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Old 07-13-2015, 01:08 PM   #1
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Old 07-13-2015, 03:14 PM   #2
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Fraze u're a Net goon 24/7, but u won't let dat fire blam quick
Bitch.. u're Stuck in front of da Green screen like da making of a Spiderman flick
Semis wit da Beam on'em. nigga u cud get dis smoke
Except these damn Dots come wit way mre den a edit from a angry ill nik-A post
U dodged all the real comp dis whole season, da shook type bitch
U been Escaping dese Bars so long u made El Chapos prison break look like shit
Ur a Book nerd at home. I'm in da field where da best be
Catch u Readin & put da Eagle at the Top of ya Page dat'll give u flashbcks of Netcees
My Lingo is G, You ain't a 103 so stop wit ya weak ways
Cuz I'll stomp ya fukin face into the Curb.. NOW dats a Street Fraze
Let the matic peel, s'like a intercepted pass wen I grab the steel
I ain't talkin bout ya butt buddy in discussion wen da 30 have u Sleepin In Bags foreal
U want dat netcees T-Shirt bad. so I'll bring it as a gift to ur wake
Funny u pickin a lime for urs.. & tomorrow ur homies'll have to pick one wit ur face
Dis is a gangsta party & ur not invited. Fuk boy think I'm playin
If u Goku.. I'm kickin ur ass harder den Vegeta when he went super saiyan

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Old 07-16-2015, 10:17 PM   #5
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I gtta hammer in my vision atleast 3/4's out my day. I'll continue dropping gun bars, cuz i dnt watch nerd shows n browse the internet for tmz.
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Bitch im out here right now swervin these muhfukin streets blowin gas. If u from here u bout dat. Bdk lame nigga. Been bout dat shit b4 it was dis music shit.
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You're a little girl, a bitch, you haven't a fucking clue what 'dat life' is really all about, cuz if u did, you wouldn't talk about it so freely.

Grow the fuck up before you get yourself killed.
i’ll keep it current, see... lately your skills have been in free fall
after this, bet eur.o against me dawg… cred rates so low he could save Greece from default…
You're a little girl, a bitch, you haven't a fucking clue what 'dat life' is
not trying to be Witty… you ain’t survivin this fight if you took his advice and luck of the irish...
pimped your chick… gave that trick a hooker name like get ta hoeing…
i know they say it’s wendy on those chi town streets... but really that’s yo bitch that’s blowing…
put her pussy on display for cash... hope that didn’t catch you unaware…
but you shoulda known she command dough….cause i never let her ass wear underwear...
you shooting me? when pigs can fly… your pistols never been a threat...
you don’t know bout that Bing….but you’ll be finding out soon as pigs can search the Internet...
this stupid fuck…. don’t post evidence of your crimes on netcees...
when feds see… you’ll go down for bullshit murder raps…and i dont mean your shitty texting…
fuck guns… i’ll beat you with the hands until you say had enough…
but im a savage fuck… i’ll keep hammer in your face so long i'll bring your daily average up
stop acting now... cred its scene… cut the clips for you & ya crew it is over....
nah...i’m mostly cool with suicide squad, but i have no clue… WHO IN THE FUCK IS THIS JOKER?
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Old 07-17-2015, 06:43 AM   #6
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Okay I got fraze taking this. I thought his verse was better than creds. Creds seemed to be boring and generic whereas fraze came with harder punches and concepts that were easier to read..I didn't like his opener but every other line connected

