Poppin' yall..New here... Straight outta Ohio cowtown..Just introducin' myself..

Blaccalicious · 08-26-2015, 03:09 PM

Couple gun references to show my studio gangsta side :-)

You a hit or miss, miss me with it /
'fore I do a misdemeanor, blame it on, won't take the blame say missy did it///
misfit that's mystic/
armed n ready ya palms is sweaty heart is heavy n miss ticks/
moms spaghetti, how did I know ya din dish///
you nervous still,/
you big shit? My nerv, forreal ya nerf miss-illz/
will get shredded intercepting warheads
give you nerves of steel///
you wore red
- like dudes who warm benches
check ya shirt 4real/
got murkers ill/, enuff to turn never land trips to murderville,///
hamburger hill/ peel or the potato getting drilled/
and your face turn to potato dip party serving for frills///
get togethers broke apart/, the thrown is ours/
ol Gz ain't thrown as ours/, old English how I hold "A" "R",///
proper grip on gun talk language gun ranges, spelling "B"z/
fuck smileys Im spelling "L-A-C-C"/
on ya door lets sound it out.. "B-L-A" read. Be///-L.A. Reid's protege/ on Sony paid/
they'll say "homie changed./
Went to yeezys from sauconys suede///

Strikta · 08-26-2015, 04:18 PM

you nervous still,/
you big shit? My nerv, forreal ya nerf miss-illz/
will get shredded intercepting warheads
give you nerves of steel///
you wore red
- like dudes who warm benches
check ya shirt 4real/

Man I don't know why exactly... but this shit was raw to me. Lol

U got a ways to go tho man.. look around a bit & check out others work.. you'll see what I mean.

I'd say u got some potential tho.

Wise Wiggles · 08-26-2015, 04:37 PM

Went pretty hard here. Raw flow. Had me making that disgusting face a time or two. Welcome to the site. Easy.

sral · 08-26-2015, 05:53 PM

Turn neverland trips to murderville was cold

hated the eminem moms spaghetti ish in there though tbh

keep that pen moving!

Hush · 08-27-2015, 12:06 PM

I'm in Ohio too! Let's hang out and shoot at shit

Pharaohs Army · 09-06-2015, 06:09 PM

got murkers ill/, enuff to turn never land trips to murderville,///
cool

It looks like you know how to rhyme and rap.
But both above&below the line i quoted, i thought there was a bunch of wordplay/letter-play/phrases which were pretty lame..

As a whole I didn't like this very much, but I'm only being so harsh because, based on some traits I see, I know you have the ability to make something much better, even if it has this same kind of tone/content

08-26-2015, 03:09 PM	#1
Blaccalicious Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2015 Posts: 12 Rep Power: 0	Poppin' yall..New here... Straight outta Ohio cowtown..Just introducin' myself.. Couple gun references to show my studio gangsta side :-) You a hit or miss, miss me with it / 'fore I do a misdemeanor, blame it on, won't take the blame say missy did it/// misfit that's mystic/ armed n ready ya palms is sweaty heart is heavy n miss ticks/ moms spaghetti, how did I know ya din dish/// you nervous still,/ you big shit? My nerv, forreal ya nerf miss-illz/ will get shredded intercepting warheads give you nerves of steel/// you wore red - like dudes who warm benches check ya shirt 4real/ got murkers ill/, enuff to turn never land trips to murderville,/// hamburger hill/ peel or the potato getting drilled/ and your face turn to potato dip party serving for frills/// get togethers broke apart/, the thrown is ours/ ol Gz ain't thrown as ours/, old English how I hold "A" "R",/// proper grip on gun talk language gun ranges, spelling "B"z/ fuck smileys Im spelling "L-A-C-C"/ on ya door lets sound it out.. "B-L-A" read. Be///-L.A. Reid's protege/ on Sony paid/ they'll say "homie changed./ Went to yeezys from sauconys suede/// Last edited by Blaccalicious; 08-26-2015 at 03:23 PM.

08-26-2015, 04:37 PM	#3
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	Went pretty hard here. Raw flow. Had me making that disgusting face a time or two. Welcome to the site. Easy. __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

08-26-2015, 05:53 PM	#4
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,608 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899396	Turn neverland trips to murderville was cold hated the eminem moms spaghetti ish in there though tbh keep that pen moving! __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

08-27-2015, 12:06 PM	#5
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,036 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181420	I'm in Ohio too! Let's hang out and shoot at shit __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

08-26-2015, 04:18 PM	#2
Strikta 39 NS, lost in votes once Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 11,242 Battle Record: 32-40 Champed - Time to Kill X - Write Week III Rep Power: 84181452	you nervous still,/ you big shit? My nerv, forreal ya nerf miss-illz/ will get shredded intercepting warheads give you nerves of steel/// you wore red - like dudes who warm benches check ya shirt 4real/ Man I don't know why exactly... but this shit was raw to me. Lol U got a ways to go tho man.. look around a bit & check out others work.. you'll see what I mean. I'd say u got some potential tho.

09-06-2015, 06:09 PM	#6
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	got murkers ill/, enuff to turn never land trips to murderville,/// cool It looks like you know how to rhyme and rap. But both above&below the line i quoted, i thought there was a bunch of wordplay/letter-play/phrases which were pretty lame.. As a whole I didn't like this very much, but I'm only being so harsh because, based on some traits I see, I know you have the ability to make something much better, even if it has this same kind of tone/content