The Log

Concrete · 03-20-2023, 03:22 PM

violent storms upset the waters with force
halting our tour unless we alter our course
give the order offcourse, obey the time frame
can't arrive late, this vessel shall find haste
no blind faith, diagram marked with a viable line
-sir, we're heading where the mystic triangle aligns
an unrelibale sign? quit the supersticious babble
right after the radar made a suspicious crackle
distance traveled, the uneasy sea finally relieved
anxiety feeled, treacherous waters quietly decieves
time will reveal, feeling our ship slightly vibrate
objects appears over the horizon, lighting vibrant
brightly shining, flying in a synchronic sequence
coming in seeking as we're greeted by a sonic beacon
no frequencies, coms are down, radar's gone zapped
it's all black, we been detached from the whole map

old scrap of ancient shipwrecks surfacing to be spotted
beneath us a monstrous shadow emerging from the bottom
the darkened surface trembles as colossal spheres appears
illuminating the eclipsed ocean, we just stare with fear
I pray in tears, dear God, save me from the unknown
all I hear is horrendous tones drilling through my bones
gruesome groans, deriving from a deep-sea titan arising
frightened, no use fighting this leviathan arriving
striving, paralysed by despair, I simply panic instead
an organic creature equipped with a mechanical head?
synthetic vertebraes protracted as far as eyes can see
what kind of breed? fuck this shit.. bout time we flee
maximize speed I screamed, the plead seems to be futile
the colussus sucks us in.. this beast fiercely brutal

to be truthful, I was being stupid to ignore the warning
anyone reading, don't cross a triangle when it's storming

Pharaohs Army · 03-28-2023, 10:45 PM

And up--- for the newest nonpharaohs Piece:
phara feed old
"Upped.
Will get to it.
Have Skimmed once.
Have full read ONCE.
Initial feed is first half is completly 100% dope story-setup. JUst a little bit better than SECOND half...which is STILL good. Just not quite as sick man.
Thanks for being active ... Will edit or SPAM2ndpost more detail if I get to it."

new edit elab:
By that I mean...just the opening 1/2 was just solightly more UNIIIIQUE n never seeeen. WHereas the 2nd half, while FINE closing and great OM...just didn't have the groundbreaking appeal despite the good imagery and rhymes...

emcee squared · 04-21-2023, 05:20 PM

up
non-pharaohs

emcee squared · 05-15-2023, 06:01 PM

uppp

03-20-2023, 03:22 PM	#1
Concrete Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2013 Location: Oslo Posts: 179 Battle Record: 5-0 Rep Power: 2158978	The Log violent storms upset the waters with force halting our tour unless we alter our course give the order offcourse, obey the time frame can't arrive late, this vessel shall find haste no blind faith, diagram marked with a viable line -sir, we're heading where the mystic triangle aligns an unrelibale sign? quit the supersticious babble right after the radar made a suspicious crackle distance traveled, the uneasy sea finally relieved anxiety feeled, treacherous waters quietly decieves time will reveal, feeling our ship slightly vibrate objects appears over the horizon, lighting vibrant brightly shining, flying in a synchronic sequence coming in seeking as we're greeted by a sonic beacon no frequencies, coms are down, radar's gone zapped it's all black, we been detached from the whole map old scrap of ancient shipwrecks surfacing to be spotted beneath us a monstrous shadow emerging from the bottom the darkened surface trembles as colossal spheres appears illuminating the eclipsed ocean, we just stare with fear I pray in tears, dear God, save me from the unknown all I hear is horrendous tones drilling through my bones gruesome groans, deriving from a deep-sea titan arising frightened, no use fighting this leviathan arriving striving, paralysed by despair, I simply panic instead an organic creature equipped with a mechanical head? synthetic vertebraes protracted as far as eyes can see what kind of breed? fuck this shit.. bout time we flee maximize speed I screamed, the plead seems to be futile the colussus sucks us in.. this beast fiercely brutal to be truthful, I was being stupid to ignore the warning anyone reading, don't cross a triangle when it's storming

04-21-2023, 05:20 PM	#3
emcee squared senior writer Join Date: Aug 2015 Posts: 437 Rep Power: 0	up non-pharaohs __________________ I am Pharaohs Army

05-15-2023, 06:01 PM	#4
emcee squared senior writer Join Date: Aug 2015 Posts: 437 Rep Power: 0	uppp __________________ I am Pharaohs Army

03-28-2023, 10:45 PM	#2
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	And up--- for the newest nonpharaohs Piece: phara feed old "Upped. Will get to it. Have Skimmed once. Have full read ONCE. Initial feed is first half is completly 100% dope story-setup. JUst a little bit better than SECOND half...which is STILL good. Just not quite as sick man. Thanks for being active ... Will edit or SPAM2ndpost more detail if I get to it." new edit elab: By that I mean...just the opening 1/2 was just solightly more UNIIIIQUE n never seeeen. WHereas the 2nd half, while FINE closing and great OM...just didn't have the groundbreaking appeal despite the good imagery and rhymes...