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03-01-2018, 02:43 AM
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Cold World
Sitting here
writing about my life I talk to God to fade away strife I cry to get things off my chest Struggles and fight battles put to rest Devil try to break me down I show him I rise above God by my side He promised to guide me |
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03-01-2018, 06:01 AM
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White Earl
Join Date: Jan 2013
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03-01-2018, 02:51 PM
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03-04-2018, 09:12 PM
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rhyme capsule.
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if you wrote this off the cuff, i wouldn't be mad at it.
it still isn't good, but i'd understand. |
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