Mr. J vs WRATH - WRATH WINS

[Orc]

Netcees Battle League: The Legends Edition

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday Jan 4th and will be open until Sunday.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!

@Mr. J @WRATH

[WRATH]

@Mr. J sent 16

[Mr. J]

You below average at best & it dont matter how many rounds ya win son.
you could come up off a few Ws but you still gonna suffer from down syndrome.

I swear its the type that type in ALL CAPS that need to pipe down quick.
if you feeling high & mighty that just means you need to put the pipe down, quick..

I bet you thinking another culture would help you but all that hope is lost.
you in the wrong neck of the woods committing career suicide.. like Logan Paul.

fuck ya 16 this was half-assed based on your relevancy.
based on what I seen from your battles ya lines sound like a tweet from the dude holding presidency

[WRATH]

U wack fuck

Ima Beat yo weird ass up.. start swinging and wont stop
U gon get hit with so many bebops and boops niggas gon think you a robot
Kid yo verse last week was just awful... I couldn't force myself to finish
That verse against incredible needed a miracle... hope.. prayer AND a celestial visit
I'm live, in living color and im gonna embarrass ya
Homie the clown getting hit over the head so much u'd think I was playing the character
Enough kidding, all jokes aside you dont want no part of me
I won't play around like you're not good... bro i mean that whole heartedly

[Alvin Karpis]

Wrath got it

Mr j improving with concepts but wratch had the wording overall
J, may want to try and combine the verse, i hate to say to conform but might flow better

[Schadenfreude]

VOTE WRATH Mr. J's showing improvement, still not there tho & Wrath's aight just needs harsher, more impactful punches.

[For Battling]

You below average at best & it dont matter how many rounds ya win son.
you could come up off a few Ws but you still gonna suffer from down syndrome.
nah doesn’t make sense. Down syndrome has no correlation here
I swear its the type that type in ALL CAPS that need to pipe down quick.
if you feeling high & mighty that just means you need to put the pipe down, quick..
ehh decent at best
I bet you thinking another culture would help you but all that hope is lost.
you in the wrong neck of the woods committing career suicide.. like Logan Paul.
this was pretty good
fuck ya 16 this was half-assed based on your relevancy.
based on what I seen from your battles ya lines sound like a tweet from the dude holding presidency
i see what you’re saying but I wasn’t feelin it

Vs


Ima Beat yo weird ass up.. start swinging and wont stop
U gon get hit with so many bebops and boops niggas gon think you a robot
fuckin dead lmao
Kid yo verse last week was just awful... I couldn't force myself to finish
That verse against incredible needed a miracle... hope.. prayer AND a celestial visit
decent
I'm live, in living color and im gonna embarrass ya
Homie the clown getting hit over the head so much u'd think I was playing the character
decent again
Enough kidding, all jokes aside you dont want no part of me
I won't play around like you're not good... bro i mean that whole heartedly
basic

I thought this was close, really like mr j suicide line but that’s about all he bad. Wrath’s opener made me laugh out loud and the rest of his verse was decent. Wrath you have some cool concepts and your wording isn’t bad at all. But like the others said, gotta work on harsher punches. Cool battle.

Vote WRATH

[Aero]

Lol the bepop boop line from Wrath is hilarious. Wish I thought of it. The rest kinda light..

Mr J the Down syndrome line wasn't good but made me smirk. Logan bar could've been decent but fell short.

Wrath opener won this.

[BROKE LESNAR]

Originally Posted by Mr. J

You below average at best & it dont matter how many rounds ya win son.
you could come up off a few Ws but you still gonna suffer from down syndrome.

☆

I swear its the type that type in ALL CAPS that need to pipe down quick.
if you feeling high & mighty that just means you need to put the pipe down, quick..

☆

I bet you thinking another culture would help you but all that hope is lost.
you in the wrong neck of the woods committing career suicide.. like Logan Paul.

☆

fuck ya 16 this was half-assed based on your relevancy.
based on what I seen from your battles ya lines sound like a tweet from the dude holding presidency

☆

Originally Posted by WRATH

U wack fuck

Ima Beat yo weird ass up.. start swinging and wont stop
U gon get hit with so many bebops and boops niggas gon think you a robot

☆

Kid yo verse last week was just awful... I couldn't force myself to finish
That verse against incredible needed a miracle... hope.. prayer AND a celestial visit

☆☆☆☆☆

I'm live, in living color and im gonna embarrass ya
Homie the clown getting hit over the head so much u'd think I was playing the character

☆

Enough kidding, all jokes aside you dont want no part of me
I won't play around like you're not good... bro i mean that whole heartedly

☆

Wrath barely won this and that's kind of tragic considering Mr. J is easily one of the wackest dudes in the league asides from Classick. This battle was a pain to sit and read through but there's always next time and I think if Mr. J cleans his bars up and makes them harsher he could very well beat Wrath in the off chance they face off again.

v-Wrath

[Basic M]

Wrath did a somewhat better way of executing his concepts vs Mr. J's verse. Mr. J's bars came off with a weird delivery. Alil more poorly worded. Wrath got it.

Winner/Wrath

[Destroyer]

I hate voting for wrath but he clearly got this
Mr J just still needs work on the battling style
He keeps showing up though so I give him props for that
Incredible line alone won this for wrath

V/W