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something · 11-05-2015, 10:33 AM

The composition of words. Composer of thoughts. Puzzle pieces like memories I can't focus or draw. Conceptual theories. Foggy are themes. At the edge of my vision and lost like a dream. I think fables as inspiration. Simplistic and true. My scope outweighs my talent and it's wrenching to prove with every sentence I prune. I sense it's a snippet of what I've intended to do. Nothing's meant, it's just what I could finish that's used. I fantasize; abandon life. Devote yourself to be better, but I know the hell in that effort. I'm an aborted abortion. My genius is tethered to mundane survival. Monday's and cycles of numb, faded eye balls. I love hatred. Primal lust tastes alive. Two sluts late for high school being rough up. Trained to like cruel. American psycho. Cultural hi-jinx. I'm vulnerable. A culprit in crime sprees I cultivate in my mind to poke a space through the time sheets. The smile of a nihilist. Only religious to sciences. A serial killer and product of my environment.

Pharaohs Army · 11-25-2015, 04:38 PM

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Originally Posted by something

I fantasize; abandon life. Devote yourself to be better, but I know the hell in that effort. I'm an aborted abortion. My genius is tethered to mundane survival. Monday's and cycles of numb, faded eye balls.

keep doing

Exis · 12-24-2015, 03:39 AM

You've flow for days, should collab with CopyPat on a brag joint...shit could go off.

Stay upright.

david stern razor burns · 01-08-2016, 02:12 PM

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11-05-2015, 10:33 AM	#1
something Junior Member Join Date: May 2015 Posts: 12 Champed - OM VOTM June 2015 Rep Power: 0	rhymes The composition of words. Composer of thoughts. Puzzle pieces like memories I can't focus or draw. Conceptual theories. Foggy are themes. At the edge of my vision and lost like a dream. I think fables as inspiration. Simplistic and true. My scope outweighs my talent and it's wrenching to prove with every sentence I prune. I sense it's a snippet of what I've intended to do. Nothing's meant, it's just what I could finish that's used. I fantasize; abandon life. Devote yourself to be better, but I know the hell in that effort. I'm an aborted abortion. My genius is tethered to mundane survival. Monday's and cycles of numb, faded eye balls. I love hatred. Primal lust tastes alive. Two sluts late for high school being rough up. Trained to like cruel. American psycho. Cultural hi-jinx. I'm vulnerable. A culprit in crime sprees I cultivate in my mind to poke a space through the time sheets. The smile of a nihilist. Only religious to sciences. A serial killer and product of my environment.

12-24-2015, 03:39 AM	#3
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	You've flow for days, should collab with CopyPat on a brag joint...shit could go off. Stay upright.

01-08-2016, 02:12 PM	#4
david stern razor burns with razor spurs Join Date: Mar 2014 Location: At David Blaine's favorite place with David Spade and Macy Gray Posts: 87 Rep Power: 3750190	This is excellent. You should post substantially more. Very well done, sir. Most impressive.