Championship Match: Orc 7-0 vs Tic 6-1 - (ORC WINS)

[Orc]

NBL Season 9


Due THURSDAY

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@Tic

[Tic]

Sup. Wanna go 16?

[Orc]

sure

[Orc]

I'll need until a few hours after deadline if that's okay. Just started a new job man I can't turn down the hours.

[Tic]

Cool with me @Orc I have my 12.

[Tic]

This fgt loves text vets. Check his style, Fanfare is heavy
You Kiss Ass…& biting But was just a reflex from being down there already
Actin like you brought the NBL back on ya own, you’re wacked as it is
Mags remind us of ya verses. Take alllll the credit but don’t write half’a the shit
& Fuck ya nationality. Idc if you Irish, German or attention whore
I’ll smash a beer Origin bottle over ya head til you can’t remember yours
Despised Cashius ever since that S&F loss, leavin ya face smashed
And knowing ya moms a Dime just gives you all the more reason to hate Cash
Dude loves his broad but I’ll end that puta, fag
Stab the bitch…then watch ya 2nd Half Collapse like the Utah Jazz
I’m tougher than Orc. Cut ya dome off & watch vitals plummet for sport
Slice ya abdomen, stuff ya Head inside ‘n watch you Stomach the Thought

[Orc]

Whattup Orc Jr?

Lemme show you how to do it proper,

You'll get Iced in a second. Knifed in the Neck til ya life is bogus
& these Blades of Glory will take ya Head Off. we call that the Iron Lotus
You bit my wholeee steez; now u tryna get them bars off?!
Dog if YOU have a Signature Style, you're ending letters with ''Regards, Orc''
Orc's vision is legendary. & u tryna copy this? dude stop...
Quit tryna get that Burd's Eye View before you get Dropped from a Rooftop
O's cool w/ Sucka, Shazo & Riff. I'm even friendly with Seanzo
But you don't fuck with them RM boys cuz they always mention that Longnose
Been hearing biter lines alll season. That shit is a waste
&&&If this dude calls me a Shark it's ironic with that fucking Fin on his face
Homie is next & the masks black, Carbines gripped if it's past rap
Orc's the Kobe of text & if them Two .30s Get Shot then this your Last Match

[Hush]

Originally Posted by Tic

This fgt loves text vets. Check his style, Fanfare is heavy
You Kiss Ass…& biting But was just a reflex from being down there already
nope
Actin like you brought the NBL back on ya own, you’re wacked as it is
Mags remind us of ya verses. Take alllll the credit but don’t write half’a the shit
ok nice
& Fuck ya nationality. Idc if you Irish, German or attention whore
I’ll smash a beer Origin bottle over ya head til you can’t remember yours
ok
Despised Cashius ever since that S&F loss, leavin ya face smashed
And knowing ya moms a Dime just gives you all the more reason to hate Cash
lol nah this corny wtf
Dude loves his broad but I’ll end that puta, fag
Stab the bitch…then watch ya 2nd Half Collapse like the Utah Jazz
dope concept the execution was meh
I’m tougher than Orc. Cut ya dome off & watch vitals plummet for sport
Slice ya abdomen, stuff ya Head inside ‘n watch you Stomach the Thought
this is fucking terrible wth bro. this is cringe bad. this some DNA shit

Originally Posted by Orc

Whattup Orc Jr?

Lemme show you how to do it proper,

You'll get Iced in a second. Knifed in the Neck til ya life is bogus
& these Blades of Glory will take ya Head Off. we call that the Iron Lotus
never saw that movie cuz Im not a faggot
You bit my wholeee steez; now u tryna get them bars off?!
Dog if YOU have a Signature Style, you're ending letters with ''Regards, Orc''
dope. feels old tho
Orc's vision is legendary. & u tryna copy this? dude stop...
Quit tryna get that Burd's Eye View before you get Dropped from a Rooftop
nicely executed but this a old ass concept so im like meh
O's cool w/ Sucka, Shazo & Riff. I'm even friendly with Seanzo
But you don't fuck with them RM boys cuz they always mention that Longnose
LOL ok fire.
Been hearing biter lines alll season. That shit is a waste
&&&If this dude calls me a Shark it's ironic with that fucking Fin on his face
ok
Homie is next & the masks black, Carbines gripped if it's past rap
Orc's the Kobe of text & if them Two .30s Get Shot then this your Last Match
wowzas, u did that. salute

Orc last line was fucking beast. Like frfr


v>Orc

[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by Tic

Opener, writing credit, & Utah Jazz.

Idk, really didn't have any killer in this verse, usually u drop 1 or 2 haymakers, this verse was just ok, somewhat unimpactful.

versus

Originally Posted by Orc

Opener, longnose, sharkfin & closer.

