(7)Ill nik-A vs (10)MFTastick - MFTastick wins

[Ghost1]

NBL Season 9 Playoffs


Due Thursday June 9th
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[MFtastick]

12 check

[ill nik-A]

Welcome!

[ill nik-A]

12 sent @Bags @MFtastick

[MFtastick]

let me catch him flexin. Jack dude fast as mechanics when i grip the toasters
You holding bands? my cannon smoke for the paper like my printers broken
Your bitch ass better not stop on red. cause we rollin up. fourtys out. hands up
you drive off then its shottys out. and the bitch bang in the back of your whip like bangbus
try that nerd shit with me. I'm Psycho Mantis. Here to take this snake out
Plus i always got the heater on me. My best friends a 40. Im drake now
gun so big the arm look stupid, like the tats all tribal.round after round after round. they all spiral
gun butt you a block away. thats a long rifle. hipfire. shit kick from the side like Shawn Micheals
right and the left work well together. and theyh hit him where his face is.
you can get this loud left, right, left, its like millitary cadence
Headshot. put a face to this round. you wilson from cast away
come to your house. grinding with the tre'.. im Xander Cage.

[Ghost1]

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

It's playoff time...
so I'm in beast mode; but this year I'm quiet just sitting cool
u got no time for animal control... tryin to make a splash with a gator in ur swimmin pool
u made playoffs & thought u'd beat old cats till Kenny & Des served clown
guess that goal was not met... & now's a total stranger to gettin out the first round
might be highly ranked in RMBVA but here Dr. death is responsible
u ain't bout that life... so I'ma put an end to it cuz this ain't ur General Hospital
this a Wild West standoff but u not quick enough, so please stop
my trigger-finger fast cuz I'm at the range... between ya girl's clit & G-spot
u'll do anything to beat the legend but the deception plays lethal
u must be spaced out cuz I'm killin that will... like the Independence Day sequel
ya aim's lame while my nina named Angelina & she'll sooo hurt u
my gun bars are known for bein Wanted... cuz one shot will kill ya whole circle

[Joe Boston]

Mf doom

let me catch him flexin. Jack dude fast as mechanics when i grip the toasters
You holding bands? my cannon smoke for the paper like my printers broken
Nice metaphore creative

Your bitch ass better not stop on red. cause we rollin up. fourtys out. hands up
you drive off then its shottys out. and the bitch bang in the back of your whip like bangbus
Nice metaphore again

try that nerd shit with me. I'm Psycho Mantis. Here to take this snake out
Plus i always got the heater on me. My best friends a 40. Im drake now
Dope but the way u displayed more of a,self hype presence

gun so big the arm look stupid, like the tats all tribal.round after round after round. they all spiral
gun butt you a block away. thats a long rifle. hipfire. shit kick from the side like Shawn Micheals
Fire

right and the left work well together. and theyh hit him where his face is.
you can get this loud left, right, left, its like millitary cadence
Fire again

Headshot. put a face to this round. you wilson from cast away
come to your house. grinding with the tre'.. im Xander Cage.
Nah

Lil nika

It's playoff time...
so I'm in beast mode; but this year I'm quiet just sitting cool
u got no time for animal control... tryin to make a splash with a gator in ur swimmin pool
Nah wasnt feeling the reference flip

u made playoffs & thought u'd beat old cats till Kenny & Des served clown
guess that goal was not met... & now's a total stranger to gettin out the first round
Soft personal

might be highly ranked in RMBVA but here Dr. death is responsible
u ain't bout that life... so I'ma put an end to it cuz this ain't ur General Hospital
Ok but the execution wasnt that impactable to me

this a Wild West standoff but u not quick enough, so please stop
my trigger-finger fast cuz I'm at the range... between ya girl's clit & G-spot
Ok finisher was good but u had no relevancy to ur setup

u'll do anything to beat the legend but the deception plays lethal
u must be spaced out cuz I'm killin that will... like the Independence Day sequel
Seen this wordplay flip before

ya aim's lame while my nina named Angelina & she'll sooo hurt u
my gun bars are known for bein Wanted... cuz one shot will kill ya whole circle
Ok

Mftastik took this comfortably just overall more creativity dope metaphores.lil nika just over execution hurt him.

V/MF

[veritas]

Psyco mantis lotb. Shawn Michaels too. That's fire af. Nothing I'll said could come close.

Mvgt 2 mf easy choice.

