Pinot Grij (3-2) vs. Cred (3-2) - PINOT WINS

For Battling · 02-12-2018, 11:31 PM

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@Pinot Grij @Cred

Pinot Grij · 02-12-2018, 11:57 PM

16.

Cred · 02-13-2018, 07:45 AM

Cash.

Cred · 02-16-2018, 08:47 PM

Ok, ok...

Yea ur chick foreign but a couple Bucks ‘ll have her give me head all day
Cus that bitch a Greek freak.. n I’m dunkin balls all in her like this the NBA
I feel like Nick in the end zone - easy asl to fuck her off dat cheap liquor
Foles ain’t got shit on that trick the way she throw it back like a flea flicker
U and ur crew thuggin? Well it’s time to hit ur block wit tools dumpin
Retaliate.. n I’ll put more niggas BACK to sleep than a snooze button
I’m poppin! While U couldn’t even make it as Pulse; tough luck
It’s no wonder u named ur self after cheap wine Grij cus ur buzz sucks

Pinot Grij · 02-17-2018, 12:08 AM

Rearrange your face with a mallet, all that blood make a gory scene
Got Forensics tryin’ to point out your features like a mom at the Maury screen
U ain’t from Chicago, ur just a SUBURBAN KID with thug fantasies, and I don’t fear those
All this gangster talk is just an ‘Outlet’, cuz there’s nuthin else to do when you live near those
I guess The Windy City explains any social spot that you’re put in
Cuz Chi-Town is where you go to any time you’re forced to talk to a woman
Oh, u say u finally got a girl?? Well, I’ll give her a steak dinner then the dick after
I’ll pound the walls all night, like SHE did the day that you kidnapped her

2tripple0 · 02-17-2018, 12:11 PM

Yea ur chick foreign but a couple Bucks ‘ll have her give me head all day
Cus that bitch a Greek freak.. n I’m dunkin balls all in her like this the NBA
ehh okay I guess
I feel like Nick in the end zone - easy asl to fuck her off dat cheap liquor
Foles ain’t got shit on that trick the way she throw it back like a flea flicker
nah
U and ur crew thuggin? Well it’s time to hit ur block wit tools dumpin
Retaliate.. n I’ll put more niggas BACK to sleep than a snooze button
ok I guess
I’m poppin! While U couldn’t even make it as Pulse; tough luck
It’s no wonder u named ur self after cheap wine Grij cus ur buzz sucks
nah no hit here weak nameplay

vs.

Rearrange your face with a mallet, all that blood make a gory scene
Got Forensics tryin’ to point out your features like a mom at the Maury screen
ok worded better but still not the best punch to it
U ain’t from Chicago, ur just a SUBURBAN KID with thug fantasies, and I don’t fear those
All this gangster talk is just an ‘Outlet’, cuz there’s nuthin else to do when you live near those
nah didn't like this weak personal
I guess The Windy City explains any social spot that you’re put in
Cuz Chi-Town is where you go to any time you’re forced to talk to a woman
huh??
Oh, u say u finally got a girl?? Well, I’ll give her a steak dinner then the dick after
I’ll pound the walls all night, like SHE did the day that you kidnapped her
yeah that was alright I guess good flip sortve

overall: yeah I don't know you both kinda didn't go that hard for me personally but uhh yeah I'm going give it to pinot cause I just felt cred's concepts were a bit soft and or just not very good whereas pinot had better writing and like at least half way decent concepts... so yeah...

vote: pinot grij

DynamiCz · 02-17-2018, 01:22 PM

Yea ur chick foreign but a couple Bucks ‘ll have her give me head all day
Cus that bitch a Greek freak.. n I’m dunkin balls all in her like this the NBA

Coo...

U and ur crew thuggin? Well it’s time to hit ur block wit tools dumpin
Retaliate.. n I’ll put more niggas BACK to sleep than a snooze button

Lol...I like this

I’m poppin! While U couldn’t even make it as Pulse; tough luck
It’s no wonder u named ur self after cheap wine Grij cus ur buzz sucks

Another coo line

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Rearrange your face with a mallet, all that blood make a gory scene
Got Forensics tryin’ to point out your features like a mom at the Maury screen

Not hip to Maury punches, but this was nice...

U ain’t from Chicago, ur just a SUBURBAN KID with thug fantasies, and I don’t fear those
All this gangster talk is just an ‘Outlet’, cuz there’s nuthin else to do when you live near those

Nice....

Oh, u say u finally got a girl?? Well, I’ll give her a steak dinner then the dick after
I’ll pound the walls all night, like SHE did the day that you kidnapped her

Lmao...

I liked both verses, of course there is margin for work, but hey that's with every text emcee. I'm going w Pinot on this one. His lines were more direct.

