Bags 1-1 Vs Diablo 1-1 - BAGS WINS

Allen Knight · 09-12-2016, 01:38 PM

NETCEES 1-2 PUNCHLINE LEAGUE SEASON 4

Due Thursday 12 pacific

Rules: no feeding, swaying, bitting, Recycling.

& dont post in other ppls battles unless its to vote or u'll be booted.

NO EXT, AT ALL.

@Bags

@Diablo

Diablo · 09-13-2016, 06:12 AM

ready when you are faggot

lmao pussy im nice, Cimm bodied you last round and you aint even put up a fight
so how the fuck you gonna dissimilars.. when him, me and you are nothing alike?

Ghost1 · 09-14-2016, 11:11 AM

I don't fuck w no bird man, ill punch ur pregnant bitch in her fat tummy
until the baby come out lookin retarded, put sum respeck on muh name for that cash money

Chemist · 09-14-2016, 11:39 AM

wow LOL nice battle here but bags made me fall of my chair.

bags for that comedy, --although diablo was nice too--wording hurt him a little

Aero · 09-14-2016, 01:19 PM

Diablo - I like what you tried to do here. Two problems though, it doesn't work both ways and dissimilars isn't a word. Would be dope nameplay if it was though.

Bags - you could see this punch coming a mile away "I don't fuck with no bird man"ohhhh I see what you did there! Also, punch doesn't even relate to the set up in a meaningful way.

Tough battle to judge here fellas. Lars made up a word by adding S, Bags used cash money reference. I have to go Diablo here Bc it had potential.

CORRECTION: Dissimilars IS a word. I did some more research.

Cred · 09-15-2016, 07:32 AM

yeah this battle was lighttt lol. Diablo came off a bit forced imo bags shit was solid enough.

Vote bags

Adonis · 09-15-2016, 10:53 AM

Liked what both did in the grand scheme of things, but imo bags simply hit harder even though the reference is a couple decades late, the deciding factor for me was dissimalar not really being used in correct context which disturbed my flow first read cause I had to double take. Nit picking, both good bars bitches

V/ team America

Bags

Certain · 09-15-2016, 11:53 AM

Diablo's problem was threefold: It didn't work as written because dissimilar is not a verb; the question of "how you gonna" made no sense because that's exactly why he WOULD diss Cim and Lars; and finally, while the wordplay was there, there was no attempt to denigrate or threaten the opponent. Bags' line similarly relied too much on a genial form of cleverness, but it at least included a threat and made sense both directions.

Vote: Bags

Maximus · 09-15-2016, 06:19 PM

like ld diablo's attempt but it really didnt work, nice try tho. Bag's had me loling, cool hit. v/bags

Maximus · 09-15-2016, 06:19 PM

i liked diablo's attempt but it really didnt work, nice try tho. Bag's had me loling, cool hit. v/bags

Inno · 09-15-2016, 08:00 PM

Diablo tripped on his wording a bit.

Bags with the humor tho

Pinot Grij · 09-15-2016, 09:27 PM

Lars, that wordplay feels super old. All I can say is that it's a miss. Shit happens.
Bags, I don't get how it all ties together, but it stands tall on the disrespect alone.

Vote -- Bags

Hearder Hearder · 09-16-2016, 02:16 AM

Bags line was terrible tbh

Lars could have won but the wording was bad and the fact that he ended it with a question hurt it even more. Could have easily won smh

Vote bags

Slechtn · 09-16-2016, 02:15 PM

Both were soft here. I think Diablo's wording hurt him a lot here this round. Bags had the funny jab here. My vote goes Caddy Bags

Joe Boston · 09-16-2016, 09:27 PM

I didnt like how bags displayed his punch plus birdman concepts been overused. If it was for Diablos messed up attempt at wordplay this wouldve went in his favor.

