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Old 04-01-2016, 04:35 AM   #1
Frank
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Exclamation "Turn Heel" - Starring MMLP and Frank

He turned the key in the lock and opened the door. To his horror, he saw…

The feet of his mom’s, as he stopped at the door
Seemingly shocked, I was lost in the pause
as her bottle was pouring, my mind was aghast
She wanted the story of the night that I’d had
The silence would last, as I think what to do
whilst hiding the stash, so its hidden from view.
The lips wouldn’t move in her wondering look
I’d shift to the room as I uttered ‘Its done’
Stunning me shook, uncomfortably numb
Dumped in the brook, Her body clumsily crooked, inside the luggage, blugeonedly stuffed
I covered her up in the dustiest rug, covered in soot, soaking up the loveliest blood
She mumbled and gushed, as I shoveled her up with a troublesome look, befuddled and bugged
She discovered my drugs, in one of my books
She flushed it, mistook it for rubbish
I punished her good, until I no longer was on the hook
I was too stubborn to look at how my evil unfolded
cutting her up in the heat of the moment
no real emotion as I start cleaning the knife
I needed to focus on concealing my fright
I was weeping inside and my mind was gone
I needed to hide as the time went on
her lifeless body had never left my sight
my sight was groggy and left me sensitized
But her severed thighs left me mesmerized, rectifying my floppy
I set her dress aside, eyeing her body with sexual intentions
I called over my posse
They answered their cell phones early in the morning like aspiring zombies
Mate "Remember the time, you said you had the hots for my mommy?"
Lip balm on her balmy mouth, he removed her blotchy stockings with awful desire
Nonchalantly, hardly desensitized over her flat lining heartbeat
The director rises, decrepit, fondly, impressed by everbody involved
He calmy calls for the Lars scene, ending it promptly
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