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Let's get this out the way...
A waste of bars on a loser not even worth a good sentence ..dude u’ve done shit worthy of mention, except maybe perfect attendance. Whether hands or jokes, I throw punches u can’t approach, see I know Spreewell.. enough to choke him out like Latrell did that coach. even carjacked his Uber & stuffed my whole crew in the cab shoved my new Ruge in his abs, barrel flash had him like Cam doing the dab. yo hoe gave courtesy humps, til u Captain Saved her, chump swear to God the bitch should be a crisis counselor - she got u from the jump. Even in the 1-2 he’s straight ass, so fam stands no chance, fool’s been dropping one bar at a time, mfer would even lose a limbo dance. an easy match, didn’t even wanna brawl w/ dude, he wack.. a due date’s all that he’ll beat, wouldn’t see Kill streak on a Call of Duty map. ..BODY. |
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Spree reel In wins W/Hooks, no way this Lame hittin me ya body'll be found in the River, Shad..By ya local members of Game & Fisheries Fuck W/Me? shiiit... I'll put the snub to ya cheek, kid Really give you a sensodyne as soon as I'm done punchin ya teeth In A Flash of light from you is wack shit..damn faggot we saw kid Destroyer Pic's...now we wont See you in champ matches Wack bitch, U Wood box W/god, but I'll smack ya backwids we'll remember U as down to earth.. as I bury you more FT than ya average casket I punch Hoe fakes. no contenders, but U'll Fail again but KNOW I'll fuck you up more than Bags swingin @ fags or sum Aliens this hoe man be gettin snot box hits, this dope no man can see My lines go Pow Durin sets.. so its nothing to bring your nose candy |
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Let's get this out the way...
A waste of bars on a loser not even worth a good sentence ..dude u’ve done shit worthy of mention, except maybe perfect attendance. nah Whether hands or jokes, I throw punches u can’t approach, see I know Spreewell.. enough to choke him out like Latrell did that coach. havent seen this one before, alright not bad even carjacked his Uber & stuffed my whole crew in the cab shoved my new Ruge in his abs, barrel flash had him like Cam doing the dab. cringed yo hoe gave courtesy humps, til u Captain Saved her, chump swear to God the bitch should be a crisis counselor - she got u from the jump. wording, but decent Even in the 1-2 he’s straight ass, so fam stands no chance, fool’s been dropping one bar at a time, mfer would even lose a limbo dance. lol ur dissing him being in the 1-2? I get the bar/limbo ref but this was kinda wack imo an easy match, didn’t even wanna brawl w/ dude, he wack.. a due date’s all that he’ll beat, wouldn’t see Kill streak on a Call of Duty map. ehh think I've seen cod ref's on him before Not really sure who you are but I think I've read better verses from you while browsing. I liked the spreewell line but aside from that I wasn't feeling much. Vs Listen... Spree reel In wins W/Hooks, no way this Lame hittin me ya body'll be found in the River, Shad..By ya local members of Game & Fisheries decent Fuck W/Me? shiiit... I'll put the snub to ya cheek, kid Really give you a sensodyne as soon as I'm done punchin ya teeth In this was nice A Flash of light from you is wack shit..damn faggot we saw kid Destroyer Pic's...now we wont See you in champ matches meh bc of the played wp Wack bitch, U Wood box W/god, but I'll smack ya backwids we'll remember U as down to earth.. as I bury you more FT than ya average casket nah played I punch Hoe fakes. no contenders, but U'll Fail again but KNOW I'll fuck you up more than Bags swingin @ fags or sum Aliens edging decent here this hoe man be gettin snot box hits, this dope no man can see My lines go Pow Durin sets.. so its nothing to bring your nose candy forced but decent again ngl I hate voting for you but your verse was decent, you had the sensodyne line that was lotb and the rest of your stuff was pretty much decent, nothing horrible. Vote: KS |
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Schad
Attendance is just a jab. Spreewell line had fresh wording. Dab line ok - I just did one last week so its hard for me to judge it. Crisis Counselor is dope af. 1-2 - setup is doper than the punch. Wish you coulda found somethin similar but better than limbo. Closer is dope. Rhyme scheme dope. Swagger was the predominant tone of the verse. vs Spree I had to google what a shad was, so this one lost on me, sorry. Sensodyne is ok as a flip, but needed a better concept around it. Destroyer line is a nice personal. Casket line has too much goin on. I never read that Bags thread. Wording in the closer is all over the place. Vote -- Schadenfreude. Spree was too wordy, I felt like you need to bring your concepts back down to earth - way too much going on in there. Schad had good feel to the verse, crisis counselor was LOTB - nice execution. I really liked the closer and was almost all in on the 1-2 punch line.
