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Old 07-28-2015, 12:55 AM   #1
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Old 07-28-2015, 07:10 AM   #2
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Old 07-29-2015, 08:03 AM   #3
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Old 08-04-2015, 10:29 PM   #4
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LET ME TALK MY SHIT..

expensive firearms aimed at ya weak dome. 14K's n i go into my beast mode
ironically 1 Golden Gun 'll blow ur Big ass Head off with out a double O 7 cheat code
see i'm a Pimp wit a Magicians tactics how all ur women get took
i got ur mom, girl AND sister on the same Page.. nigga thats every Trick in the Book!
u haven't landed no respect. if we battled for cash n they handed u a check
it'd be chump change.. like how ya bitch describes ur faggot ass gettin dressed
u a Vet? look me in my eyes n say that. u cud see that i spray gats
make a Tier drop from murders if u cross between my eyes.. those are NOT face tats
these bullets won't miss ya. drum clip kill the whole fam includin ya lil sister
cus this 30'll take that young bitch out quick.. my chopper nickname is Strikta

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Old 08-05-2015, 02:46 AM   #5
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Hush - Battle Arena Tournament Premagazine
@Havoc (Shank Sinatra)
Havoc aka Hank McCoy aka Alphabites aka Street Shark MC aka most likely 30 other exiled bottom feeders. Hank the guy who pop up either asking if txt is dead, or trying to reminiss on the heyday when he was a biter. Smfh.
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Cuz my punches are over your head… Along with vultures and flies
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Originally Posted by Cred
ironically my punches went over ur head.. n so did da fuckin vultures n flies
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Originally Posted by Hush - Week 16 Chat/Predictions
it's called a coincidence.
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Originally Posted by Hush
questionable to say I'm bias to @Cred for being in my crew
hahaha

yo...

You and Hush ain't hush hush, that shits not cute it's depressing
He been the vehicle for ur success. Now I'ma go Uber request em for ur funeral procession
Like that Sinatra dude's the worrrssst, but you? random same use of words
Fuck the comparisons. I'm just here to give u this Shank treatment that u deserve
bro listen STOP - you don't got the brains to find me to start ringin shots
I bet that get him hot... prolly over there shootin off the screen like a pick and pop
That chick of yours ain't fine at all. I'll still fuck the bird
Invite her to my box at Staples... & she gon need a couple too when I'm done wit hers
You can run, I don't care, I'm good to chase and spray targets
Like Mila in that Jim Beam commercial - this barrel here got your name on it

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Old 08-05-2015, 01:17 PM   #6
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expensive firearms aimed at ya weak dome. 14K's n i go into my beast mode
ironically 1 Golden Gun 'll blow ur Big ass Head off with out a double O 7 cheat code
wasnt feelin
see i'm a Pimp wit a Magicians tactics how all ur women get took
i got ur mom, girl AND sister on the same Page.. nigga thats every Trick in the Book!
decent
u haven't landed no respect. if we battled for cash n they handed u a check
it'd be chump change.. like how ya bitch describes ur faggot ass gettin dressed
alright
u a Vet? look me in my eyes n say that. u cud see that i spray gats
make a Tier drop from murders if u cross between my eyes.. those are NOT face tats
decent
these bullets won't miss ya. drum clip kill the whole fam includin ya lil sister
cus this 30'll take that young bitch out quick.. my chopper nickname is Strikta
lol good


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You and Hush ain't hush hush, that shits not cute it's depressing
He been the vehicle for ur success. Now I'ma go Uber request em for ur funeral procession
alright
Like that Sinatra dude's the worrrssst, but you? random same use of words
Fuck the comparisons. I'm just here to give u this Shank treatment that u deserve
niceness
bro listen STOP - you don't got the brains to find me to start ringin shots
I bet that get him hot... prolly over there shootin off the screen like a pick and pop
ehh
That chick of yours ain't fine at all. I'll still fuck the bird
Invite her to my box at Staples... & she gon need a couple too when I'm done wit hers
meh
You can run, I don't care, I'm good to chase and spray targets
Like Mila in that Jim Beam commercial - this barrel here got your name on it
decent


This was close, Cred took the consistency route he had a verse full of decent lines, and Junto had 1 haymaker and a couple decent ones too. Idk its difficult to choose a winner right now because of how close this shit is, but I feel like with something this close, the person who has LOTB should get the vote.