Had a couple of ancient concepts, but the rest was pretty good, nothing amazing, but highly effective, especially the 'longnose' line.

Overall ORC takes the W.

[Saitama]

This fgt loves text vets. Check his style, Fanfare is heavy
You Kiss Ass…& biting But was just a reflex from being down there already
I liked this angle, could've been worded stronger..

Actin like you brought the NBL back on ya own, you’re wacked as it is
Mags remind us of ya verses. Take alllll the credit but don’t write half’a the shit
cool personal...maybe not so relevant now, but not bad

& Fuck ya nationality. Idc if you Irish, German or attention whore
I’ll smash a beer Origin bottle over ya head til you can’t remember yours
I dont want to like this, it almost dont work both ways but the origin /irish drinking thing were decent tie ins..

Despised Cashius ever since that S&F loss, leavin ya face smashed
And knowing ya moms a Dime just gives you all the more reason to hate Cash
You lost me here bro, dime/cash nah

Dude loves his broad but I’ll end that puta, fag
Stab the bitch…then watch ya 2nd Half Collapse like the Utah Jazz
Nice concept. wording/execution was eh

I’m tougher than Orc. Cut ya dome off & watch vitals plummet for sport
Slice ya abdomen, stuff ya Head inside ‘n watch you Stomach the Thought
This was a big miss imo. but it made me laugh, wth lol

Whattup Orc Jr?

Lemme show you how to do it proper,

You'll get Iced in a second. Knifed in the Neck til ya life is bogus
& these Blades of Glory will take ya Head Off. we call that the Iron Lotus
Not bad. I had an idea like this...ok opener

You bit my wholeee steez; now u tryna get them bars off?!
Dog if YOU have a Signature Style, you're ending letters with ''Regards, Orc''
Ok personal on em, feels familiar in approach i.e signature

Orcs vision is legendary. & u tryna copy this? dude stop...
Quit tryna get that Burd's Eye View before you get Dropped from a Rooftop
Decent flip of a bird line I've seen & used..

O's cool w/ Sucka, Shazo & Riff. I'm even friendly with Seanzo
But you don't fuck with them RM boys cuz they always mention that Longnose
Not bad.. seen a few tic/longnose lines - imo

Been hearing biter lines alll season. That shit is a waste
&&&If this dude calls me a Shark it's ironic with that fucking Fin on his face
Homie is next & the masks black, Carbines gripped if it's past rap
Orc's the Kobe of text & if them Two .30s Get Shot then this your Last Match

Fin was coo.. closer was a cool current event and lotb, imo.. tic lost me halfway while orc kept the pace, no real misses or eh lines, tic seemed to dial it down, imo..

V - Orc

[Useless]

This fgt loves text vets. Check his style, Fanfare is heavy
You Kiss Ass…& biting But was just a reflex from being down there already
--- garbage
Actin like you brought the NBL back on ya own, you’re wacked as it is
Mags remind us of ya verses. Take alllll the credit but don’t write half’a the shit
--- good personal
& Fuck ya nationality. Idc if you Irish, German or attention whore
I’ll smash a beer Origin bottle over ya head til you can’t remember yours
--- nice
Despised Cashius ever since that S&F loss, leavin ya face smashed
And knowing ya moms a Dime just gives you all the more reason to hate Cash
--- when I first started back I did a dime/cash bar Vs that New Orleans fan dude with the scoliosis or whatever (can't remember his name for some reason) and was told the connection was too loose. I see what they mean now. Word association alone isn't enough..........
Dude loves his broad but I’ll end that puta, fag
Stab the bitch…then watch ya 2nd Half Collapse like the Utah Jazz
--- Iike this. The angle really helped....
I’m tougher than Orc. Cut ya dome off & watch vitals plummet for sport
Slice ya abdomen, stuff ya Head inside ‘n watch you Stomach the Thought
--- doesn't rhyme and it's garbage.


Vs.


You'll get Iced in a second. Knifed in the Neck til ya life is bogus
& these Blades of Glory will take ya Head Off. we call that the Iron Lotus
--- ehh. That movie is kinda old weird u would do a blades of glory ref in 2016 lol..........
You bit my wholeee steez; now u tryna get them bars off?!
Dog if YOU have a Signature Style, you're ending letters with ''Regards, Orc''
--- off/orc doesn't rhyme but this is aite......
Orc's vision is legendary. & u tryna copy this? dude stop...
Quit tryna get that Burd's Eye View before you get Dropped from a Rooftop
--- bruh. If its played to death against u, that means it's still played when u do it lol. Orc using a played nameplay on himself lmao wtf is going on.........
O's cool w/ Sucka, Shazo & Riff. I'm even friendly with Seanzo
But you don't fuck with them RM boys cuz they always mention that Longnose
--- nice.........
Been hearing biter lines alll season. That shit is a waste
&&&If this dude calls me a Shark it's ironic with that fucking Fin on his face
--- dead.....even better cuz he had that terrible biter line lol........
Homie is next & the masks black, Carbines gripped if it's past rap
Orc's the Kobe of text & if them Two .30s Get Shot then this your Last Match
--- dope even for a gun bar........



