CONTENDERS MATCH: Blue Bayou vs BodySnatcher - BB WINS

[bleak]

SOL Season 1
Wk 5

Due Thursday, Feb 21

Minimum - 12 lines
Max - 24 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree
24hr ext to be granted by opponent

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
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[BodySnatcher]

16.

[Blue Bayou]

20

Click clack & gluck

[Blue Bayou]

Sent 24 to Sharp w/ the extra day.. hope that's cool

gluck

[BodySnatcher]

No site to site swaying my nigga.

G shit

A diagnosis report says u need a mental win to pencil in,
But even gamblin doctors got u 'takin more Body shots' than a diabetic usin insulin
U know I'm surgical w/this bitch so if I let the .44 get cynic,
Y'all gonna see me put this 'bulldog in a vet face' like he works at a pet clinic
U never 'benefactor'...ur cuzz will find u in a spud location,
After I blow the snub nose in Blueface this cripple need more than a blood donation
His bay needs floodgates. Yeah, she was born in Canada,
But she got so wet...that her 'canal was overflowing' like a storm in Panama
I can 'empty a bottleneck' & end the myth of a has been,
Or use a scalpel to tear his flesh until 'I have Blue skin' like Will Smith in Aladdin
I saw Blue stopped at a green light...proof of his old age,
So I stuck my 'arm out the window & let a bird fly' like driving w/ road rage
Then I saw his crib but I kept the wheels turnin as I drove,
Pulled out the uzi & 'aired out his house' like food was burnin on the stove
Or I'll hide in his house. The boy is toast if he's wandering,
Cuz I'ma start 'clapping from the closet'...like the ghost in The Conjuring
He could dip out the back door...get a strap to rally back,
& still manage to 'catch a stray behind his house' like adopting an alley cat
Ur the drunk type. I fucked ur wife & she left in amazement,
But she had so much 'water damage to her walls'...she'll need more than a 'stud replacement'
Fuck prewrittens from a fossil. I'm strap w/a later made model,
So this lever action rifle can a leave a 'bolt thru a G' like a Gatorade bottle
MF a BB gun. I'ma drop this crook, how can he not be shook,
Especially after I let all these bullets 'jump off the page' like I wrote a pop-up book

[Sharp]

BodySnatcher
It's not dead...yall are just old and don't like change, gun bars, a different style than your used to. IF yall watch battle rap you'd know what style is popular now. Y'all been boarding for decades of course it's dead to you but for the rest of us Rap battles will never die.

^Interesting take for a guy that does nothing but flip old concepts..

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i laugh at ya quotes. always “blastin the toast w/ a mack n’ a scope”
yaaa you know all about Gay-Jizz.. Dyna leaves his in the back of your throat
he’s got a girl for “appearances” only. every week he brags of the pig..
but i dunno why BodyBuilder up.. at first glance u’d swear it was Bags in a wig
this newb is a name?! plzz if he shows against Seth then this dude is insane
he’s proven a lame...Nukka have em looking more stupid then a white boy usin the slang
pussy ur too broke to fire pistols. kill the noise about this piece ya point
how you got Fire-Power?!! you ain’t even the Manager at a fuckin pizza joint
he’s BARELY scrapin by. every outfit on this scrub is grimm
we never see Body Shop. even Allen Knight’s job would be a step up for him
claimed u’d body Zelph. you told every NCG from Philly ta Harlem
but ‘the plan didn't work out’ cuz Fyre was non-existent.. you Billy McFarland
& he can threaten my wife. but i’ll spoil all these fakers plans..
if he approaches Bae Area i'm ‘puttin chrome on Body’ faster than a Raiders Fan
i’ma Baller. known to wreck leagues passin dimes from the key
Body’s known to rec leagues too.. he shoots a couple airballs then quietly leaves
u’ll die crippin. twenty gats across the table will make you a crime victim
my whole Family Bucket…step & we'll ‘reach for a Piece’ that'll leave u Fried Chicken
this beast a boss. Peros got em lyin face up w/ some sheets across
‘Ayp-run on em Strapped’ leavin his Chest Red.. for once it isn’t Pizza Sauce
grab the tool n’ snub. beat ya w/ ur own style if u wanna start duelin bud
wet ya whip while u drive ur nieces to school.. now there’s really a Carpoolin Blood
spray a round & slay this clown. yaa i’m known to get my K on baby
hit em on the front porch – ‘Cause-medics to show up at his Door’ no Avon Lady

[Blas]

