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Foreva us, neva them.
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Badgerdick
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ready when you are chump
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Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!!
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Fool treats his bitch like a Barbie, spoil & shower the thot..
she's got an action figure, yet won’t let him open the box, the value’ll drop. Last edited by Schadenfreude; 09-22-2016 at 05:54 PM. |
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Badgerdick
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i put the G into goon.. cold aim that'll throw schade like im sneak dissin' you
see you a stand up guy, i keep suttin' to silence the heckler like comedians do |
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YUUGE
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Diablo's opening line was better than his second, imo
Schade's was nice start to finish though, no doubt. Nice battle though Vote - Schade
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Try this shit
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might be the battle of the week here.
Schad was nice, I like the concept. Diabo was harsher in my eyes here though. I felt the two lines hit
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Schad is in a zone right now. Line connects throughout but remains simple and effective. Lars.. I like the concept but it's relies too much on insinuation to connect too harshly.
Vote -- Schad
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Felt schad was more creative here and overall had good humor factor. Felt diablo finisher didnt have impact couldve displayed the reference better
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both were good
shaden had a cool concept, and I've seen the heckler/comedian lines done in a sense. but lars written it well. but shade had one of the better lines this week. Vote shade Last edited by Saint; 09-24-2016 at 01:05 PM. |
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Lars had a nice concept going...I felt something was missing though.. Both lines were very nice...Both well written...Schad came with fire here imo. Concept that were well executed. My vote goes to:
Schaden
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