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Old 06-06-2016, 08:32 AM   #1
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Old 06-06-2016, 09:15 PM   #2
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Cashing the fuck out. $$$
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Old 06-07-2016, 08:35 AM   #3
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Orc vs Cred and Hush let's go
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Old 06-09-2016, 04:30 PM   #4
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I'm on a new level..

Slow ur role or get streched wit the peace. That's a yoga pose
Bitch u'll get ur Face put in the Sky with the Stick like a Totem Pole
What's next? Two fortys banging & it ain't drunk sex
Pull up; twin Bulldogs hanging out the window like I love pets
Make suckers fold. U dick rode ur way to the top & it's nothin old
Faggot fuck! The Irish are KNOWN to chase the rainbow jus for gold
Get shot then beat wit the handle. Wit the Can I'm oh so reckless
Dump it in ur face/smash it on ur head. It ain't a Stone Cold entrance
I'm really in the trap foreal. Try & rob me I'm blastin shells
U even grab the Scale, get sent to a different world like Dragon Tales

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Old 06-09-2016, 06:23 PM   #5
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ironically my punches went over ur head.. n so did da fuckin vultures n flies

Wayyy before we had Hush Jr we had Mr Steal a Verse
Congrats. You're the first dude in history to make an Amen bar evennn worse
Wow, you've a hopeless pen. C needed Squaaaad to get votes again
How you gonna battle me using lines Hush wrote for you that I wrote for him
PM's to the boy Vic like: ''Yooo. Can you word this real quick?!''
Hush reply 2 days later like ''Sure bruh... lemme just get Burd to tweak it''
THE. GUNBAR. KING. Who bites in Vid batts for fear of his miss-hits
for tryna B Magic, Trick... I'll Pull Something from Behind ya Ear w/ the Quickness
How u get bodied by a Crazy dude?! Chyeah put the heat to this fan
U got beat by a man who only Reach for the Can to check if its Beef or its Spam

Facts.
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Old 06-10-2016, 03:59 AM   #6
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Slow ur role or get streched wit the peace. That's a yoga pose
Bitch u'll get ur Face put in the Sky with the Stick like a Totem Pole
What's next? Two fortys banging & it ain't drunk sex
Pull up; twin Bulldogs hanging out the window like I love pets
Get shot then beat wit the handle. Wit the Can I'm oh so reckless
Dump it in ur face/smash it on ur head. It ain't a Stone Cold entrance

vs

Wayyy before we had Hush Jr we had Mr Steal a Verse
Congrats. You're the first dude in history to make an Amen bar evennn worse
Wow, you've a hopeless pen. C needed Squaaaad to get votes again
How you gonna battle me using lines Hush wrote for you that I wrote for him

roflzzz

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for tryna B Magic, Trick... I'll Pull Something from Behind ya Ear w/ the Quickness



LOL going with Orc here

some heat from both sides but Orc got that funny shit mixed in with the magic trick shit I fucked with heavy

I got Orc here
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Orc on preference of style. Both sides came tough but I think Orc edged.
Fucked with the yoga shit from cred. Fucked with the magic bar from Orc.

V Orc
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Old 06-10-2016, 08:43 PM   #8
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Slow ur role or get streched wit the peace. That's a yoga pose
Bitch u'll get ur Face put in the Sky with the Stick like a Totem Pole
ok
What's next? Two fortys banging & it ain't drunk sex
Pull up; twin Bulldogs hanging out the window like I love pets
didnt hit hard to me. Not bad but not worth quoting either
Make suckers fold. U dick rode ur way to the top & it's nothin old
Faggot fuck! The Irish are KNOWN to chase the rainbow jus for gold
decent
Get shot then beat wit the handle. Wit the Can I'm oh so reckless
Dump it in ur face/smash it on ur head. It ain't a Stone Cold entrance
ive seen a few stone cold concepts since ive come back, matter fact jshazo used one on me in my first return in the nbl. This one was dope to me tho. The aggressive angle set it apart imo
I'm really in the trap foreal. Try & rob me I'm blastin shells
U even grab the Scale, get sent to a different world like Dragon Tales
meh



Wayyy before we had Hush Jr we had Mr Steal a Verse
Congrats. You're the first dude in history to make an Amen bar evennn worse
ok personal.
Wow, you've a hopeless pen. C needed Squaaaad to get votes again
How you gonna battle me using lines Hush wrote for you that I wrote for him
damn. This was tough af imo
PM's to the boy Vic like: ''Yooo. Can you word this real quick?!''
Hush reply 2 days later like ''Sure bruh... lemme just get Burd to tweak it''
meh
THE. GUNBAR. KING. Who bites in Vid batts for fear of his miss-hits
for tryna B Magic, Trick... I'll Pull Something from Behind ya Ear w/ the Quickness
nice.
How u get bodied by a Crazy dude?! Chyeah put the heat to this fan
U got beat by a man who only Reach for the Can to check if its Beef or its Spam
decent

This shit was alot closer than i expected it to be. They both had a haymaker and overall were consistent. But again, styles make fights and it comes down to personal preference. I just feel orc had a more versatile drop with a wider range of attack angles. Cred was consistent as hell but ironically got outgunned. Orc just had more tools in the tool box. Dope battle tho, close call but i got orc here.
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Old 06-10-2016, 10:36 PM   #9
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Some nasty bars from both, two of my favorite battlers, but the McGregor of text just punched & landed heavier tbh. Cred had that intro & everything else was just solid, had the potential to make them into haymakers, but just left 'em average. Whereas the Irishman had that 'ghostwriter' bar which was a haymaker & the rest of the verse was highly effective, vote ORC.
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Old 06-10-2016, 10:59 PM   #10
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I'm on a new level..