A diagnosis report says u need a mental win to pencil in,
But even gamblin doctors got u 'takin more Body shots' than a diabetic usin insulin
connection is obv but i like the dbl wordplay off ur name
U know I'm surgical w/this bitch so if I let the .44 get cynic,
Y'all gonna see me put this 'bulldog in a vet face' like he works at a pet clinic
gunplay is ok but vet shit is just absurdly played, ok flip
U never 'benefactor'...ur cuzz will find u in a spud location,
After I blow the snub nose in Blueface this cripple need more than a blood donation
lolz kk
His bay needs floodgates. Yeah, she was born in Canada,
But she got so wet...that her 'canal was overflowing' like a storm in Panama
meh it's ok
I can 'empty a bottleneck' & end the myth of a has been,
Or use a scalpel to tear his flesh until 'I have Blue skin' like Will Smith in Aladdin
lol alright
I saw Blue stopped at a green light...proof of his old age,
So I stuck my 'arm out the window & let a bird fly' like driving w/ road rage
haha dece
Then I saw his crib but I kept the wheels turnin as I drove,
Pulled out the uzi & 'aired out his house' like food was burnin on the stove
lmfaooo so simple but i like it
Or I'll hide in his house. The boy is toast if he's wandering,
Cuz I'ma start 'clapping from the closet'...like the ghost in The Conjuring
lmfaowtf, feels like such a random concept but it's funny
He could dip out the back door...get a strap to rally back,
& still manage to 'catch a stray behind his house' like adopting an alley cat
i like it
Ur the drunk type. I fucked ur wife & she left in amazement,
But she had so much 'water damage to her walls'...she'll need more than a 'stud replacement'
really like the concept, the wording is ok
Fuck prewrittens from a fossil. I'm strap w/a later made model,
So this lever action rifle can a leave a 'bolt thru a G' like a Gatorade bottle
i really hate "g" flips but this was rather solid i wont lie
MF a BB gun. I'ma drop this crook, how can he not be shook,
Especially after I let all these bullets 'jump off the page' like I wrote a pop-up book
meh ok at best

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i laugh at ya quotes. always “blastin the toast w/ a mack n’ a scope”
yaaa you know all about Gay-Jizz.. Dyna leaves his in the back of your throat
lol ok
he’s got a girl for “appearances” only. every week he brags of the pig..
but i dunno why BodyBuilder up.. at first glance u’d swear it was Bags in a wig
ooook this was dope
this newb is a name?! plzz if he shows against Seth then this dude is insane
he’s proven a lame...Nukka have em looking more stupid then a white boy usin the slang
it's funny but doesn't hit very hard to me
pussy ur too broke to fire pistols. kill the noise about this piece ya point
how you got Fire-Power?!! you ain’t even the Manager at a fuckin pizza joint
lmfao, cool
he’s BARELY scrapin by. every outfit on this scrub is grimm
we never see Body Shop. even Allen Knight’s job would be a step up for him
simple but cool
claimed u’d body Zelph. you told every NCG from Philly ta Harlem
but ‘the plan didn't work out’ cuz Fyre was non-existent.. you Billy McFarland
reasonable
& he can threaten my wife. but i’ll spoil all these fakers plans..
if he approaches Bae Area i'm ‘puttin chrome on Body’ faster than a Raiders Fan
solid
i’ma Baller. known to wreck leagues passin dimes from the key
Body’s known to rec leagues too.. he shoots a couple airballs then quietly leaves
hahahaha yeah, LOTB
u’ll die crippin. twenty gats across the table will make you a crime victim
my whole Family Bucket…step & we'll ‘reach for a Piece’ that'll leave u Fried Chicken
dope as fuck
this beast a boss. Peros got em lyin face up w/ some sheets across
‘Ayp-run on em Strapped’ leavin his Chest Red.. for once it isn’t Pizza Sauce
very sick concept
grab the tool n’ snub. beat ya w/ ur own style if u wanna start duelin bud
wet ya whip while u drive ur nieces to school.. now there’s really a Carpoolin Blood
cool
spray a round & slay this clown. yaa i’m known to get my K on baby
hit em on the front porch – ‘Cause-medics to show up at his Door’ no Avon Lady
solid

At first I felt like it was going to be close when I read body's verse then had read like halfway into blues but blue at the end just went absolutely insane. rec league was LOTB to me but a few bars after that could have been considered. Both are very dope but blue just won this to me.

v/ Blue

[Resin M-I-C]