Nice battle. If tic woulda had two aite lines instead of two terrible lines I might of leaned his way but orc had them two nose lines and a dope gun bar.





V. Orc

[Unfukwitable]

Actin like you brought the NBL back on ya own, you’re wacked as it is
Mags remind us of ya verses. Take alllll the credit but don’t write half’a the shit
& Fuck ya nationality. Idc if you Irish, German or attention whore
I’ll smash a beer Origin bottle over ya head til you can’t remember yours
Dude loves his broad but I’ll end that puta, fag
Stab the bitch…then watch ya 2nd Half Collapse like the Utah Jazz


vs


You'll get Iced in a second. Knifed in the Neck til ya life is bogus
& these Blades of Glory will take ya Head Off. we call that the Iron Lotus
You bit my wholeee steez; now u tryna get them bars off?!
Dog if YOU have a Signature Style, you're ending letters with ''Regards, Orc''
Been hearing biter lines alll season. That shit is a waste
&&&If this dude calls me a Shark it's ironic with that fucking Fin on his face
Homie is next & the masks black, Carbines gripped if it's past rap
Orc's the Kobe of text & if them Two .30s Get Shot then this your Last Match


Nice spar here a couple lines was very scrap'able but I liked what Yall came with one had a extra quote and slightly better ones also. v/Orc

props to both, 100.

[Barcotic]

lmao^ wow

mags personal
beer origin
2nd half collapse (lotb)

vs

longnose
two 30's (tied for lotb)

I dunno man I got orc rushing his verse this week prolly due to the new job or w/e, I mean he's usually way more consistent n really hard to beat. I get the iron lotus line but why would anyone call their blades their blades of glory? an signature style is a pretty old concept, closer was fire tho, so was 2nd half collapse by tic

I gtg w/ the upset here

v/tic

[Joe Boston]

Tic

Opener lmao good flip
Mag personal was dope
Origin wordplay and the flip was dope best bar out of verse direct punch
Utah Jazz

Orc

Burds eye view dope flip
Shark fin on face lol not sure who dude is but from it he has a big nose i guess
Closer cool nice flip current hit

V/Tic def dude was more creative here and consistent. Orc man idk fell off this verse i felt some rhyme scheme in a couple bars shit didnt even rhyme. He drops much better just not as creative this time like i usually see it. Think he rushed.

[Kenny the OG]

At best I can ALMOST quote the origin wp as being ok. And almost the "taking credit" bar, but that's more of a personal preference bc sometime I like a direct, no flip/wp/nameplay type attack to add diversity to the verse.
Orcs first 3 bars were ehhhh to me. Tbh. The middle 2 bars are eluding to this guy having a big ass nose I'm guessing. Idk bc idk what he looks like so that kinda took some of the sting off. But the shark-fin-nose angle bar itself was worded well and connected. Good shit. The closer was eh.

Lackluster battle tbh but shit happens.

Vote orc

[Destroyer]

tic's mag line was fierce and Utah Jazz was fire

Orc had longnose and closer which were both fire too

this was close but I got Orc wth better misses than Tic and that closer woooooo

v/Irish

[Cashius]

Magazine, Jazz

Vs.

Signature Style, long nose, closer

Orc got this. More quotables, better misses, cleaner wording.

[Artifice]

This fgt loves text vets. Check his style, Fanfare is heavy
You Kiss Ass…& biting But was just a reflex from being down there already
Actin like you brought the NBL back on ya own, you’re wacked as it is
Mags remind us of ya verses. Take alllll the credit but don’t write half’a the shit
& Fuck ya nationality. Idc if you Irish, German or attention whore
I’ll smash a beer Origin bottle over ya head til you can’t remember yours
Dude loves his broad but I’ll end that puta, fag
Stab the bitch…then watch ya 2nd Half Collapse like the Utah Jazz

vs

O's cool w/ Sucka, Shazo & Riff. I'm even friendly with Seanzo
But you don't fuck with them RM boys cuz they always mention that Longnose
Been hearing biter lines alll season. That shit is a waste
&&&If this dude calls me a Shark it's ironic with that fucking Fin on his face
Homie is next & the masks black, Carbines gripped if it's past rap
Orc's the Kobe of text & if them Two .30s Get Shot then this your Last Match

i got tic edging this one with one more quote... close battle, could see it going either way... almost quoted Orc's 'burds eye view' line but I feel if burd lines are played against him, i can't quote him for using a played concept in his favour... just my take on it. Good looks from both, but...

v/ Tic