Profit [vs] Lyfzza Gamble - PROFIT WINS

Amen · 03-06-2018, 09:09 AM

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@Profit @Lyfzza Gamble

Profit · 03-08-2018, 06:53 AM

Check, going 8

Profit · 03-08-2018, 07:05 AM

Fuck bettin, if u throw money down I'll take it & watch this guy pitch a fit
Lyfzza gamble till I snatch his bread & watch'em cry.. maaan lyf is a BITCH!
I ain't gonna lie kid I'm sick, I haven't even tried & it's beginning to please me
How I can write effortless verses for these clowns.... & still win um so easy
Whoever makes these matches, I hope that dude gets clapped
See what I'm doin fag, beatin u dissin other people just to prove ur wack
& if u happen to show, I will leave this verse
Not that I'm feelin good about these bars.. but confident ur best r even worse

Lyfzaa Gamble · 03-09-2018, 07:10 AM

Check gl

Lyfzaa Gamble · 03-09-2018, 07:52 AM

vs Profit.

yo,

Don't take anything he says serious, his words differ than whats really the whole picture.
so this has nothing to do with making money off selling toilets; its just that Profitable shitter.
the truth is hard to swallow for this mad asshole, try it.. i bet voters laugh at you.
its like you can't handle the Pinot Grij in this Habitat; so the outcome will be the same as that battle.
I'll make an exception if you win, but instead of u testing, accept this.. My two cents.
Im telling u, Prospect u late; n maybe you'll be on time to learn this Lesson in LOSING.
There never beneFit with talent that I've met wit shit..so unless you in the bracket...
U got no shot
Cus, after this you'll see a Profit lost with the wits of a Gamble...i guess that's u that desperate fool that can't bet.

Joe Boston · 03-09-2018, 04:31 PM

Profit

Fuck bettin, if u throw money down I'll take it & watch this guy pitch a fit
Lyfzza gamble till I snatch his bread & watch'em cry.. maaan lyf is a BITCH!
lmao dope flip

I ain't gonna lie kid I'm sick, I haven't even tried & it's beginning to please me
How I can write effortless verses for these clowns.... & still win um so easy
more of a statement hit

Whoever makes these matches, I hope that dude gets clapped
See what I'm doin fag, beatin u dissin other people just to prove ur wack
simple hit little jab

& if u happen to show, I will leave this verse
Not that I'm feelin good about these bars.. but confident ur best r even worse
nah

Lyfza

Don't take anything he says serious, his words differ than whats really the whole picture.
so this has nothing to do with making money off selling toilets; its just that Profitable shitter.
lol

the truth is hard to swallow for this mad asshole, try it.. i bet voters laugh at you.
its like you can't handle the Pinot Grij in this Habitat; so the outcome will be the same as that battle.
nah

I'll make an exception if you win, but instead of u testing, accept this.. My two cents.
Im telling u, Prospect u late; n maybe you'll be on time to learn this Lesson in LOSING.
nah and the rhyme scheme is definitely off

There never beneFit with talent that I've met wit shit..so unless you in the bracket...
U got no shot
Cus, after this you'll see a Profit lost with the wits of a Gamble...i guess that's u that desperate fool that can't bet.
nah

Lyfzaa rhyming is definitely off for you and I felt u had a bunch of filler your opener was cool then it just went downhill. Profit liked his opener I felt the impact of his bars didn't have sting but he had the concept down few light jabs to get him the win

V/Profit

Schadenfreude · 03-09-2018, 07:56 PM

VOTE PROFIT
Profit was a lot cleaner w/ his punches, nothing crazy tbh, just more effective than his opponent.
Lyfzza's you really need to work on the execute of your wording. Long-winded & predictable concepts.

DynamiCz · 03-09-2018, 10:20 PM

Fuck bettin, if u throw money down I'll take it & watch this guy pitch a fit
Lyfzza gamble till I snatch his bread & watch'em cry.. maaan lyf is a BITCH!

Dope flip

I ain't gonna lie kid I'm sick, I haven't even tried & it's beginning to please me
How I can write effortless verses for these clowns.... & still win um so easy

Lol

& if u happen to show, I will leave this verse
Not that I'm feelin good about these bars.. but confident ur best r even worse

ok

-------

Don't take anything he says serious, his words differ than whats really the whole picture.
so this has nothing to do with making money off selling toilets; its just that Profitable shitter

Decent

Gamble I see where you going with your rhyme pattern, but it just kinda makes it difficult for some to read. Still your wording needs work, buts its all good we all need improvement bro!