Vote: Pinot

Letterman · 02-18-2018, 09:32 AM

Foles ain’t got shit on that trick the way she throw it back like a flea flicker
U and ur crew thuggin? Well it’s time to hit ur block wit tools dumpin
Retaliate.. n I’ll put more niggas BACK to sleep than a snooze button

Vs

Rearrange your face with a mallet, all that blood make a gory scene
Got Forensics tryin’ to point out your features like a mom at the Maury screen
I guess The Windy City explains any social spot that you’re put in
Cuz Chi-Town is where you go to any time you’re forced to talk to a woman
Oh, u say u finally got a girl?? Well, I’ll give her a steak dinner then the dick after
I’ll pound the walls all night, like SHE did the day that you kidnapped her

Really good read. Cred’s opener & closer were good concepts but they could’ve been executed better imo. Maury show was fire, lotb. I got Pinot taking this by a slight margin, one more quotable.

Nick James · 02-18-2018, 09:45 AM

Rearrange your face with a mallet, all that blood make a gory scene
Got Forensics tryin’ to point out your features like a mom at the Maury screen
U ain’t from Chicago, ur just a SUBURBAN KID with thug fantasies, and I don’t fear those
All this gangster talk is just an ‘Outlet’, cuz there’s nuthin else to do when you live near those

vs

U and ur crew thuggin? Well it’s time to hit ur block wit tools dumpin
Retaliate.. n I’ll put more niggas BACK to sleep than a snooze button
I’m poppin! While U couldn’t even make it as Pulse; tough luck
It’s no wonder u named ur self after cheap wine Grij cus ur buzz sucks

this battle was actually worth readin. that maury line was viscous tho hard to go against that it was the difference maker in this one.

vote - pinot

Profit · 02-18-2018, 04:34 PM

Cred
Snooze button n buzz were nice other two were dope concepts but lacked execution.. cool verse nonetheless

Pg

Maury screen outlet & pounds the walls all hit. thought u put up a good verse here.

3-2 in favor of Pinot close af tho.

Pinot

Enbombz · 02-18-2018, 08:57 PM

Cred - snooze (although it did feel a bit familiar)and cheap wine we're okay. Wasn't really feeling the other two. No disrespect, not one of your better verses though

Pinot- pretty solid verse here. Maury was alright, outlet was nice and kidnapped was a nice flip. Not many complaints chi town was better than cress other two as well so yeh v/ Pinot

02-12-2018, 11:31 PM	#1
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633916	Pinot Grij (3-2) vs. Cred (3-2) - PINOT WINS Rules Due Dates: Verses are due Thursday Feb 15th and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC @Pinot Grij @Cred

02-12-2018, 11:57 PM	#2
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	16. __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

02-16-2018, 08:47 PM	#4
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899383	LET ME TALK MY SHIT! Ok, ok... Yea ur chick foreign but a couple Bucks ‘ll have her give me head all day Cus that bitch a Greek freak.. n I’m dunkin balls all in her like this the NBA I feel like Nick in the end zone - easy asl to fuck her off dat cheap liquor Foles ain’t got shit on that trick the way she throw it back like a flea flicker U and ur crew thuggin? Well it’s time to hit ur block wit tools dumpin Retaliate.. n I’ll put more niggas BACK to sleep than a snooze button I’m poppin! While U couldn’t even make it as Pulse; tough luck It’s no wonder u named ur self after cheap wine Grij cus ur buzz sucks

02-17-2018, 12:08 AM	#5
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Rearrange your face with a mallet, all that blood make a gory scene Got Forensics tryin’ to point out your features like a mom at the Maury screen U ain’t from Chicago, ur just a SUBURBAN KID with thug fantasies, and I don’t fear those All this gangster talk is just an ‘Outlet’, cuz there’s nuthin else to do when you live near those I guess The Windy City explains any social spot that you’re put in Cuz Chi-Town is where you go to any time you’re forced to talk to a woman Oh, u say u finally got a girl?? Well, I’ll give her a steak dinner then the dick after I’ll pound the walls all night, like SHE did the day that you kidnapped her __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

02-17-2018, 12:11 PM	#6
2tripple0 death warmed over Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Downstairs illstreet dam Posts: 2,564 Battle Record: 6-21 Rep Power: 0	Yea ur chick foreign but a couple Bucks ‘ll have her give me head all day Cus that bitch a Greek freak.. n I’m dunkin balls all in her like this the NBA ehh okay I guess I feel like Nick in the end zone - easy asl to fuck her off dat cheap liquor Foles ain’t got shit on that trick the way she throw it back like a flea flicker nah U and ur crew thuggin? Well it’s time to hit ur block wit tools dumpin Retaliate.. n I’ll put more niggas BACK to sleep than a snooze button ok I guess I’m poppin! While U couldn’t even make it as Pulse; tough luck It’s no wonder u named ur self after cheap wine Grij cus ur buzz sucks nah no hit here weak nameplay vs. Rearrange your face with a mallet, all that blood make a gory scene Got Forensics tryin’ to point out your features like a mom at the Maury screen ok worded better but still not the best punch to it U ain’t from Chicago, ur just a SUBURBAN KID with thug fantasies, and I don’t fear those All this gangster talk is just an ‘Outlet’, cuz there’s nuthin else to do when you live near those nah didn't like this weak personal I guess The Windy City explains any social spot that you’re put in Cuz Chi-Town is where you go to any time you’re forced to talk to a woman huh?? Oh, u say u finally got a girl?? Well, I’ll give her a steak dinner then the dick after I’ll pound the walls all night, like SHE did the day that you kidnapped her yeah that was alright I guess good flip sortve overall: yeah I don't know you both kinda didn't go that hard for me personally but uhh yeah I'm going give it to pinot cause I just felt cred's concepts were a bit soft and or just not very good whereas pinot had better writing and like at least half way decent concepts... so yeah... vote: pinot grij __________________ https://soundcloud.com/user-876573949/ https://soundcloud.com/user-634430314/