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Fraze u're a Net goon 24/7, but u won't let dat fire blam quick
Bitch.. u're Stuck in front of da Green screen like da making of a Spiderman flick
This was ok but I think you could've went another direction with it with a better setup.
Semis wit da Beam on'em. nigga u cud get dis smoke
Except these damn Dots come wit way mre den a edit from a angry ill nik-A post
This is light.
U dodged all the real comp dis whole season, da shook type bitch
U been Escaping dese Bars so long u made El Chapos prison break look like shit
Ok, but too simple. Could've gone a different direction regarding El Chapo.
Ur a Book nerd at home. I'm in da field where da best be
Catch u Readin & put da Eagle at the Top of ya Page dat'll give u flashbcks of Netcees
This was decent.
My Lingo is G, You ain't a 103 so stop wit ya weak ways
Cuz I'll stomp ya fukin face into the Curb.. NOW dats a Street Fraze
Dope.
Let the matic peel, s'like a intercepted pass wen I grab the steel
I ain't talkin bout ya butt buddy in discussion wen da 30 have u Sleepin In Bags foreal
Cool.
U want dat netcees T-Shirt bad. so I'll bring it as a gift to ur wake
Funny u pickin a lime for urs.. & tomorrow ur homies'll have to pick one wit ur face
Eh ok.
Dis is a gangsta party & ur not invited. Fuk boy think I'm playin
If u Goku.. I'm kickin ur ass harder den Vegeta when he went super saiyan
Nah.
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i’ll keep it current, see... lately your skills have been in free fall
after this, bet eur.o against me dawg… cred rates so low he could save Greece from default…
This was nice buttttt if he cred is low how could he save Greece? Wouldn't it be the other way like "ya cred so low it makes Greece look like an 800 credit score?" <--- obviously horrible just the direction is where I'm going.
You're a little girl, a bitch, you haven't a fucking clue what 'dat life' is
not trying to be Witty… you ain’t survivin this fight if you took his advice and luck of the irish...
Not feeling this.
pimped your chick… gave that trick a hooker name like get ta hoeing…
i know they say it’s wendy on those chi town streets... but really that’s yo bitch that’s blowing…
Wendy/Windy? Nah...
put her pussy on display for cash... hope that didn’t catch you unaware…
but you shoulda known she command dough….cause i never let her ass wear underwear...
This was nice.
you shooting me? when pigs can fly… your pistols never been a threat...
you don’t know bout that Bing….but you’ll be finding out soon as pigs can search the Internet...
I don't like this.
this stupid fuck…. don’t post evidence of your crimes on netcees...
when feds see… you’ll go down for bullshit murder raps…and i dont mean your shitty texting…
I liked this but netcees/texting doesn't rhyme for me
fuck guns… i’ll beat you with the hands until you say had enough…
but im a savage fuck… i’ll keep hammer in your face so long i'll bring your daily average up
Dope.
stop acting now... cred its scene… cut the clips for you & ya crew it is over....
nah...i’m mostly cool with suicide squad, but i have no clue… WHO IN THE FUCK IS THIS JOKER?
Not feeling this.
Idk...I feel like there were a lot of misses in this battle, which is rare from these 2. Unless I just didn't get some lines, there were a good amount I wasn't feeling.

I have Street Fraze, Bags - Dots & Eagles were almost's

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Commando, Daily Average - Murder Raps was an almost

I got Cred edging this with better misses.
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Fraze u're a Net goon 24/7, but u won't let dat fire blam quick
Bitch.. u're Stuck in front of da Green screen like da making of a Spiderman flick
U dodged all the real comp dis whole season, da shook type bitch
U been Escaping dese Bars so long u made El Chapos prison break look like shit
My Lingo is G, You ain't a 103 so stop wit ya weak ways
Cuz I'll stomp ya fukin face into the Curb.. NOW dats a Street Fraze

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put her pussy on display for cash... hope that didn’t catch you unaware…
but you shoulda known she command dough….cause i never let her ass wear underwear...
fuck guns… i’ll beat you with the hands until you say had enough…
but im a savage fuck… i’ll keep hammer in your face so long i'll bring your daily average up

feel alot of lines feel flat for one, a couple bars had good concepts with no impact or just lacked sting overall the other came with some raw material imo, I liked the el chapo bar and the green screen idea was nice .. v/Cred
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Cred's first 6 lines bodied then lost steam from there

Fraze first 6 lines bodied as well, missed with the next, then came back to redeem himself with the next one, bullshit murder raps would have been nice but netcees and texting didn't rhyme and it trailed off from there

