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As-salamu alaykum!
Join Date: May 2016
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Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC @Black Mask @Incredible Last edited by Amen; 03-07-2018 at 03:22 PM. |
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Join Date: Jan 2016
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Well just great, fucking check.
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This guy no showed in his battle vs. 2tripple0 last week, why did he even get put back in?
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Join Date: May 2013
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Wrong person. In.
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This guy. Ok
Last edited by Black Mask; 03-09-2018 at 01:57 PM. |
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I'm showing, ill post my verse tonight when I get off.
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Last edited by Incredible; 02-08-2020 at 09:08 AM. |
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#8 |
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Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 863
Battle Record: 23-19
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Pharmabro is pretty funny.
trump lines are hard to get good reactions cuz it's too easy/obvious. Rhyming 'battle' is another hard move because it's been done a lot Closer is dope. Opener and closer were good. I think you just gotta avoid going down familiar territory. Try some new ideas. Rhyming and construction were on point as well. Good shit.
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#9 |
Needs no introduction
Join Date: Mar 2016
Location: Toronto
Posts: 4,496
Battle Record: 29-31
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closer was gd
opener had a gd concept but wording killed it not feeling the in between |
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