Arbitrary..

Mr. J · 05-27-2018, 01:38 AM

Homey downgrade, I got the newest view in HD
boys used to play me but now they say "when we gon hang G?"
Its always the same thing knowing deep down they hate me.
degenerates with ADD living life for 30+ acting 18.
Let the bowl glow, point you to the light to phone home.
speak & spell out the whole flow, burn out the ozone.
show you how these average Joe's should bounce like Pogo
but they act like they dont know, comparing size is homo.
you still living local, now tell me how the jokes go...
leave the tracks & follow your own road..watch where you wont go.
pour some tea with a tall glass of OJ, sizing up your whole frame
this a simp son..imagine how we can play out this old game.
horsin around in Ralph Lauren, the new wave BoJack Horsemen
killing you pill poppers & whoever let you throwback whores in..
exaggerate progress with naivety, now try being me..
now they start believing me, peep it uneasily...
rewind it back & watch it again, wherever the topic could end.
you could mock it again, then go and remarket the trend..
spent time off with my feet up, while you fessing up to Jesus
have any of yall seen this? the reruns show whats happening..
look upon these average men...

Mr. J · 06-04-2018, 03:19 AM

a little bump

Exis · 06-04-2018, 08:45 AM

I gotchu brethren, I'll edit with feed when I wake...it's late here now.

Exis · 06-04-2018, 11:30 PM

Let the bowl glow, point you to the light to phone home.
speak & spell out the whole flow, burn out the ozone.
show you how these average Joe's should bounce like Pogo
but they act like they dont know, comparing size is homo.

^^Lol nice...

This was good fam...multies were really slick imo, nothin' seemed forced...As a whole I like it, shit resonated no doubt.

Tight drop man... stay upright.

Pharaohs Army · 06-08-2018, 12:28 AM

These are some pretty good rhymes.

I don't know what you were trying to say overall, but I guess maybe that's why it is titled Arbitrary.

This is a cool little piece but nothing compared to some competition verses I've seen from you in the past.

Dude I literally forgot how to freestyle so maybe if I read more verses like this and your cypher shit maybe it will come back to me.

Pharaohs Army · 06-08-2018, 12:53 AM

I didn't like the last line.

05-27-2018, 01:38 AM	#1
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	Arbitrary.. Homey downgrade, I got the newest view in HD boys used to play me but now they say "when we gon hang G?" Its always the same thing knowing deep down they hate me. degenerates with ADD living life for 30+ acting 18. Let the bowl glow, point you to the light to phone home. speak & spell out the whole flow, burn out the ozone. show you how these average Joe's should bounce like Pogo but they act like they dont know, comparing size is homo. you still living local, now tell me how the jokes go... leave the tracks & follow your own road..watch where you wont go. pour some tea with a tall glass of OJ, sizing up your whole frame this a simp son..imagine how we can play out this old game. horsin around in Ralph Lauren, the new wave BoJack Horsemen killing you pill poppers & whoever let you throwback whores in.. exaggerate progress with naivety, now try being me.. now they start believing me, peep it uneasily... rewind it back & watch it again, wherever the topic could end. you could mock it again, then go and remarket the trend.. spent time off with my feet up, while you fessing up to Jesus have any of yall seen this? the reruns show whats happening.. look upon these average men... __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

06-04-2018, 03:19 AM	#2
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	a little bump __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

06-04-2018, 08:45 AM	#3
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	I gotchu brethren, I'll edit with feed when I wake...it's late here now.

06-04-2018, 11:30 PM	#4
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Let the bowl glow, point you to the light to phone home. speak & spell out the whole flow, burn out the ozone. show you how these average Joe's should bounce like Pogo but they act like they dont know, comparing size is homo. ^^Lol nice... This was good fam...multies were really slick imo, nothin' seemed forced...As a whole I like it, shit resonated no doubt. Tight drop man... stay upright.

06-08-2018, 12:28 AM	#5
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	These are some pretty good rhymes. I don't know what you were trying to say overall, but I guess maybe that's why it is titled Arbitrary. This is a cool little piece but nothing compared to some competition verses I've seen from you in the past. Dude I literally forgot how to freestyle so maybe if I read more verses like this and your cypher shit maybe it will come back to me.

06-08-2018, 12:53 AM	#6
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	I didn't like the last line.