Slow ur role or get streched wit the peace. That's a yoga pose
Bitch u'll get ur Face put in the Sky with the Stick like a Totem Pole

2 punches. Both fire.

What's next? Two fortys banging & it ain't drunk sex
Pull up; twin Bulldogs hanging out the window like I love pets

Cred setting up w punches....insane.

Make suckers fold. U dick rode ur way to the top & it's nothin old
Faggot fuck! The Irish are KNOWN to chase the rainbow jus for gold

Didn't love this. Light.

Get shot then beat wit the handle. Wit the Can I'm oh so reckless
Dump it in ur face/smash it on ur head. It ain't a Stone Cold entrance

Too many stone cold flips lately an this wasn't better then any of em to me

I'm really in the trap foreal. Try & rob me I'm blastin shells
U even grab the Scale, get sent to a different world like Dragon Tales

Lol fuck w this






Wayyy before we had Hush Jr we had Mr Steal a Verse
Congrats. You're the first dude in history to make an Amen bar evennn worse

Lol ok

Wow, you've a hopeless pen. C needed Squaaaad to get votes again
How you gonna battle me using lines Hush wrote for you that I wrote for him

LMAO yikes

PM's to the boy Vic like: ''Yooo. Can you word this real quick?!''
Hush reply 2 days later like ''Sure bruh... lemme just get Burd to tweak it''

Lol last bar was better...cool staying on theme tho

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for tryna B Magic, Trick... I'll Pull Something from Behind ya Ear w/ the Quickness

Dope an personal again

How u get bodied by a Crazy dude?! Chyeah put the heat to this fan
U got beat by a man who only Reach for the Can to check if its Beef or its Spam

Hahaha

Facts.


Man....so cred started out wild good....then kindve trailed off a bit to me which is a shame cuz I think if he would've kept up the intensity he would've got this one. Tho per usual lack of personals hurt him here again and with orc dropping a verse entirely made up of personals it just made it seem glaring. He did have the Irish attempt but it was so obvious an nkt really funny or overly complex er clever. Orcs shjt about hush wrote ur bars that I wrote.for him or watever was fucking bonkers to me lol. Got orc just being more consistent and the personal touch made it seem more cut throat.

V orc
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Old 06-11-2016, 06:08 PM   #11
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stone cold entrance, opener

hush lines, magic trick


somewhat close battle, both have crisp wording & execution...
orc had lotb w/ that hush personal, b magic was good too..
Chyrahh line ok personal.
Cred had opener, 2 punches both coo.. second was ok a but simpler
rainbow line maybe it feels it could've been flipped better.
Stone cold line was dope tieing two things together, that hit imo
dragon tales was ok nothing crazy. but still good reference

Overall, Orc had a more varied attack and angles that appealed to me more..

vote Orc
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Old 06-12-2016, 10:20 AM   #12
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I'm on a new level..

Slow ur role or get streched wit the peace. That's a yoga pose
Bitch u'll get ur Face put in the Sky with the Stick like a Totem Pole

Cool. A little wordy though.

What's next? Two fortys banging & it ain't drunk sex
Pull up; twin Bulldogs hanging out the window like I love pets

Could have been worded better cusits missing sting. Cool idea though.

Make suckers fold. U dick rode ur way to the top & it's nothin old
Faggot fuck! The Irish are KNOWN to chase the rainbow jus for gold

Hated this lol

Get shot then beat wit the handle. Wit the Can I'm oh so reckless
Dump it in ur face/smash it on ur head. It ain't a Stone Cold entrance

Liked this. I don't watch WWE though so I had to look it up.

I'm really in the trap foreal. Try & rob me I'm blastin shells
U even grab the Scale, get sent to a different world like Dragon Tales

This is fire as fuck
Overall solid verse only one real miss

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Wayyy before we had Hush Jr we had Mr Steal a Verse
Congrats. You're the first dude in history to make an Amen bar evennn worse

Lmao nice

Wow, you've a hopeless pen. C needed Squaaaad to get votes again
How you gonna battle me using lines Hush wrote for you that I wrote for him

Cool personal angle but it didn't hit that hard for me

PM's to the boy Vic like: ''Yooo. Can you word this real quick?!''
Hush reply 2 days later like ''Sure bruh... lemme just get Burd to tweak it''

Why use the same idea twice? This one was boring

THE. GUNBAR. KING. Who bites in Vid batts for fear of his miss-hits
for tryna B Magic, Trick... I'll Pull Something from Behind ya Ear w/ the Quickness

Feel like there were a few b magic wordplays awhile ago. Okay way of putting it together though

How u get bodied by a Crazy dude?! Chyeah put the heat to this fan
U got beat by a man who only Reach for the Can to check if its Beef or its Spam

Lmao word

Facts.
Cool verse. More personal. Opener and closer were dope. Those 2 middle bars I just didn't like. First one was good but using it again in a pretty bland way took from it.

Gotta come back to this for a final verdict.
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