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Lyriscologist · 02-04-2018, 01:09 AM

look, I'll forever, Last in the Sport of these Battlin’ Boards,
and if you, Ask me for More I’ll be Glad to Inform
all the Wack and the Norm how this Craft can be Formed!
I.. Can’t be Ignored..!
but, Fuk That, I Bust Raps and Come Back so Perfect,
you Dumb Kats in Dunce Caps get Crushed And Deserviced,
your One Track is Worthless.. Luck Has a Purpose...
this a lottery ticket, bitch! we’ve Just Scratched the Surface...
shit..
Since the Time of Merlin my.. Rhymes been Perfect,
Sittin High In a Time Mystified With the Eyes of Disguising Serpents..
Bitches Lie!
so to Think these Guys are Spittin Wise is Highly Worthless..
I'm the..
Type of Werdsmith who Writes in Cursive,
Stringing Lines that Stitch Inside just Like a Surgeon's Knife Inversions..
I'm in a, White Suburban Lightin Herb Wit Ripened Purp in a Pipe that’s Burning,
(that’s... Higher Learning..!)
I'm, Jesus Christ Rebirthin'! a.. Beast Ignites the Surface..
you'll, See this Mighty Person Reach Inside the Church's,
Secrets,Lies an Workings,
Predesigned Excursions and the Means of Whine an Worship....
(the... Weak will Guide the Werthless!)
so..
Free your Mind! the, Key Unwinds and We Arise an Flourish,
but dont Be Surprised..
when the Demons Bind the Meak an Blind on Purpose..
man...
..my Week can be Quite Disturbing when Sleep is a Slight Occurence,
I’m..
Deep in the Night Researchin the Meaning of Life's Emergence.. !
start, Reading your Bible Verses to Keep up with My Excursions,
so yea..
Beefin is Finally Worth It cuz to, Beat me wit Rhymes is Worthless.. !!
bitch!
I'mma Force to be Reckoned Wit! so of Course I'm not Weaponless,
I brought a sword to your torso and Tore through Appendages,
so fuk that Lord and a Reverend Shit, I was Born as a Specimen
for Torturous Methods And Corporate Embezzlement..
look, there's More to my Penmanship than what I Force out in Messages,
I'm an Important, Accredited, Enormously Headed, Abnormally Deadened Kid
..so I’m, going door to door with Chloroform and a Sedative,
I'm on a.. course for success and never Short on Intelligence!!
word

ACTIVATE SELF · 02-05-2018, 12:26 PM

Beast!

Every time I thought you were going to fall off track or that you used an end rhyme one too many times, you'd quickly prove me wrong in my assumption. What I like most about this piece is that it reads fun. But, not in a silly way. The content was all flex and self glorification, but it was penned in a highly intelligent way. All of your imagery added up. Your lines made sense. And you display both humour and cleverness through your lyricism. This has a classic Slim Shady vibe to it. And I mean that in the best possible way. At first, I thought you might be trolling us. Now, I no longer care if you are. Because your drops are consistently worth the read. Keep dropping flames, bro. Peace.

Geno · 02-05-2018, 02:55 PM

Hos was fire. Nasty syllable play

Lyriscologist · 02-05-2018, 10:44 PM

Thanks fellas, self, I’ll be peeping your new one sometime tonight, looking forward to the read bro!

Sunny · 02-06-2018, 03:20 PM

You are the heat, I like your energy
Better compare to your other verses

02-04-2018, 01:09 AM	#1
Lyriscologist Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 101 Rep Power: 95181	random bars I look, I'll forever, Last in the Sport of these Battlin’ Boards, and if you, Ask me for More I’ll be Glad to Inform all the Wack and the Norm how this Craft can be Formed! I.. Can’t be Ignored..! but, Fuk That, I Bust Raps and Come Back so Perfect, you Dumb Kats in Dunce Caps get Crushed And Deserviced, your One Track is Worthless.. Luck Has a Purpose... this a lottery ticket, bitch! we’ve Just Scratched the Surface... shit.. Since the Time of Merlin my.. Rhymes been Perfect, Sittin High In a Time Mystified With the Eyes of Disguising Serpents.. Bitches Lie! so to Think these Guys are Spittin Wise is Highly Worthless.. I'm the.. Type of Werdsmith who Writes in Cursive, Stringing Lines that Stitch Inside just Like a Surgeon's Knife Inversions.. I'm in a, White Suburban Lightin Herb Wit Ripened Purp in a Pipe that’s Burning, (that’s... Higher Learning..!) I'm, Jesus Christ Rebirthin'! a.. Beast Ignites the Surface.. you'll, See this Mighty Person Reach Inside the Church's, Secrets,Lies an Workings, Predesigned Excursions and the Means of Whine an Worship.... (the... Weak will Guide the Werthless!) so.. Free your Mind! the, Key Unwinds and We Arise an Flourish, but dont Be Surprised.. when the Demons Bind the Meak an Blind on Purpose.. man... ..my Week can be Quite Disturbing when Sleep is a Slight Occurence, I’m.. Deep in the Night Researchin the Meaning of Life's Emergence.. ! start, Reading your Bible Verses to Keep up with My Excursions, so yea.. Beefin is Finally Worth It cuz to, Beat me wit Rhymes is Worthless.. !! bitch! I'mma Force to be Reckoned Wit! so of Course I'm not Weaponless, I brought a sword to your torso and Tore through Appendages, so fuk that Lord and a Reverend Shit, I was Born as a Specimen for Torturous Methods And Corporate Embezzlement.. look, there's More to my Penmanship than what I Force out in Messages, I'm an Important, Accredited, Enormously Headed, Abnormally Deadened Kid ..so I’m, going door to door with Chloroform and a Sedative, I'm on a.. course for success and never Short on Intelligence!! word

02-05-2018, 02:55 PM	#3
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Hos was fire. Nasty syllable play __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

02-05-2018, 12:26 PM	#2
ACTIVATE SELF Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 783 Battle Record: 2-1 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 19584278	Beast! Every time I thought you were going to fall off track or that you used an end rhyme one too many times, you'd quickly prove me wrong in my assumption. What I like most about this piece is that it reads fun. But, not in a silly way. The content was all flex and self glorification, but it was penned in a highly intelligent way. All of your imagery added up. Your lines made sense. And you display both humour and cleverness through your lyricism. This has a classic Slim Shady vibe to it. And I mean that in the best possible way. At first, I thought you might be trolling us. Now, I no longer care if you are. Because your drops are consistently worth the read. Keep dropping flames, bro. Peace.

02-05-2018, 10:44 PM	#4
Lyriscologist Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 101 Rep Power: 95181	Thanks fellas, self, I’ll be peeping your new one sometime tonight, looking forward to the read bro!

02-06-2018, 03:20 PM	#5
Sunny Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 47 Rep Power: 0	You are the heat, I like your energy Better compare to your other verses