I got Fraze taking this with one by one quote
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Fraze u're a Net goon 24/7, but u won't let dat fire blam quick
Bitch.. u're Stuck in front of da Green screen like da making of a Spiderman flick
not feeling it man, very generic. no real set up for the execution to reaaally hit home. coulda said any film with special effects, ya knw
Semis wit da Beam on'em. nigga u cud get dis smoke
Except these damn Dots come wit way mre den a edit from a angry ill nik-A post
hahaha i thought this was dope
U dodged all the real comp dis whole season, da shook type bitch
U been Escaping dese Bars so long u made El Chapos prison break look like shit
current event line but it's still just a bar/prison line bro. no good
Ur a Book nerd at home. I'm in da field where da best be
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this was nice man, pretty slick. gully
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Cuz I'll stomp ya fukin face into the Curb.. NOW dats a Street Fraze
fell a litttttle flat on the execution but still cool to me bruv
Let the matic peel, s'like a intercepted pass wen I grab the steel
I ain't talkin bout ya butt buddy in discussion wen da 30 have u Sleepin In Bags foreal
not feeling this one man. old np on Bags so cant consider it fresh here
U want dat netcees T-Shirt bad. so I'll bring it as a gift to ur wake
Funny u pickin a lime for urs.. & tomorrow ur homies'll have to pick one wit ur face
nothing really to this either man
Dis is a gangsta party & ur not invited. Fuk boy think I'm playin
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naaaah man this is old as the hills. dbz lines are a no no in my book

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i’ll keep it current, see... lately your skills have been in free fall
after this, bet eur.o against me dawg… cred rates so low he could save Greece from default…
this was creative man, good idea, nice execution
You're a little girl, a bitch, you haven't a fucking clue what 'dat life' is
not trying to be Witty… you ain’t survivin this fight if you took his advice and luck of the irish...
i can't give this praise because if it was used on Witty it would be played
pimped your chick… gave that trick a hooker name like get ta hoeing…
i know they say it’s wendy on those chi town streets... but really that’s yo bitch that’s blowing…
maaaan that wp is ancient. come on
put her pussy on display for cash... hope that didn’t catch you unaware…
but you shoulda known she command dough….cause i never let her ass wear underwear...
wordplay was okay man not too hard tho imo
you shooting me? when pigs can fly… your pistols never been a threat...
you don’t know bout that Bing….but you’ll be finding out soon as pigs can search the Internet...
thought the execution fell flat bro, the concept was nice to me tho
this stupid fuck…. don’t post evidence of your crimes on netcees...
when feds see… you’ll go down for bullshit murder raps…and i dont mean your shitty texting…
rhyming was bad here, shit was funny tho
fuck guns… i’ll beat you with the hands until you say had enough…
but im a savage fuck… i’ll keep hammer in your face so long i'll bring your daily average up
ehhh okay cool
stop acting now... cred its scene… cut the clips for you & ya crew it is over....
nah...i’m mostly cool with suicide squad, but i have no clue… WHO IN THE FUCK IS THIS JOKER?
wording here was way too drawn out. punch was v. bad too, bad way too end


i have cred with 3 quotes to 2 quotes from fraze

vote Cred by one more nice hit

Cred i think ya should probably cut down on the gun bars man. i know its ya style but after a while it gets hard to like them. just so easy to do. fraze not sure if ya an old head that's rusty or a dude with potential but sometimes ya struggle with overwording ya lines. i think they could hit a bit better if you just made them a little more concise at times. anyway just some constructive shit for both of ya. peace
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3-2 Cred. More votes please.
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Nika post, el chapo, top of ya page, street fraze

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Opener, shitty texting

V/Cred. I think his execution was better. Some of Fraze's bars were either hindered by wording or executed mildly. Ok read from both though
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got fraze here
just thought his shit was more clever
cred kind OD on the gun bars to me
I mean, I know that's his thing and I'm all about it but just wasn't feeling too many this week. eagle at the top was dope tho
liked opener, hammer in, joker from fraze

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Green screen was OK but idk why u said spiderman instead of something in theatres now. I'll nika post was OK. El chapo was OK current event but could've been flipped better. The eagle is played. Not feeling street fraze as I used something similar in the cypher a cpl weeks ago, I mean it was ok but i didnt like the wording either. Not feeling sleeping in bags as its a bags NP and those r all played. I liked the t shirt line, its a discussion bar but on some real life shit too, I thought ur wording could've delivered it better tho. Hell no to the dbz line...not sure what u was thinking with that one as it really doesn't even make sense cause goku went ss first n vegeta only kicked gokus ass once n that was pre ss.