[QUOTE=Blas;727688]A diagnosis report says u need a mental win to pencil in,
But even gamblin doctors got u 'takin more Body shots' than a diabetic usin insulin
too basic, could’ve been more creative..
U know I'm surgical w/this bitch so if I let the .44 get cynic,
Y'all gonna see me put this 'bulldog in a vet face' like he works at a pet clinic
seen this flip, this was too straightforward and seen it comin
U never 'benefactor'...ur cuzz will find u in a spud location,
After I blow the snub nose in Blueface this cripple need more than a blood donation
ok, better
His bay needs floodgates. Yeah, she was born in Canada,
But she got so wet...that her 'canal was overflowing' like a storm in Panama
canal overflowing like a panama storm, that’s lazy
I can 'empty a bottleneck' & end the myth of a has been,
Or use a scalpel to tear his flesh until 'I have Blue skin' like Will Smith in Aladdin
ehh
I saw Blue stopped at a green light...proof of his old age,
So I stuck my 'arm out the window & let a bird fly' like driving w/ road rage
heard somethin similar before but finally, this was Fire
Then I saw his crib but I kept the wheels turnin as I drove,
Pulled out the uzi & 'aired out his house' like food was burnin on the stove
another basic punch, too simple.. and this is alot of “like” punches
Or I'll hide in his house. The boy is toast if he's wandering,
Cuz I'ma start 'clapping from the closet'...like the ghost in The Conjuring
that’s a bangerrr
He could dip out the back door...get a strap to rally back,
& still manage to 'catch a stray behind his house' like adopting an alley cat
another basic “like” punch, shit is too simple.. and this was wackjuice
Ur the drunk type. I fucked ur wife & she left in amazement,
But she had so much 'water damage to her walls'...she'll need more than a 'stud replacement'
not feelin this tbh
Fuck prewrittens from a fossil. I'm strap w/a later made model,
So this lever action rifle can a leave a 'bolt thru a G' like a Gatorade bottle
this was a banger, but either real deal or fresco dropped somethin real similar
MF a BB gun. I'ma drop this crook, how can he not be shook,
Especially after I let all these bullets 'jump off the page' like I wrote a pop-up book
played

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i laugh at ya quotes. always “blastin the toast w/ a mack n’ a scope”
yaaa you know all about Gay-Jizz.. Dyna leaves his in the back of your throat
funny but kinda corny
he’s got a girl for “appearances” only. every week he brags of the pig..
but i dunno why BodyBuilder up.. at first glance u’d swear it was Bags in a wig
nahh, but u right bags is ugly af.. jk
this newb is a name?! plzz if he shows against Seth then this dude is insane
he’s proven a lame...Nukka have em looking more stupid then a white boy usin the slang
this was light
pussy ur too broke to fire pistols. kill the noise about this piece ya point
how you got Fire-Power?!! you ain’t even the Manager at a fuckin pizza joint
just got the personal, went from light to cool
he’s BARELY scrapin by. every outfit on this scrub is grimm
we never see Body Shop. even Allen Knight’s job would be a step up for him
ok, u on that comedy tip, nothin crazy
claimed u’d body Zelph. you told every NCG from Philly ta Harlem
but ‘the plan didn't work out’ cuz Fyre was non-existent.. you Billy McFarland
seen like 3 of these already
& he can threaten my wife. but i’ll spoil all these fakers plans..
if he approaches Bae Area i'm ‘puttin chrome on Body’ faster than a Raiders Fan
there we go, that hit
i’ma Baller. known to wreck leagues passin dimes from the key
Body’s known to rec leagues too.. he shoots a couple airballs then quietly leaves
banger again, warming up
u’ll die crippin. twenty gats across the table will make you a crime victim
my whole Family Bucket…step & we'll ‘reach for a Piece’ that'll leave u Fried Chicken
this was cool, seen bucket lines before n this was ok
this beast a boss. Peros got em lyin face up w/ some sheets across
‘Ayp-run on em Strapped’ leavin his Chest Red.. for once it isn’t Pizza Sauce
clever, a lil funny but also a lil light
grab the tool n’ snub. beat ya w/ ur own style if u wanna start duelin bud
wet ya whip while u drive ur nieces to school.. now there’s really a Carpoolin Blood
concept is nasty, wording threw me off a bit and didnt hit for me
spray a round & slay this clown. yaa i’m known to get my K on baby
hit em on the front porch – ‘Cause-medics to show up at his Door’ no Avon Lady
yeah thats a good close



body had 3 bars that were heavy.. but them lows were realll lows.. i’m big on creativity and some of then lines fell flat.. blue started off slow, i thought body was gonna take it with his best 3 bars but then blue picked up and brought 3 lines i really fucked with.. what seperated this for me was more lines i really disliked in the verse, and that was body’s verse.. sooo in a close one

V- Blue

[DynamiCz]

A diagnosis report says u need a mental win to pencil in,
But even gamblin doctors got u 'takin more Body shots' than a diabetic usin insulin

Ok opener here

U know I'm surgical w/this bitch so if I let the .44 get cynic,
Y'all gonna see me put this 'bulldog in a vet face' like he works at a pet clinic

Ehh, the vet face make the punch here to particular

U never 'benefactor'...ur cuzz will find u in a spud location,
After I blow the snub nose in Blueface this cripple need more than a blood donation

Fiya right here

His bay needs floodgates. Yeah, she was born in Canada,
But she got so wet...that her 'canal was overflowing' like a storm in Panama