Vote: Junto
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Old 08-06-2015, 07:23 AM   #7
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expensive firearms aimed at ya weak dome. 14K's n i go into my beast mode
ironically 1 Golden Gun 'll blow ur Big ass Head off with out a double O 7 cheat code
cool
see i'm a Pimp wit a Magicians tactics how all ur women get took
i got ur mom, girl AND sister on the same Page.. nigga thats every Trick in the Book!
mm okay
u haven't landed no respect. if we battled for cash n they handed u a check
it'd be chump change.. like how ya bitch describes ur faggot ass gettin dressed
haha cool
u a Vet? look me in my eyes n say that. u cud see that i spray gats
make a Tier drop from murders if u cross between my eyes.. those are NOT face tats
nice
these bullets won't miss ya. drum clip kill the whole fam includin ya lil sister
cus this 30'll take that young bitch out quick.. my chopper nickname is Strikta
decent

v

You and Hush ain't hush hush, that shits not cute it's depressing
He been the vehicle for ur success. Now I'ma go Uber request em for ur funeral procession
cool
Like that Sinatra dude's the worrrssst, but you? random same use of words
Fuck the comparisons. I'm just here to give u this Shank treatment that u deserve
okay
bro listen STOP - you don't got the brains to find me to start ringin shots
I bet that get him hot... prolly over there shootin off the screen like a pick and pop
decent
That chick of yours ain't fine at all. I'll still fuck the bird
Invite her to my box at Staples... & she gon need a couple too when I'm done wit hers
ehh
You can run, I don't care, I'm good to chase and spray targets
Like Mila in that Jim Beam commercial - this barrel here got your name on it
nice

overall - this was a good battle, i enjoyed a lot of the bars.. it could have gone either way but i'm going to go:

vote - Cred

not much in it, just preferred his verse slightly more, look forward to seeing more battles from both though - since i've been here this has been the most consistent battle i've seen. stay up.
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Old 08-06-2015, 08:27 AM   #8
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u a Vet? look me in my eyes n say that. u cud see that i spray gats
make a Tier drop from murders if u cross between my eyes.. those are NOT face tats
these bullets won't miss ya. drum clip kill the whole fam includin ya lil sister
cus this 30'll take that young bitch out quick.. my chopper nickname is Strikta

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You and Hush ain't hush hush, that shits not cute it's depressing
He been the vehicle for ur success. Now I'ma go Uber request em for ur funeral procession
Like that Sinatra dude's the worrrssst, but you? random same use of words
Fuck the comparisons. I'm just here to give u this Shank treatment that u deserve
That chick of yours ain't fine at all. I'll still fuck the bird
Invite her to my box at Staples... & she gon need a couple too when I'm done wit hers
You can run, I don't care, I'm good to chase and spray targets
Like Mila in that Jim Beam commercial - this barrel here got your name on it


Cool battle. I feel like what really hurt cred was very predictable lines that have been done in a very similar way before. Chump change has been done, trick in the book has been done like that. Double 0 7 was okay, but it wasn't really hard hitting and the concept was a little lacking. I thought the last two were really nice though. Hush line was fiery, shank line was cool but only really because of the personal connection, it was a bit off wording wise. Pick and pop has been done, staples was cool but again bit off wording wise. The Jim Beam line was pretty dope to me too.

Overall, Cred had a stronger 2nd quote, but Junto had an extra one. On consistency, I'm going Junto.

V/ Junto
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Old 08-06-2015, 02:22 PM   #9
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see i'm a Pimp wit a Magicians tactics how all ur women get took
i got ur mom, girl AND sister on the same Page.. nigga thats every Trick in the Book!

u a Vet? look me in my eyes n say that. u cud see that i spray gats
make a Tier drop from murders if u cross between my eyes.. those are NOT face tats
these bullets won't miss ya. drum clip kill the whole fam includin ya lil sister
cus this 30'll take that young bitch out quick.. my chopper nickname is Strikta

^^^^
I thought this was pretty slick, some of the set ups were siiiiick
other than that the other lines seemed alright
couldn't really fuck with that getting dressed line seemed...weird
that opener was pretty cool but felt light to me
not too much to complain about, that closer was pretty cool though
if you switched the wording around the punch would have hit harder
dope verse though

You and Hush ain't hush hush, that shits not cute it's depressing
He been the vehicle for ur success. Now I'ma go Uber request em for ur funeral procession
Like that Sinatra dude's the worrrssst, but you? random same use of words
Fuck the comparisons. I'm just here to give u this Shank treatment that u deserve

You can run, I don't care, I'm good to chase and spray targets
Like Mila in that Jim Beam commercial - this barrel here got your name on i