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Schaden, that opener was dope and the second bar was cool
KS, the sensodyne was cool I got scahden
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KS had a couple cool concepts, sensodyne could've been fire with better wording..
Wording held you back on ok concepts... Schade - I've seen the spreewell too much on KS, that said your crisis counselor was good and closer was a solid flip. So I have schade by one solid hit w/ that crisis line.. Vote Schade |
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A waste of bars on a loser not even worth a good sentence
..dude u’ve done shit worthy of mention, except maybe perfect attendance. Cool opener Whether hands or jokes, I throw punches u can’t approach, see I know Spreewell.. enough to choke him out like Latrell did that coach. Descent, nice nameflip even carjacked his Uber & stuffed my whole crew in the cab shoved my new Ruge in his abs, barrel flash had him like Cam doing the dab. eh..borderline..wack yo hoe gave courtesy humps, til u Captain Saved her, chump swear to God the bitch should be a crisis counselor - she got u from the jump. That was crack best bar of the battle Even in the 1-2 he’s straight ass, so fam stands no chance, fool’s been dropping one bar at a time, mfer would even lose a limbo dance. Now you cookin, dope an easy match, didn’t even wanna brawl w/ dude, he wack.. a due date’s all that he’ll beat, wouldn’t see Kill streak on a Call of Duty map. Was okay closer, could've been stronger. Listen... Spree reel In wins W/Hooks, no way this Lame hittin me ya body'll be found in the River, Shad..By ya local members of Game & Fisheries Weak opener Fuck W/Me? shiiit... I'll put the snub to ya cheek, kid Really give you a sensodyne as soon as I'm done punchin ya teeth In Reach like a muthafucca, rhyming was off. A Flash of light from you is wack shit..damn faggot we saw kid Destroyer Pic's...now we wont See you in champ matches Didn't get it, maybe cuz I'm new. Wack bitch, U Wood box W/god, but I'll smack ya backwids we'll remember U as down to earth.. as I bury you more FT than ya average casket Filler, rhyming off I punch Hoe fakes. no contenders, but U'll Fail again but KNOW I'll fuck you up more than Bags swingin @ fags or sum Aliens this hoe man be gettin snot box hits, this dope no man can see My lines go Pow Durin sets.. so its nothing to bring your nose candy wack Schadenfreude got the w easy..with an okay verse. spree needs a lil more work. __________________ |
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Damn killing spree was wack in This to which is weird cuz I usually feel his bars I got shad by a fair margin |
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A waste of bars on a loser not even worth a good sentence
..dude u’ve done shit worthy of mention, except maybe perfect attendance. Cool. Whether hands or jokes, I throw punches u can’t approach, see I know Spreewell.. enough to choke him out like Latrell did that coach. Probably been done but I like it. even carjacked his Uber & stuffed my whole crew in the cab shoved my new Ruge in his abs, barrel flash had him like Cam doing the dab. Ok. yo hoe gave courtesy humps, til u Captain Saved her, chump swear to God the bitch should be a crisis counselor - she got u from the jump. Dope. Even in the 1-2 he’s straight ass, so fam stands no chance, fool’s been dropping one bar at a time, mfer would even lose a limbo dance. Cool. an easy match, didn’t even wanna brawl w/ dude, he wack.. a due date’s all that he’ll beat, wouldn’t see Kill streak on a Call of Duty map. Nothing special. Probably has been done before. Spree reel In wins W/Hooks, no way this Lame hittin me ya body'll be found in the River, Shad..By ya local members of Game & Fisheries I dont get it. Fuck W/Me? shiiit... I'll put the snub to ya cheek, kid Really give you a sensodyne as soon as I'm done punchin ya teeth In Cool. A Flash of light from you is wack shit..damn faggot we saw kid Destroyer Pic's...now we wont See you in champ matches ok. Wack bitch, U Wood box W/god, but I'll smack ya backwids we'll remember U as down to earth.. as I bury you more FT than ya average casket nah. I punch Hoe fakes. no contenders, but U'll Fail again but KNOW I'll fuck you up more than Bags swingin @ fags or sum Aliens nah. this hoe man be gettin snot box hits, this dope no man can see My lines go Pow Durin sets.. so its nothing to bring your nose candy Nah. Schad was more consistent here. KS tried doing too much. It killed his concepts. Vote- Schadenfreude. |
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Idk I see it different I think Spree took it with Sensodyne. Lotb for me. Shad had the opener and that was kinda it. I've seen spreewell done on him before. I wasn't feeling either verse tbh, but I think Spree edged it here.
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