Could have been worded way better imo, lacks creativity

I can 'empty a bottleneck' & end the myth of a has been,
Or use a scalpel to tear his flesh until 'I have Blue skin' like Will Smith in Aladdin

Nice

I saw Blue stopped at a green light...proof of his old age,
So I stuck my 'arm out the window & let a bird fly' like driving w/ road rage

Fiya

Then I saw his crib but I kept the wheels turnin as I drove,
Pulled out the uzi & 'aired out his house' like food was burnin on the stove

A little to simple

Or I'll hide in his house. The boy is toast if he's wandering,
Cuz I'ma start 'clapping from the closet'...like the ghost in The Conjuring

Nice

He could dip out the back door...get a strap to rally back,
& still manage to 'catch a stray behind his house' like adopting an alley cat

Couldn't get with this one to much

Ur the drunk type. I fucked ur wife & she left in amazement,
But she had so much 'water damage to her walls'...she'll need more than a 'stud replacement'

Lol funny

Fuck prewrittens from a fossil. I'm strap w/a later made model,
So this lever action rifle can a leave a 'bolt thru a G" like a Gatorade bottle

Nice

MF a BB gun. Ima drop this crook, how can he not be shook,
Especially after I let all these bullets 'jump off da page like I wrote a pop-up book

This was coo



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i laugh at ya quotes. always “blastin the toast w/ a mack n’ a scope”
yaaa you know all about Gay-Jizz.. Dyna leaves his in the back of your throat

Gay opener from Blue per usual lol, funny but light

he’s got a girl for “appearances” only. every week he brags of the pig..
but i dunno why BodyBuilder up.. at first glance u’d swear it was Bags in a wig

Lol funny again not heavy tho

this newb is a name?! plzz if he shows against Seth then this dude is insane
he’s proven a lame...Nukka have em looking more stupid then a white boy usin the slang

Didn't like this to much

pussy ur too broke to fire pistols. kill the noise about this piece ya point
how you got Fire-Power?!! you ain’t even the Manager at a fuckin pizza joint

This is fire!

he’s BARELY scrapin by. every outfit on this scrub is grimm
we never see Body Shop. even Allen Knight’s job would be a step up for him

Nice

claimed u’d body Zelph. you told every NCG from Philly ta Harlem
but ‘the plan didn't work out’ cuz Fyre was non-existent.. you Billy McFarland

Lol my Fyre bar was better, this is ok tho

& he can threaten my wife. but i’ll spoil all these fakers plans..
if he approaches Bae Area i'm ‘puttin chrome on Body’ faster than a Raiders Fan

Fiya

i’ma Baller. known to wreck leagues passin dimes from the key
Body’s known to rec leagues too.. he shoots a couple airballs then quietly leaves

Lol ok

u’ll die crippin. twenty gats across the table will make you a crime victim
my whole Family Bucket…step & we'll ‘reach for a Piece’ that'll leave u Fried Chicken

Twork had a similiar concept, nice tho

this beast a boss. Peros got em lyin face up w/ some sheets across
‘Ayp-run on em Strapped’ leavin his Chest Red.. for once it isn’t Pizza Sauce

Ehh, didn't like this one

grab the tool n’ snub. beat ya w/ ur own style if u wanna start duelin bud
wet ya whip while u drive ur nieces to school.. now there’s really a Carpoolin Blood

Fiya

spray a round & slay this clown. yaa i’m known to get my K on baby
hit em on the front porch – ‘Cause-medics to show up at his Door’ no Avon Lady

Nice


This a good read on both parts, I got Blue edging here with more consistent hits then misses. Body had the will power but he faded in & out where Blue was back to back with his hits. I got Blue edging this one.

V-Blue

[Ryno]

B. Snatch-

Pet clinic
Blueface (nice)
Aladin
Road rage
Conjuring

B. Bayou-

Gages (lol)
Bodybuilder
Pizza Joint
Body shop
Billy Mcfarland
Raiders fan
Rec leagues (lol)
pizza sauce
car pool

v. BB...fire battle from both. I thought blue was more consistent as a whole. There were a few lines from snatch i didnt enjoy (pop up book, stray cat, stove) but it was still a good verse and would of beat most. Good job fellas

[Saint]

BS was up n down to me, i'd see a good line then a line like stray cats or pet clinic.. you had a lot of similies and direct punches. some were coo - g bolt/blueface/bird fly/conjuring
stud concept needed revision. Dynamic wording & execution seemed repetitive to me.

Blue was pretty consistent then heated up halfway.. i had a carpool bloodline concept months back but couldn't get the wording. Good job it was cool lol...

standouts: fire power, rec leagues, raiders fan, body shop was coo, and avon.. opener was ok not a fan of jizz/gay lines so direct lol

Vote-Blue

[bleak]

5-0 Blue wins