02-13-2018, 07:45 AM	#3
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899383	Cash.

02-17-2018, 01:22 PM	#7
DynamiCz ..GunbaR MessiaH.. Join Date: Jan 2018 Location: GuN RanGe Posts: 762 Battle Record: 16-10 Champed - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 9829181	Yea ur chick foreign but a couple Bucks ‘ll have her give me head all day Cus that bitch a Greek freak.. n I’m dunkin balls all in her like this the NBA Coo... U and ur crew thuggin? Well it’s time to hit ur block wit tools dumpin Retaliate.. n I’ll put more niggas BACK to sleep than a snooze button Lol...I like this I’m poppin! While U couldn’t even make it as Pulse; tough luck It’s no wonder u named ur self after cheap wine Grij cus ur buzz sucks Another coo line ---------- Rearrange your face with a mallet, all that blood make a gory scene Got Forensics tryin’ to point out your features like a mom at the Maury screen Not hip to Maury punches, but this was nice... U ain’t from Chicago, ur just a SUBURBAN KID with thug fantasies, and I don’t fear those All this gangster talk is just an ‘Outlet’, cuz there’s nuthin else to do when you live near those Nice.... Oh, u say u finally got a girl?? Well, I’ll give her a steak dinner then the dick after I’ll pound the walls all night, like SHE did the day that you kidnapped her Lmao... I liked both verses, of course there is margin for work, but hey that's with every text emcee. I'm going w Pinot on this one. His lines were more direct. Vote: Pinot __________________ ...ThA New ErA...

02-18-2018, 09:32 AM	#8
Letterman Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 344 Battle Record: 15-11 Rep Power: 374704	Foles ain’t got shit on that trick the way she throw it back like a flea flicker U and ur crew thuggin? Well it’s time to hit ur block wit tools dumpin Retaliate.. n I’ll put more niggas BACK to sleep than a snooze button Vs Rearrange your face with a mallet, all that blood make a gory scene Got Forensics tryin’ to point out your features like a mom at the Maury screen I guess The Windy City explains any social spot that you’re put in Cuz Chi-Town is where you go to any time you’re forced to talk to a woman Oh, u say u finally got a girl?? Well, I’ll give her a steak dinner then the dick after I’ll pound the walls all night, like SHE did the day that you kidnapped her Really good read. Cred’s opener & closer were good concepts but they could’ve been executed better imo. Maury show was fire, lotb. I got Pinot taking this by a slight margin, one more quotable.

02-18-2018, 09:45 AM	#9
Nick James death to amen Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 1,279 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 7423718	Rearrange your face with a mallet, all that blood make a gory scene Got Forensics tryin’ to point out your features like a mom at the Maury screen U ain’t from Chicago, ur just a SUBURBAN KID with thug fantasies, and I don’t fear those All this gangster talk is just an ‘Outlet’, cuz there’s nuthin else to do when you live near those vs U and ur crew thuggin? Well it’s time to hit ur block wit tools dumpin Retaliate.. n I’ll put more niggas BACK to sleep than a snooze button I’m poppin! While U couldn’t even make it as Pulse; tough luck It’s no wonder u named ur self after cheap wine Grij cus ur buzz sucks this battle was actually worth readin. that maury line was viscous tho hard to go against that it was the difference maker in this one. vote - pinot

02-18-2018, 04:34 PM	#10
Profit Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2017 Posts: 106 Battle Record: 10-8 Rep Power: 53069	Cred Snooze button n buzz were nice other two were dope concepts but lacked execution.. cool verse nonetheless Pg Maury screen outlet & pounds the walls all hit. thought u put up a good verse here. 3-2 in favor of Pinot close af tho. Pinot Last edited by Profit; 02-18-2018 at 05:35 PM.

02-18-2018, 08:57 PM	#11
Enbombz Not Joog Join Date: Nov 2016 Posts: 769 Battle Record: 9-5 Rep Power: 5907772	Cred - snooze (although it did feel a bit familiar)and cheap wine we're okay. Wasn't really feeling the other two. No disrespect, not one of your better verses though Pinot- pretty solid verse here. Maury was alright, outlet was nice and kidnapped was a nice flip. Not many complaints chi town was better than cress other two as well so yeh v/ Pinot