V-Profit

2tripple0 · 03-10-2018, 06:16 AM

Fuck bettin, if u throw money down I'll take it & watch this guy pitch a fit
Lyfzza gamble till I snatch his bread & watch'em cry.. maaan lyf is a BITCH!
eh I guess
I ain't gonna lie kid I'm sick, I haven't even tried & it's beginning to please me
How I can write effortless verses for these clowns.... & still win um so easy
okay I guess
Whoever makes these matches, I hope that dude gets clapped
See what I'm doin fag, beatin u dissin other people just to prove ur wack
nah too simple
& if u happen to show, I will leave this verse
Not that I'm feelin good about these bars.. but confident ur best r even worse
again too simple

vs.

Don't take anything he says serious, his words differ than whats really the whole picture.
so this has nothing to do with making money off selling toilets; its just that Profitable shitter.
nah
the truth is hard to swallow for this mad asshole, try it.. i bet voters laugh at you.
its like you can't handle the Pinot Grij in this Habitat; so the outcome will be the same as that battle.
that wasn't bad
I'll make an exception if you win, but instead of u testing, accept this.. My two cents.
Im telling u, Prospect u late; n maybe you'll be on time to learn this Lesson in LOSING.
okay good wording
There never beneFit with talent that I've met wit shit..so unless you in the bracket...
U got no shot
Cus, after this you'll see a Profit lost with the wits of a Gamble...i guess that's u that desperate fool that can't bet.
not bad good wording again

overall: thought lyfas gamble had better attempts whereas the other dude was too simple and just didn't hit hard enough so yeah...

vote: lifes a gamble

Cred · 03-10-2018, 10:13 AM

Fuck bettin, if u throw money down I'll take it & watch this guy pitch a fit
Lyfzza gamble till I snatch his bread & watch'em cry.. maaan lyf is a BITCH!

vs

I'll make an exception if you win, but instead of u testing, accept this.. My two cents.
Im telling u, Prospect u late; n maybe you'll be on time to learn this Lesson in LOSING.

Not the best battle but I guess I gotta start here. Both came way to basic, statementish and bland verses. I only liked 2 lines from each verse and tbh I liked Profits bar a bit better. Step it up next week fellas.

Vote / Profit

03-06-2018, 09:09 AM	#1
Amen As-salamu alaykum! Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 8,462 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Season 6 Rep Power: 0	Profit [vs] Lyfzza Gamble - PROFIT WINS Rules Due Dates: Verses are due Thursday Mar 8 and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are ONLY 24 hours. Failure to post with in 24 hours of original deadline WILL result in a DQ - no exceptions. Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC @Profit @Lyfzza Gamble

03-09-2018, 07:56 PM	#7
Schadenfreude Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!! Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 1,408 Battle Record: 42-22 Champed - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Tag Team Titles - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 21049084	VOTE PROFIT Profit was a lot cleaner w/ his punches, nothing crazy tbh, just more effective than his opponent. Lyfzza's you really need to work on the execute of your wording. Long-winded & predictable concepts. __________________ Aali hupatikana kwa ghali.

03-09-2018, 10:20 PM	#8
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829181	Fuck bettin, if u throw money down I'll take it & watch this guy pitch a fit Lyfzza gamble till I snatch his bread & watch'em cry.. maaan lyf is a BITCH! Dope flip I ain't gonna lie kid I'm sick, I haven't even tried & it's beginning to please me How I can write effortless verses for these clowns.... & still win um so easy Lol & if u happen to show, I will leave this verse Not that I'm feelin good about these bars.. but confident ur best r even worse ok ------- Don't take anything he says serious, his words differ than whats really the whole picture. so this has nothing to do with making money off selling toilets; its just that Profitable shitter Decent Gamble I see where you going with your rhyme pattern, but it just kinda makes it difficult for some to read. Still your wording needs work, buts its all good we all need improvement bro! V-Profit __________________ ...ThA New ErA...

