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Pay Homage
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10 - 16. @aww shitt match who ever post 1st?
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YUUGE
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I'll go whatever you want. If I post first I'm going 12
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This kid toys, no doubt.. Slech fucks the dolls and goes limp hardly..
Don't mean outback steakhouse when I say this shrimp's on the barbie. Kid, I ain't playin - my text stays slayin so ya verse is worth savin' Cuz Slecht gon' win; A damn lie like Aero sayin he ain't asian We know he likes his girls young but u got left in a plot to bleed Cuz Des killed this molestor when he agreed to a 10 but brought 16 ---Babe, what you want... You pick, no baby i'm not guessin Cuz ridin' with ya girl with YO money only time I like slechtn I stay clean but I didn't bring any rubbers so I swear I'm hesistant I'ma pound Slecht straight into the earth like that bear in the revenant When ya spit we know it's a loss; Need no trouble or drama So we'll add another unneeded letter to ya name like the double L in Llama
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Got a blade 4 ur eyez only n it finna make great holes
Back to back ...leavin with u no features like I'm J Cole Straight blows in the lot where ur dog parks with a super ruger Long stick, ...aim n its pickin up shit quicker than any pooper scooper U a trooper but if they say u can beat me? Homie, u wrong. Aww loss is already in the books ...thats the holy quran Phonie, u belong down under plus get this concept straight the only aww seein victory here @ netcees was dominate Ur bag got a name like a hurricane, ull be dead with a rib torn the four cast n ruin ur day...looks like itll be a shit storm no way near my haymakers and u cant match up a round Manure not tough, im stompin u down into crap in the ground
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I guess the Aero asian shit was koo, wasnt really feeling anything else tbh.
vs Pooper scooper was heat, holy quaran was koo. This was a decent lil read, expected more but it is what it is. Slecht easily had lotb with the pooper scooper joint. He took this one here. Vote - Slechtn |
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Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!!
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Vote SLECHTN
Awww u have polish up on that wording, w/o clear & concise delivery, even the best concepts fall to land. Slec u were good, nothing crazy, but very effective & consistent.
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Aww shit, not a good verse, too simple
Slecht, pooper scooper was ok, some of the concepts were very simple as well but still a stronger show Vote slecht
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thought slecht's aussie victory was lotb
that n holy quran long stick was dece aww tbh not feeling that verse man, all of the concepts fell flat to me couple real corny ones like the revenent ref & shrimp on a barbie v/sle |
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Prayers won't help.
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Aww, my fault bruh. But wasn't feeling anything here..
Try to give your punches a more direct impact on your opponent w.out sticking to the norm, bruh. Specht proper scooper was gd. But the holy Quan line was bananas to me. Vote slecht |
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Bullying Yall Bitches.
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Sletchc was more polished here better execution
Awww shit needs to work on his wording set ups are cool just his punch has nothing to do wit what's being set up lol Vote Slethtc |
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