Greece default was nice. Wasn't feeling witty line thought it could've been flipped a lot better since its a played NP. Hell no on Wendy. Command dough is nice lol. Wasn't feeling bing. Thought murder raps was obvious n could've been flipped better. Raise ur daily avg was dope. Closer was wack, thought u could've done something with credit its scene.

This is tough to call cause credit was more consistent and his misses weren't as bad but fraze had two bangers. I gotta go with fraze for the three nice lines.

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Semis wit da Beam on'em. nigga u cud get dis smoke
Except these damn Dots come wit way mre den a edit from a angry ill nik-A pos
Ur a Book nerd at home. I'm in da field where da best be
Catch u Readin & put da Eagle at the Top of ya Page dat'll give u flashbcks of Netcee

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Cuz I'll stomp ya fukin face into the Curb.. NOW dats a Street Fraz


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i’ll keep it current, see... lately your skills have been in free fall
after this, bet eur.o against me dawg… cred rates so low he could save Greece from default…
You're a little girl, a bitch, you haven't a fucking clue what 'dat life' is
not trying to be Witty… you ain’t survivin this fight if you took his advice and luck of the irish..


ok battle here...both had some misses, cred had some generic bars but a few that were dope imo. fraze had some ok stuff, the cammando bar was worse bar of the battle imo. and he had a few others that came up short

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Semis wit da Beam on'em. nigga u cud get dis smoke
Except these damn Dots come wit way mre den a edit from a angry ill nik-A post
My Lingo is G, You ain't a 103 so stop wit ya weak ways
Cuz I'll stomp ya fukin face into the Curb.. NOW dats a Street Fraze

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i’ll keep it current, see... lately your skills have been in free fall
after this, bet eur.o against me dawg… cred rates so low he could save Greece from default…

think both kind of fell flat here tbh. fraze had some ok concepts but he either over worded them which killed it for me or fell flat on his route of execution. it's like I got half way through the bar, continued reading... then continued reading... then continued reading and boom, finally the execution... so that kind of killed it for me as well. his bars were pretty long winded imo which destroyed the potential of an effective hit. Cred conceptually wasn't his normal self other then the gun bars. But even that, he usually brings more variety and creativity to them, this battle not so much. I got cred with 1 more quote that I enjoyed so I'm edge this off too him...

cred got it
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Fraze u're a Net goon 24/7, but u won't let dat fire blam quick
Bitch.. u're Stuck in front of da Green screen like da making of a Spiderman flick
this was cool
Semis wit da Beam on'em. nigga u cud get dis smoke
Except these damn Dots come wit way mre den a edit from a angry ill nik-A post
lol cool
U dodged all the real comp dis whole season, da shook type bitch
U been Escaping dese Bars so long u made El Chapos prison break look like shit
ok
Ur a Book nerd at home. I'm in da field where da best be
Catch u Readin & put da Eagle at the Top of ya Page dat'll give u flashbcks of Netcees
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My Lingo is G, You ain't a 103 so stop wit ya weak ways
Cuz I'll stomp ya fukin face into the Curb.. NOW dats a Street Fraze
ehhh
Let the matic peel, s'like a intercepted pass wen I grab the steel
I ain't talkin bout ya butt buddy in discussion wen da 30 have u Sleepin In Bags foreal
ok-ish
U want dat netcees T-Shirt bad. so I'll bring it as a gift to ur wake
Funny u pickin a lime for urs.. & tomorrow ur homies'll have to pick one wit ur face
a little basic
Dis is a gangsta party & ur not invited. Fuk boy think I'm playin
If u Goku.. I'm kickin ur ass harder den Vegeta when he went super saiyan
not gonna lie, didn't get this :/

