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09-01-2016, 01:50 PM
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The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 5,046
Battle Record: 35-45
Champed - Art of Writing League
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Back....Back Square
Moderately equipped as I forget what harmony is.
sang the same song that most apologies give. anonymously quipped, written with the rottenest shit. sometimes I think things get monotonous quick. raise the flags & put that ship back on course. backpack a forest & burn down the track & chorus. things only I perceive under the cataract of Horus. still water, double back or get collapsed in the waters. stack of orders & no waitress to go & set em straight. by the time the pens done Im on my seventh page. soaked in heavens grace thinking of a better place. if theres a chase, lets cut to it, chainsaw armed leatherface. my conquest will obliterate the infiltration of nonsense. biddy biddy bom shit...you just angry you cant manage 2 & 2 together equal 6 feet deep into a fat casket. blat blat shit, that will have em call in Kaepernick. the ball & earth is flat so support that ya patriot... insane craziness, better than this other lazy shit. arm ripped, rabies bit, root beer float mid 80s shit. the moons out without the silver bullets connected compound chemist, frogs tongue & all out hexes... high end collective upsetting the low brow tenants. & I was just pretending to see whats in the crystal ball another rhyme thats throw away like where the pistol falls conflicted thoughts that rest upon another distressed body. if the flesh isnt devoured then the insects got me... come & look at this fly shit maggots. I know right? its a riot.........dagnabit
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09-07-2016, 05:31 PM
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obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,709
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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Scatterbrained. It scattered my brain. you had an underlying tone, theme, but it strayed almost to depict the spontaneity of your clustered emotions. Which made it dense. Hard to follow.
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09-15-2016, 11:25 PM
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rhyme capsule.
Join Date: Sep 2018
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i wasn't sure what to make of this, in all honesty, but some of the the wording and rhymes were cool.
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09-16-2016, 12:36 AM
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The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 5,046
Battle Record: 35-45
Champed - Art of Writing League
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Scorpion said 'get over here'
Boredom really... built it around back packing pages & burning down lyrics... eyes...horus...I was barely awake writing this
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