YDK (1-1) vs. Witty (1-0) YDK VIA NS

Split Eight · 08-29-2015, 01:57 AM

AOWL Season V, Week 7

SUMMARY OF RULES:

Verses are due
Monday at 11:59 p.m. Western / or Tuesday 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK
There are NO extensions.

Verses MUST be a minimum 10 lines or a maximum of 48 lines (or 650 words).

Votes are due Thursday at 11:59 p.m. Western / or Friday 2:59 Am Eastern / 7:59AM UK. Failure to vote will result in automatic sign out for the next week.

All competitors must vote on THREE battles and post links/ references in the voting thread.

Read the full rules here!

TOPIC:

To be edited

Good luck!

@YDK @Witty

YDK · 08-29-2015, 01:58 AM

Yay good luck buddy

Split Eight · 08-30-2015, 09:56 AM

YDK · 09-01-2015, 02:14 AM

No show verse

I fell in love in 10th grade enslaved by my heart
A freshman with blue eyes and blonde hair played the part.
We had our ups and downs and everything in between,
I was a crip slangin scripts and she was my queen to be.
As we grew older we started to grow distant,
I left the gang life but she's the one who missed it.
I matured into a man and she turned her back on me,
But there's no turn of phrase that could turn the pain from me.
I learned she'd never grow to be the woman that I could love,
So I left her in the past with my former self "the thug".
Childhood was fun I'm still clutching the memory,
I got lost in the moment but she was stuck for a century

08-29-2015, 01:58 AM	#2
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181113	Yay good luck buddy __________________

09-01-2015, 02:14 AM	#4
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181113	No show verse I fell in love in 10th grade enslaved by my heart A freshman with blue eyes and blonde hair played the part. We had our ups and downs and everything in between, I was a crip slangin scripts and she was my queen to be. As we grew older we started to grow distant, I left the gang life but she's the one who missed it. I matured into a man and she turned her back on me, But there's no turn of phrase that could turn the pain from me. I learned she'd never grow to be the woman that I could love, So I left her in the past with my former self "the thug". Childhood was fun I'm still clutching the memory, I got lost in the moment but she was stuck for a century __________________