[Evolve]

gun so big the arm look stupid, like the tats all tribal.round after round after round. they all spiral
gun butt you a block away. thats a long rifle. hipfire. shit kick from the side like Shawn Micheals
you drive off then its shottys out. and the bitch bang in the back of your whip like bangbus
try that nerd shit with me. I'm Psycho Mantis. Here to take this snake out
Plus i always got the heater on me. My best friends a 40. Im drake now

vs

u'll do anything to beat the legend but the deception plays lethal
u must be spaced out cuz I'm killin that will... like the Independence Day sequel

Overall I felt like this was a close battle. Both had some bars & both had quite a few misses for me. But yoooo... that Shawn Michaels line... WTF.. I actually shouted Don Demarco out loud.. I didn't but I easily could do.. still not gonna' though.. but that was fucking flames.. 100% LOTB for me and probably line of this first round of battles tbh..The drake line was pretty decent not really a direct hit but It was still cool.. Nika It seemed like you half-assed this bro.. Normally when I read your battles you come mad consistent but I didn't feel like this was the case here.. The independence day/killing your will was a pretty cool flip but I wasn't really digging much this time round..

I feel like MF got the dub here though for the Shawn Michaels line...

V/MF

[Kenny the OG]

let me catch him flexin. Jack dude fast as mechanics when i grip the toasters
You holding bands? my cannon smoke for the paper like my printers broken
ok
Your bitch ass better not stop on red. cause we rollin up. fourtys out. hands up
you drive off then its shottys out. and the bitch bang in the back of your whip like bangbus
nah played concept and the execution didnt make it fresher
try that nerd shit with me. I'm Psycho Mantis. Here to take this snake out
Plus i always got the heater on me. My best friends a 40. Im drake now
couldve been decent but i didnt like that way i worded the punch at all tbh. My best friends a 40... im drake now. I get it, but it just feels mad lazy to me idk
gun so big the arm look stupid, like the tats all tribal.round after round after round. they all spiral
gun butt you a block away. thats a long rifle. hipfire. shit kick from the side like Shawn Micheals
aight so i know this bar got alot of shine in the chat thread but tbh i didnt like this wording. Its a weird mix of longbar disguised as short bar haha. Idk bro im just not feelin it. Plus ive seen a few shawn micheal side kick bars in battle rap recently. Pretty sure marvwon had a mean one in his 2 vs 2 against chess & steams. This couldve been okay still, but the wording was goofy to me, mainly the setup more than the punch.
right and the left work well together. and theyh hit him where his face is.
you can get this loud left, right, left, its like millitary cadence
ok
Headshot. put a face to this round. you wilson from cast away
come to your house. grinding with the tre'.. im Xander Cage
i feel the same about this bar as i do yhe drake now bar


It's playoff time...
so I'm in beast mode; but this year I'm quiet just sitting cool
u got no time for animal control... tryin to make a splash with a gator in ur swimmin pool
i see where u were headed wit this but the wording didnt get your point across right imo.
u made playoffs & thought u'd beat old cats till Kenny & Des served clown
guess that goal was not met... & now's a total stranger to gettin out the first round
i deadass have reread this bar at least 10x and still dont get the punch. No hate, im not trying to be funny. Either im missing a personal here or the wording fucked this bar up
might be highly ranked in RMBVA but here Dr. death is responsible
u ain't bout that life... so I'ma put an end to it cuz this ain't ur General Hospital
im just not feelin
this a Wild West standoff but u not quick enough, so please stop
my trigger-finger fast cuz I'm at the range... between ya girl's clit & G-spot
ok
u'll do anything to beat the legend but the deception plays lethal
u must be spaced out cuz I'm killin that will... like the Independence Day sequel
decent
ya aim's lame while my nina named Angelina & she'll sooo hurt u
my gun bars are known for bein Wanted... cuz one shot will kill ya whole circle
ok concept but the execution hurt it


If i had to bet cash on this id be out of bread because i woulda figured nik was a sure bet. Idk what happened here but it was an upset imo and the winning drop wasnt impressive. No hate but this battle was weak. Im surprised at this.

Vote-mftastik

[Schadenfreude]

I'm stocked as fuck, wow. I was expecting Nik to be a problem, but he just didn't bring it. Lazy wording & punches w/ no impact..smh, usually Nik drops one of the best verses, but this was an overall miss. As for MF, bro came w/ his usual clever bars, but they're average imo. The thing is Nik was extremely disappointing, perhaps he took MF light or he was just depressingly uninspired, Idk but give it to MFTASTIK.

[Saint]

This was interesting. nika clearly took MF light and it cost him. I did think ill's wording is good but he normally has cleverly flipped punches and cool concepts but alot fell flat. I did get the not met/ total stranger and independence day was cool but alot of these came of lazy or like the opener - a few things going on that didnt land.

MF cane more direct, cannon and military cadence was ok/decent hits, shawn michaels was nice but hated ur opener. best friends a 40.. didnt care for execution.

vote - mftastick,

[Toil]

MF: opener, Shawn Michaels
Ill: Independence Day

Have seen Ill Nik-A come much nicer previously. MF got this one