^^^^^
I thought this was pretty dope, that set up in the beginning I wasn't feeling though
it just kind of odd to me....the punch was pretty dope though...so I'm on the fence about it
wasn't really feeling the pick & pop or the staples line...I get it, it just seemed off putting
something about it didn't feel right, otherwise that closer was pretty clean
dope verse...

v/Cred, I feel like he came with the better set ups & some pretty cool punches
I thought Junto's verse was pretty cool, it just didn't sit right with me on those misses
I felt like that staples line could have been dropped & he could have used something else
otherwise Cred got it due to consistency
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Old 08-06-2015, 09:18 PM   #10
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expensive firearms aimed at ya weak dome. 14K's n i go into my beast mode
ironically 1 Golden Gun 'll blow ur Big ass Head off with out a double O 7 cheat code
nah. a lil too wordy.
see i'm a Pimp wit a Magicians tactics how all ur women get took
i got ur mom, girl AND sister on the same Page.. nigga thats every Trick in the Book!
i liked this
u haven't landed no respect. if we battled for cash n they handed u a check
it'd be chump change.. like how ya bitch describes ur faggot ass gettin dressed
meh
u a Vet? look me in my eyes n say that. u cud see that i spray gats
make a Tier drop from murders if u cross between my eyes.. those are NOT face tats
nah bad wording
these bullets won't miss ya. drum clip kill the whole fam includin ya lil sister
cus this 30'll take that young bitch out quick.. my chopper nickname is Strikta
this was cool
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You and Hush ain't hush hush, that shits not cute it's depressing
He been the vehicle for ur success. Now I'ma go Uber request em for ur funeral procession
dope concept. wording could have been a lil tighter
Like that Sinatra dude's the worrrssst, but you? random same use of words
Fuck the comparisons. I'm just here to give u this Shank treatment that u deserve
nice
bro listen STOP - you don't got the brains to find me to start ringin shots
I bet that get him hot... prolly over there shootin off the screen like a pick and pop
funny imagery
That chick of yours ain't fine at all. I'll still fuck the bird
Invite her to my box at Staples... & she gon need a couple too when I'm done wit hers
simple to me
You can run, I don't care, I'm good to chase and spray targets
Like Mila in that Jim Beam commercial - this barrel here got your name on it
cool but light
This is a good battle with bars brought to the table on both sides. I liked trick and strikta from show, with his other bars being light or misses. Also only using generics hurts you a little to me. Junto went a more personal route. Uber was creative, and liked most of the rest, tho the last two were jabs. I gotta go with Junto on a more personal verse and consistency.

Vote: Junto
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expensive firearms aimed at ya weak dome. 14K's n i go into my beast mode
ironically 1 Golden Gun 'll blow ur Big ass Head off with out a double O 7 cheat code
- nah
see i'm a Pimp wit a Magicians tactics how all ur women get took
i got ur mom, girl AND sister on the same Page.. nigga thats every Trick in the Book!
- this was tough. fucks w/ it
u haven't landed no respect. if we battled for cash n they handed u a check
it'd be chump change.. like how ya bitch describes ur faggot ass gettin dressed
- nah
u a Vet? look me in my eyes n say that. u cud see that i spray gats
make a Tier drop from murders if u cross between my eyes.. those are NOT face tats
- I dropped a concept like this but the #/pound face angle back on RB
these bullets won't miss ya. drum clip kill the whole fam includin ya lil sister
cus this 30'll take that young bitch out quick.. my chopper nickname is Strikta
- this a miss bro - strika was against the young bitch tbh

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You and Hush ain't hush hush, that shits not cute it's depressing
He been the vehicle for ur success. Now I'ma go Uber request em for ur funeral procession
- dece
Like that Sinatra dude's the worrrssst, but you? random same use of words
Fuck the comparisons. I'm just here to give u this Shank treatment that u deserve
- ok
bro listen STOP - you don't got the brains to find me to start ringin shots
I bet that get him hot... prolly over there shootin off the screen like a pick and pop
- nah
That chick of yours ain't fine at all. I'll still fuck the bird
Invite her to my box at Staples... & she gon need a couple too when I'm done wit hers
- this was tough but the whole box/pussy reference shit is stale
You can run, I don't care, I'm good to chase and spray targets
Like Mila in that Jim Beam commercial - this barrel here got your name on it
- ehhhh really didn't like this much

Junto w/ the edge
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Trick in the book, face tats

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Opener, shank, staples

V/Junto. Got him by a quote but his misses were a lot better as well.
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