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i’ll keep it current, see... lately your skills have been in free fall
after this, bet eur.o against me dawg… cred rates so low he could save Greece from default…
I see what you were going for, you didn't execute it perfectly but not bad at all
You're a little girl, a bitch, you haven't a fucking clue what 'dat life' is
not trying to be Witty… you ain’t survivin this fight if you took his advice and luck of the irish...
lol luck of the irish lines are played my friend, sorry
pimped your chick… gave that trick a hooker name like get ta hoeing…
i know they say it’s wendy on those chi town streets... but really that’s yo bitch that’s blowing…
lol i liked this
put her pussy on display for cash... hope that didn’t catch you unaware…
but you shoulda known she command dough….cause i never let her ass wear underwear...
this was cool too
you shooting me? when pigs can fly… your pistols never been a threat...
you don’t know bout that Bing….but you’ll be finding out soon as pigs can search the Internet...
ok
this stupid fuck…. don’t post evidence of your crimes on netcees...
when feds see… you’ll go down for bullshit murder raps…and i dont mean your shitty texting…
lol
fuck guns… i’ll beat you with the hands until you say had enough…
but im a savage fuck… i’ll keep hammer in your face so long i'll bring your daily average up
nah
stop acting now... cred its scene… cut the clips for you & ya crew it is over....
nah...i’m mostly cool with suicide squad, but i have no clue… WHO IN THE FUCK IS THIS JOKER?
nah man, saw this coming a mile off tbh

This was a cool battle, both had their moments of dopeness and both had shit that wasn't great, Cred came in strong as fuck and ended weak, but he did enough for the win, fraze was just too inconsistent, talent is clearly there tho. Props to both.

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Old 07-19-2015, 06:17 PM   #18
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Fraze u're a Net goon 24/7, but u won't let dat fire blam quick
Bitch.. u're Stuck in front of da Green screen like da making of a Spiderman flick

Cool, but a generic punch really 2/5

Semis wit da Beam on'em. nigga u cud get dis smoke
Except these damn Dots come wit way mre den a edit from a angry ill nik-A post

Ahh, could've worded this better honestly. But I chuckled 2.5/5

U dodged all the real comp dis whole season, da shook type bitch
U been Escaping dese Bars so long u made El Chapos prison break look like shit

Haha +1 for it being a relevant current event + punch was good. 3.5/5

Ur a Book nerd at home. I'm in da field where da best be
Catch u Readin & put da Eagle at the Top of ya Page dat'll give u flashbcks of Netcees

Eh, not a big fan of gun talk especially since its been hammered in since 04'-Ugh, it was eh 2/5

My Lingo is G, You ain't a 103 so stop wit ya weak ways
Cuz I'll stomp ya fukin face into the Curb.. NOW dats a Street Fraze

Cool 2.5/5

Let the matic peel, s'like a intercepted pass wen I grab the steel
I ain't talkin bout ya butt buddy in discussion wen da 30 have u Sleepin In Bags foreal

Cool play + punch. 2.75/5

U want dat netcees T-Shirt bad. so I'll bring it as a gift to ur wake
Funny u pickin a lime for urs.. & tomorrow ur homies'll have to pick one wit ur face

Solid 3/5

Dis is a gangsta party & ur not invited. Fuk boy think I'm playin
If u Goku.. I'm kickin ur ass harder den Vegeta when he went super saiyan

Nah felt simple wasn't digging. 1/5

Overall-You were up & down. Had some fire, had some decent, had some eh..It was solid as far as battle verses, if your not facing a top tier head.

Overall- 19.25/40

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i’ll keep it current, see... lately your skills have been in free fall
after this, bet eur.o against me dawg… cred rates so low he could save Greece from default…

Ugh, if your wording was a bit more spot on,but the concept plus w/p was solid mate. 2.75/5

You're a little girl, a bitch, you haven't a fucking clue what 'dat life' is
not trying to be Witty… you ain’t survivin this fight if you took his advice and luck of the irish...

Haha, good personal and nice tie in. 3/5

pimped your chick… gave that trick a hooker name like get ta hoeing…
i know they say it’s wendy on those chi town streets... but really that’s yo bitch that’s blowing…

Cool. 2.5/5

put her pussy on display for cash... hope that didn’t catch you unaware…
but you shoulda known she command dough….cause i never let her ass wear underwear...

