[WEEK I]Innovator vs Objective OPEN FOR VOTES

[Inno]

LGPA Season 2: Week I

@Objective

Check ins: MondayMidnight Eastern time)
Poems Due: Wednesday (Midnight Eastern time)
Votes due: Sunday (Midnight Eastern time)


Topic:

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Goodluck

[Inno]

Check

[Objective]

In if the topic is posted today, I might only have today to write/post and it's already 6pm. Why wasn't the topics ready from the start? :p

[Inno]

black and white tones seep
through fibers of his canvas;
engulfing color

[Objective]

.:: The big fight ::.

[img]https://s-media-***he-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/29/6d/02/296d02679e368cc112b3a2a3c817b565.jpg[/img]

Life is nothing but a split personality constant fight with yourself in the ring.
Often divided by a choice.
One stronger than the other,
and more meaningful.

It's not as much the pace
that makes it interesting.
It's the finesse;
the moves;
the playful dance;
the hard hits to facial regions
and devastating body shots
as glory from the crowd begs
for it to go on.

You fight yourself up for a second round,
a heave, and a weave,
punches miss as the
roar from the crowd
demands action.

Then it slows down,
the effort has been 100%.
Defeat becomes absolute
as the promised fighter
finally goes down for
countdown.
... 8, 9, 10..!
*DING DING DING*
!!KNOCKOUT!!

In the end,
was it worth it?

Even more important:
Who did you root for?

[Vulgar]

Innovator - This was just okay to me. Almost like commenting on a black and white picture - yes, it's black and white. But what else? Observing colors is cool, just lacks a little something extra. I like more info.

Objective - Alright, so this was more fashionable than Inno's. You had an engaging approach. The stanzas had action and things were taking place on an active scene - this is what made it soar above your opponent's. The outcome was okay. I didn't siphon anything deep or rewarding from this. But it was cool.

Vote - Objective

[Adonis]

V/ Jective

I enjoyed the slow pace and imagery OB painted. You didn't go full on action which would have been obvious. Instead you posted something more, well not introspective but less action and more by standard scenery. Hope you stick around this time. Inno on the other hand, for starters, while I enjoyed the verse, I did not enjoy the the break in first and second line. In the end, length did you in obviously

[Inno]

Objective wins