03-10-2018, 06:16 AM	#9
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	Fuck bettin, if u throw money down I'll take it & watch this guy pitch a fit Lyfzza gamble till I snatch his bread & watch'em cry.. maaan lyf is a BITCH! eh I guess I ain't gonna lie kid I'm sick, I haven't even tried & it's beginning to please me How I can write effortless verses for these clowns.... & still win um so easy okay I guess Whoever makes these matches, I hope that dude gets clapped See what I'm doin fag, beatin u dissin other people just to prove ur wack nah too simple & if u happen to show, I will leave this verse Not that I'm feelin good about these bars.. but confident ur best r even worse again too simple vs. Don't take anything he says serious, his words differ than whats really the whole picture. so this has nothing to do with making money off selling toilets; its just that Profitable shitter. nah the truth is hard to swallow for this mad asshole, try it.. i bet voters laugh at you. its like you can't handle the Pinot Grij in this Habitat; so the outcome will be the same as that battle. that wasn't bad I'll make an exception if you win, but instead of u testing, accept this.. My two cents. Im telling u, Prospect u late; n maybe you'll be on time to learn this Lesson in LOSING. okay good wording There never beneFit with talent that I've met wit shit..so unless you in the bracket... U got no shot Cus, after this you'll see a Profit lost with the wits of a Gamble...i guess that's u that desperate fool that can't bet. not bad good wording again overall: thought lyfas gamble had better attempts whereas the other dude was too simple and just didn't hit hard enough so yeah... vote: lifes a gamble __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/

03-08-2018, 06:53 AM	#2
Profit Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2017 Posts: 106 Battle Record: 10-8 Rep Power: 53069	Check, going 8

03-08-2018, 07:05 AM	#3
Profit Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2017 Posts: 106 Battle Record: 10-8 Rep Power: 53069	Fuck bettin, if u throw money down I'll take it & watch this guy pitch a fit Lyfzza gamble till I snatch his bread & watch'em cry.. maaan lyf is a BITCH! I ain't gonna lie kid I'm sick, I haven't even tried & it's beginning to please me How I can write effortless verses for these clowns.... & still win um so easy Whoever makes these matches, I hope that dude gets clapped See what I'm doin fag, beatin u dissin other people just to prove ur wack & if u happen to show, I will leave this verse Not that I'm feelin good about these bars.. but confident ur best r even worse

03-09-2018, 04:31 PM	#6
Joe Boston Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 929 Battle Record: 8-11 Rep Power: 11092531	Profit Fuck bettin, if u throw money down I'll take it & watch this guy pitch a fit Lyfzza gamble till I snatch his bread & watch'em cry.. maaan lyf is a BITCH! lmao dope flip I ain't gonna lie kid I'm sick, I haven't even tried & it's beginning to please me How I can write effortless verses for these clowns.... & still win um so easy more of a statement hit Whoever makes these matches, I hope that dude gets clapped See what I'm doin fag, beatin u dissin other people just to prove ur wack simple hit little jab & if u happen to show, I will leave this verse Not that I'm feelin good about these bars.. but confident ur best r even worse nah Lyfza Don't take anything he says serious, his words differ than whats really the whole picture. so this has nothing to do with making money off selling toilets; its just that Profitable shitter. lol the truth is hard to swallow for this mad asshole, try it.. i bet voters laugh at you. its like you can't handle the Pinot Grij in this Habitat; so the outcome will be the same as that battle. nah I'll make an exception if you win, but instead of u testing, accept this.. My two cents. Im telling u, Prospect u late; n maybe you'll be on time to learn this Lesson in LOSING. nah and the rhyme scheme is definitely off There never beneFit with talent that I've met wit shit..so unless you in the bracket... U got no shot Cus, after this you'll see a Profit lost with the wits of a Gamble...i guess that's u that desperate fool that can't bet. nah Lyfzaa rhyming is definitely off for you and I felt u had a bunch of filler your opener was cool then it just went downhill. Profit liked his opener I felt the impact of his bars didn't have sting but he had the concept down few light jabs to get him the win V/Profit

03-10-2018, 10:13 AM	#10
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899383	Fuck bettin, if u throw money down I'll take it & watch this guy pitch a fit Lyfzza gamble till I snatch his bread & watch'em cry.. maaan lyf is a BITCH! vs I'll make an exception if you win, but instead of u testing, accept this.. My two cents. Im telling u, Prospect u late; n maybe you'll be on time to learn this Lesson in LOSING. Not the best battle but I guess I gotta start here. Both came way to basic, statementish and bland verses. I only liked 2 lines from each verse and tbh I liked Profits bar a bit better. Step it up next week fellas. Vote / Profit