V/bags executed better

09-12-2016, 01:38 PM	#1
Allen Knight Foreva us, neva them. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,176 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899401	Bags 1-1 Vs Diablo 1-1 - BAGS WINS NETCEES 1-2 PUNCHLINE LEAGUE SEASON 4 Due Thursday 12 pacific Rules: no feeding, swaying, bitting, Recycling. & dont post in other ppls battles unless its to vote or u'll be booted. NO EXT, AT ALL. @Bags @Diablo

09-13-2016, 06:12 AM	#2
Diablo Badgerdick Join Date: Jul 2015 Location: Showdown City Posts: 2,634 Battle Record: 11-2 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 22685552	ready when you are faggot lmao pussy im nice, Cimm bodied you last round and you aint even put up a fight so how the fuck you gonna dissimilars.. when him, me and you are nothing alike? Last edited by Diablo; 09-13-2016 at 06:18 AM.

09-14-2016, 11:39 AM	#4
Chemist Try this shit Join Date: Sep 2015 Location: uninhabitable Posts: 365 Battle Record: 5-11 Rep Power: 0	wow LOL nice battle here but bags made me fall of my chair. bags for that comedy, --although diablo was nice too--wording hurt him a little __________________

09-14-2016, 01:19 PM	#5
Aero GOAT Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 4,826 Battle Record: 14-17 Champed - Site Diss Competition - Tag Tournament III - Lyric Olympics - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 0	Diablo - I like what you tried to do here. Two problems though, it doesn't work both ways and dissimilars isn't a word. Would be dope nameplay if it was though. Bags - you could see this punch coming a mile away "I don't fuck with no bird man"ohhhh I see what you did there! Also, punch doesn't even relate to the set up in a meaningful way. Tough battle to judge here fellas. Lars made up a word by adding S, Bags used cash money reference. I have to go Diablo here Bc it had potential. CORRECTION: Dissimilars IS a word. I did some more research. __________________ Too Rich IRL to Be Here. I'm Out. Last edited by Aero; 09-14-2016 at 01:48 PM.

09-15-2016, 10:53 AM	#7
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946449	Liked what both did in the grand scheme of things, but imo bags simply hit harder even though the reference is a couple decades late, the deciding factor for me was dissimalar not really being used in correct context which disturbed my flow first read cause I had to double take. Nit picking, both good bars bitches V/ team America Bags __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR

09-15-2016, 07:32 AM	#6
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899383	yeah this battle was lighttt lol. Diablo came off a bit forced imo bags shit was solid enough. Vote bags

09-15-2016, 11:53 AM	#8
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	Diablo's problem was threefold: It didn't work as written because dissimilar is not a verb; the question of "how you gonna" made no sense because that's exactly why he WOULD diss Cim and Lars; and finally, while the wordplay was there, there was no attempt to denigrate or threaten the opponent. Bags' line similarly relied too much on a genial form of cleverness, but it at least included a threat and made sense both directions. Vote: Bags

09-15-2016, 06:19 PM	#9
Maximus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 923 Battle Record: 25-26 Champed - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11169472	like ld diablo's attempt but it really didnt work, nice try tho. Bag's had me loling, cool hit. v/bags

09-15-2016, 08:00 PM	#11
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	Diablo tripped on his wording a bit. Bags with the humor tho

09-15-2016, 09:27 PM	#12
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Lars, that wordplay feels super old. All I can say is that it's a miss. Shit happens. Bags, I don't get how it all ties together, but it stands tall on the disrespect alone. Vote -- Bags __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

09-16-2016, 02:16 AM	#13
Hearder Hearder Banned Join Date: Aug 2016 Posts: 471 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 0	Bags line was terrible tbh Lars could have won but the wording was bad and the fact that he ended it with a question hurt it even more. Could have easily won smh Vote bags

09-16-2016, 02:15 PM	#14
Slechtn Pay Homage Join Date: Sep 2016 Location: La Luna Posts: 254 Battle Record: 2-3 Rep Power: 0	Both were soft here. I think Diablo's wording hurt him a lot here this round. Bags had the funny jab here. My vote goes Caddy Bags __________________

09-16-2016, 09:27 PM	#15
Joe Boston Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 929 Battle Record: 8-11 Rep Power: 11092531	I didnt like how bags displayed his punch plus birdman concepts been overused. If it was for Diablos messed up attempt at wordplay this wouldve went in his favor. V/bags executed better