Nah 1/5

you shooting me? when pigs can fly… your pistols never been a threat...
you don’t know bout that Bing….but you’ll be finding out soon as pigs can search the Internet...

Ehh felt something was missing 2/5

this stupid fuck…. don’t post evidence of your crimes on netcees...
when feds see… you’ll go down for bullshit murder raps…and i dont mean your shitty texting…

Haha cool. 2.75/5

fuck guns… i’ll beat you with the hands until you say had enough…
but im a savage fuck… i’ll keep hammer in your face so long i'll bring your daily average up

Yeah I liked 3/5

stop acting now... cred its scene… cut the clips for you & ya crew it is over....
nah...i’m mostly cool with suicide squad, but i have no clue… WHO IN THE FUCK IS THIS JOKER?

Yeah cool closer. 2.75/5

Overall-Except for about like 2 lines you had a consistent verse and were a bit more creative in stepping out your comfort zone.

Overall-19.75/40

Overall-The numbers have it close, but I definitely felt one was a bit more original and definitely brought his own diversity here. It was a good match nonetheless, neither disappointed.

Overall-Fraze
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Fraze u're a Net goon 24/7, but u won't let dat fire blam quick
Bitch.. u're Stuck in front of da Green screen like da making of a Spiderman flick
Aight opener
Semis wit da Beam on'em. nigga u cud get dis smoke
Except these damn Dots come wit way mre den a edit from a angry ill nik-A post
Lol
U dodged all the real comp dis whole season, da shook type bitch
U been Escaping dese Bars so long u made El Chapos prison break look like shit
Predictable, wasn't feeling too much
Ur a Book nerd at home. I'm in da field where da best be
Catch u Readin & put da Eagle at the Top of ya Page dat'll give u flashbcks of Netcees
Ok
My Lingo is G, You ain't a 103 so stop wit ya weak ways
Cuz I'll stomp ya fukin face into the Curb.. NOW dats a Street Fraze
Ok
Let the matic peel, s'like a intercepted pass wen I grab the steel
I ain't talkin bout ya butt buddy in discussion wen da 30 have u Sleepin In Bags foreal
This was raw, but ion think fraze cool w/ Bags like that bro. Concept was nice tho.
U want dat netcees T-Shirt bad. so I'll bring it as a gift to ur wake
Funny u pickin a lime for urs.. & tomorrow ur homies'll have to pick one wit ur face
Dope
Dis is a gangsta party & ur not invited. Fuk boy think I'm playin
If u Goku.. I'm kickin ur ass harder den Vegeta when he went super saiyan
Ehhh

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i’ll keep it current, see... lately your skills have been in free fall
after this, bet eur.o against me dawg… cred rates so low he could save Greece from default…
Ehh
You're a little girl, a bitch, you haven't a fucking clue what 'dat life' is
not trying to be Witty… you ain’t survivin this fight if you took his advice and luck of the irish...
Ok
pimped your chick… gave that trick a hooker name like get ta hoeing…
i know they say it’s wendy on those chi town streets... but really that’s yo bitch that’s blowing…
Lol
put her pussy on display for cash... hope that didn’t catch you unaware…
but you shoulda known she command dough….cause i never let her ass wear underwear...
Nah
you shooting me? when pigs can fly… your pistols never been a threat...
you don’t know bout that Bing….but you’ll be finding out soon as pigs can search the Internet...
Nah
this stupid fuck…. don’t post evidence of your crimes on netcees...
when feds see… you’ll go down for bullshit murder raps…and i dont mean your shitty texting…
Wasn't feeling
fuck guns… i’ll beat you with the hands until you say had enough…
but im a savage fuck… i’ll keep hammer in your face so long i'll bring your daily average up
Ok
stop acting now... cred its scene… cut the clips for you & ya crew it is over....
nah...i’m mostly cool with suicide squad, but i have no clue… WHO IN THE FUCK IS THIS JOKER?
Closer is ok at best

I got Cred here.. his verse was more consistent & harder hitting. Neither of u really had any haymakers here, but Cred had less misses w/ his bars. On top of that I liked his scheme more in this battle. Fraze did his thing tho, just didn't bring enough here. Props to both yall niggas.

Vote- Cred
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