05-09-2016, 11:41 PM | #1 |
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Habitat 3-2 vs Sharp 3-2 - SHARP WINS
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Due Thursday Extension available. Minimum - 10 lines Max - 16 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding NO recycling You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls |
05-10-2016, 02:21 AM | #2 |
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You're dead
Good luck tho
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05-10-2016, 04:30 PM | #3 |
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10 please
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05-10-2016, 11:35 PM | #4 |
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05-12-2016, 04:53 PM | #5 |
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ya bitch need a real man and for that u ain't a supplier
so I'll say Elodea girl then immediately Plant my dick inside her Here's some food for thought, stop being a fuckin bitch ur in need of an epicure but being a faggots ur form of sustenance ur gun bars are trash like the rest ya shit w/ ur little pew pews my capsize'll leave u w/ that sinking feeling, ur a refugee on the evening news if u have a girl it's blatant ur whipped n' she'd have u home for 10 sharp .. Like the number of lines u had prewritten ur an attention whore, fuck u and all of ur people In fact everyone in the limelight- n I ain't talkin bout' ego
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MADE IT
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Cuz when the chips are down, you're dropping cutesy Pringle's lines You faggot Canuck. That ain't flames. It's part of a shit verse bruh If you ever come close to fire I hope it swallows you up w/ the rest of Alberta Ima crush you. Ya drops never deserved none of our praise I'm taking out Habit for Humanity - cept your home'll be an unmarked grave There's NO conspiracy against you. Your suck is just palpable bro You want props for your verses? That only fits cause you're as lame as a Gallagher show Your style looks like a struggle. Way past time to retire the pen Call me Aero's financial planner. I'm amazed that you're supplying 10 |
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05-14-2016, 07:16 AM | #7 |
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ya bitch need a real man and for that u ain't a supplier so I'll say Elodea girl then immediately Plant my dick inside her Hello dere? I get what ur doing dope attempt some will say slight force on wp Here's some food for thought, stop being a fuckin bitch ur in need of an epicure but being a faggots ur form of sustenance Didnt like how u worded the finisher ur gun bars are trash like the rest ya shit w/ ur little pew pews my capsize'll leave u w/ that sinking feeling, ur a refugee on the evening news Light jab Quote: Originally Posted bySharp 10 please if u have a girl it's blatant ur whipped n' she'd have u home for 10 sharp .. Like the number of lines u had prewritten Lol.ok ur an attention whore, fuck u and all of ur people In fact everyone in the limelight- n I ain't talkin bout' ego Nah Sharp Wanna know why you can't compete? Aint won votes a single time? Cuz when the chips are down, you're dropping cutesy Pringle's lines Cutesy didnt like that y didnt u just say pringles lines You faggot Canuck. That ain't flames. It's part of a shit verse bruh If you ever come close to fire I hope it swallows you up w/ the rest of Alberta Nice Ima crush you. Ya drops never deserved none of our praise I'm taking out Habit for Humanity - cept your home'll be an unmarked grave This was was tough dope np There's NO conspiracy against you. Your suck is just palpable bro You want props for your verses? That only fits cause you're as lame as a Gallagher show I felt this gallagher reference couldve been more creative not much impact Your style looks like a struggle. Way past time to retire the pen Call me Aero's financial planner. I'm amazed that you're supplying 10 Ok Hab had the opener and the 10 sharp np bar. Sharp had the alberta bar habitat for humanity wp and closer. I felt Sharp was more consistent here if he didnt have that habitat for humanity bar coulda went a different route. |
05-14-2016, 08:21 PM | #8 |
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ya bitch need a real man and for that u ain't a supplier
so I'll say Elodea girl then immediately Plant my dick inside her Took me second but it didn't go overhead. Creative wordplay Here's some food for thought, stop being a fuckin bitch ur in need of an epicure but being a faggots ur form of sustenance OK, interesting wp but the punch had zero bite to me ur gun bars are trash like the rest ya shit w/ ur little pew pews my capsize'll leave u w/ that sinking feeling, ur a refugee on the evening news Very old concept, the cap size shit has been getting done forget but the execution was decent if u have a girl it's blatant ur whipped n' she'd have u home for 10 sharp .. Like the number of lines u had prewritten Ok idea but the punch wasn't effective ur an attention whore, fuck u and all of ur people In fact everyone in the limelight- n I ain't talkin bout' ego Throwaway bar Wanna know why you can't compete? Aint won votes a single time? Cuz when the chips are down, you're dropping cutesy Pringle's lines LMAOOOOOO. idk but I fuck wit shit like this. This bar has flair Lol. The setup added to the humor of it all You faggot Canuck. That ain't flames. It's part of a shit verse bruh If you ever come close to fire I hope it swallows you up w/ the rest of Alberta Ok. Scheming. I dig it Ima crush you. Ya drops never deserved none of our praise I'm taking out Habit for Humanity - cept your home'll be an unmarked grave Solid nameflip There's NO conspiracy against you. Your suck is just palpable bro You want props for your verses? That only fits cause you're as lame as a Gallagher show ehh not a fan of any double entendres using the word props. Old shit Your style looks like a struggle. Way past time to retire the pen Call me Aero's financial planner. I'm amazed that you're supplying 10 Lol ok. Extra points for the double diss of an innocent bystander Habitat had his moments but just got out barred here. Sharps opener was hilarious to me. He was consistent excluding the prop bar but everything else was good. Vote- sharp
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05-14-2016, 08:30 PM | #9 |
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V/ sharp
Hab had sum decent wordplay but i felt his verse fell off towards the end. Decent drop. Meanwhile i frlt sharp's verse was a bit more consistent. I liked the habit wp, the opener and the closer. The Alberta bar could have been a bit better imo but it was solid. V/ sharp for the better overall verse. |
05-14-2016, 09:13 PM | #10 |
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sharp got it, just consistently hit harder
habitat, i almost want to quote a WP but they don't work both ways.. and even one way they still light.. wasnt a fan of this verse, tbh.. sharp, habit & closer.. coo enough verse vote sharp |
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elodea
vs sharp's first 3, opener being lotb fresh u can do better , sharp got it v/sharp
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