Resin M-I-C vs Wanderer - (Resin wins)

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@Resin M-I-C @Wanderer

[Wanderer]

10

[Resin M-I-C]

goon
noon
toon
poon
dune
prune
soon
moon
coon
loon

[Wanderer]

Shit man, got confused cos the last time I used to do this deadlines were Thursdays. My bad tho, shoulda paid more attention.. can I still drop?

[Resin M-I-C]

go for it homie

[Wanderer]

Flare-ups around your mouth homie. Now THAT I can envision
cos it wouldn't be the first time Resin's been linked with skin conditions
Bitch get killed for Dancing to the tune of so called greats
Only V is the autopsy no Nylon shirt cut down to the waist
Steppin' to me is costly. I'll hold the broke bottle to ya neck try n stop me
Instead of steel my weapon be Glacier cos up against me you're slow movin & frosty
I'll go down under on ya girl but before you can even start a fight
That wallaby covered in brain matter & there ain't a marsupial in sight
If the chatter matches your writing, chicks ain't impressed by someone so bland
Funny, girls never hover around you it's just your punches that never land

[Resin M-I-C]

uh ok


Aiyyo
one punch'll leave this British prick's teeth in different places
n leave you more Bloody than the fuckin adjectives you use on a daily basis.
send u to a hospital with a sickly feel, ya whole body stitched & sealed
on a breathing machine n u'll be hooked up to the wall with i.v. like wrigley field.
fuck u, fuck the colony u came from, fuck ur ugly ass features
u think the English major? in America that gets u as far as a kindergarten teacher.
u a skinny nerd.. a gust of wind can leave u defeated n hurt
mahfucka got a psychic's wardrobe.. just a closet full of medium shirts.
have some Pride in urself, u need to start to pick up some weights n curl
u could be an Axe murderer but all the body spray in the world wont help Wanderlei a girl.
Mahfucka.

[Useless]

Lol @ wanderlei


I'll edit my vote in

[Saint]

Flare-ups around your mouth homie. Now THAT I can envision
cos it wouldn't be the first time Resin's been linked with skin conditions
^Is this a personal, or flip on his name? Either way its weak imo..

Bitch get killed for Dancing to the tune of so called greats
Only V is the autopsy no Nylon shirt cut down to the waist
^ thought the wording was incomplete. Why would he dance to the tune of so called greats?
Fresh concept tho
Steppin to me is costly. I'll hold the broke bottle to ya neck try n stop me
Instead of steel my weapon be Glacier cos up against me you're slow movin & frosty
Did u try to make Glacier sound like glass? If so, thats terrible

I'll go down under on ya girl but before you can even start a fight
That wallaby covered in brain matter & there ain't a marsupial in sight
^ Dominate used this wordplay. Hes Aussie, but outside of it being tied in to the outback.. r walkabies covered in grey matter?

If the chatter matches your writing, chicks ain't impressed by someone so bland
Funny, girls never hover around you it's just your punches that never land
^ wack.hover/land simple and not flipped well

I thought that wanderlei line was lotb, lol pretty much took it for resin. bloody talk and Wrigley were ok too

Vote resin

[Pinot Grij]

Wanderer - you had the vague semblance of some workable concepts, but all of them fell short. The v-neck/autopsy imagery is good, but the punch didn't come together well. I don't know what the Glacier wordplay is, but the punch connected to it - like calling someone "slow-moving and frosty" isn't really that killer. Those punches can be made better with stronger wordplay, but I don't think you grasped that with this one. The wallaby line is decent wordplay, but the setup doesn't really connect that well. "Down under / wallaby" - like, I don't get the imagery of you eating dude's girl's pussy and then shooting him. The scene doesn't jive right, nomesayin? Opener and closer were kinda weak - everything in the middle had potential, I just think you gotta work on wording and think through your punches a little further.

Resin I think slayed with the first 4. The bloody line was funny and set the tone immediately. The IV line came next and the battle was over. English major is a cool concept. Medium shirts is cool too. Closer is cool wordplay. Hits all around and crazy originality.

Vote-- Resin MIC

[ill nik-A]

Wanderer
Sorry wasn't a fan

Resin
Pretty solid but I did that bloody line ages ago in PBA

I got resin

[Destroyer]

Wanderer had very little, and what he did have was played, like wallaby

Resin came nice. Wanderlei was lotb. English major was funny too.wrigley field was dope

V/resin

[Tic]

I'll go down under on ya girl but before you can even start a fight
That wallaby covered in brain matter & there ain't a marsupial in sight

vs

one punch'll leave this British prick's teeth in different places
n leave you more Bloody than the fuckin adjectives you use on a daily basis.
send u to a hospital with a sickly feel, ya whole body stitched & sealed
on a breathing machine n u'll be hooked up to the wall with i.v. like wrigley field.
fuck u, fuck the colony u came from, fuck ur ugly ass features
u think the English major? in America that gets u as far as a kindergarten teacher.
have some Pride in urself, u need to start to pick up some weights n curl
u could be an Axe murderer but all the body spray in the world wont help Wanderlei a girl.

Resin went in. That Wrigley field line was fire.

[10 Senses]

I vote Resin, he made me laugh a few times.. Nice.

[Adonis]

Dead at the thought of V neck down to waist.

I liked the bloody and adjective and leaned at closet full of medium shirts. Name play ok.

Wander had more filer, while resin had filer but they're were still either set ups, jabs or just clowning.

V/res