're my nig and did your thing but Plot got this one

Vote plot

Flow · 03-29-2019, 05:16 PM

Plot steadily improving. Nothing wrong here bar a slightly stale concept. But thats unlucky sometimes it's hard to know what's going to be fresh. Liked jabs. Wasn't his best. Rather simple. But fresh and worked.

Its simplicity was in its favor I think.

Vote jab

Pharaohs Army · 03-30-2019, 07:26 PM

I got Plot here with the jury concept

Sharp · 03-30-2019, 07:52 PM

I like Jabari a bit more. Just coming down to taste n how he flipped his concept but this is a strong botw contender

Destroyer · 03-31-2019, 08:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ghost1

literally nothing fresh to me in plots boxing flip

choppa block was cool enough to me

v jb

Boxing? Wtf bar did you read?
I can’t call out zelph for his stupidity and let this slide
It’s a jury verdict reference weirdo

V/plot

Resin M-I-C · 03-31-2019, 12:32 PM

i liked plots, that was clever
crazy i have never heard a choppa karate move line tho, shit was fresh

this is a coinflip, but i’ve never heard a jury be called 12 tho so

v jb

Ghost1 · 03-31-2019, 12:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Destroyer

Boxing? Wtf bar did you read?
I can’t call out zelph for his stupidity and let this slide
It’s a jury verdict reference weirdo

V/plot

Idk when a jury is referred to as 12

I mean I get there's 12 jurors in criminal cases....

I know boxing matches have 12 rds, undisputed champions and matches that go to the 12th are then forced to decision

So if it wasn't a boxing reference it should have been

Either way I don't find the boxing or courtroom frames new or intriguing

Ghost1 · 03-31-2019, 12:41 PM

Maybe I should vote for plot tho now because his bar is like the skeleton key of punchlines

Barcotic · 03-31-2019, 03:34 PM

plot
somewhat of a reach w the concept but decent due to wording

jb
choppa/block/karate fire concept, wording wasnt great but its still good

v/jabari in a close one

Suthaveli · 03-31-2019, 06:13 PM

I like plot line better fr. Much more clever & vicious.

Mvgt plot

~RustyGunZ~ · 03-31-2019, 09:04 PM

came back to this three times

close

i like plot better in an upset

03-28-2019, 06:24 PM	#4
zelti Senior Member Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 346 Rep Power: 0	Damn both of these were dope af. Plot good shit on that, that was fire. JB same to you but I feel yours flowed a bit smoother and had more swag to it. Tough one and gonna be close but I have JB Vote Jabari Black __________________ Words bitches don’t say: 1. Hazel (hey zel)

03-29-2019, 02:10 PM	#10
Chyeahhh!!! Saul Paul Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: remote location with a remote weapon station Posts: 6,398 Battle Record: 16-26 Rep Power: 1663351	I've got Plot here with a nicely worded fresh gunbar concept. JB you're my nig and did your thing but Plot got this one Vote plot __________________ KNOW YOUR MAKER BEFORE YOU'RE MADE TO I know the ledge, his sister's a jumpoff

03-31-2019, 12:32 PM	#15
Resin M-I-C Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 734 Battle Record: 33-9 Champed - 1-2 Punch Onslaught II - Tag Team Tournament V - 1-2 Punch Season III - Netcees SOL - Battle Arena - SOL Season I - NBL Season XIV - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 8150231	i liked plots, that was clever crazy i have never heard a choppa karate move line tho, shit was fresh this is a coinflip, but i’ve never heard a jury be called 12 tho so v jb __________________ C. O. B.

03-31-2019, 03:34 PM	#18
Barcotic Needs no introduction Join Date: Mar 2016 Location: Toronto Posts: 4,496 Battle Record: 29-31 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Survivor Tournament - Pros vs. Joes - Key Grand Prix - Fight Night XX - NBL Tag Team - NBL Picture League - Battle Arena - Battle Arena Pics - BA Tag Team (2x) - 1-2 Punch League (2x) - BAL Battle Royale - NPL Roast Rep Power: 3061968	plot somewhat of a reach w the concept but decent due to wording jb choppa/block/karate fire concept, wording wasnt great but its still good v/jabari in a close one __________________ Dummies finna die if they coming into mine boastin Twin glocks'll spark. Waterpark; everybody running when the slides open

03-28-2019, 11:16 AM	#2
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,374 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309744	Got you murdered Black, it’s a death sentence however I word it The Shottys undisputed: when the 12 delivers it’s a unanimous verdict.

03-28-2019, 06:00 PM	#3
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764499	I pop the tool! Get the drop on Plot then I’m ridin through/ Shoot up ya neighborhood! The choppa fuck up the block like a karate move/

03-29-2019, 05:02 AM	#6
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,251 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535868	I liked Plots here good flip on that 12 concept. Bit surprising JB's liked the concept but shoulda ended like a move or something specific imo, still ok line.. Vote-Plot

03-29-2019, 09:04 AM	#8
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899383	Plot was cool honestly, jb had a fresh twist on a played concept n god wording Jabari Black dub

03-29-2019, 01:36 PM	#9
White LGI Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2019 Posts: 2,058 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Best I seen so far....dope shit guys...but I liked plot better....I hate a loser has to come from this though, prolly the best lines of the week

03-30-2019, 07:26 PM	#12
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	I got Plot here with the jury concept

03-30-2019, 07:52 PM	#13
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601538	I like Jabari a bit more. Just coming down to taste n how he flipped his concept but this is a strong botw contender

03-31-2019, 06:13 PM	#19
Suthaveli Prayers won't help. Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: Baltimore, Md Posts: 851 Battle Record: 7-9 Rep Power: 16534023	I like plot line better fr. Much more clever & vicious. Mvgt plot