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Hi...
Fuck an alias, I'm about to surround his corpse with flowers So what ur an international Man of Mystery, we said the same about Austin Powers Stop the gun bars white boy, I've seen plenty men get killed by guys who can't brawl Besides if u ever let off that fire, cracker u'd probably wind up like Jason Pierre Paul So do us favor and stop talking about guns you'll never tout Nigga I'm G'd up, You couldn't take out this boss with Bags email account They call me Mandingo when I sling the D to broads Your girl's a slut, every time u fuck u feel like Diddy at the Bet awards But when she's with me I turn your girl into a geyser Everything u say is horse shit, they only let u in the Farm cuz they needed fertilizer And I'll rob u just for kicks, doesn't matter whether my pockets'll fatten I got that 12 gauge, one blast and you'll be everywhere at once like Dr. Manhattan Your girl is hideous bro, she looks like a fucking savage She's ugly as fuck and could pass as a before pic of any don't judge me challenge I can never respect u cuz hiding under an alias is not something the best do Your lines are played as fuck, they're so old they could be part of Joe Metts crew Bye...
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yo... Talkin hood shit got limits, you don't really live that 'lick some shots' gimmick The streets don't fuck wit u man. Your bitch ass been doin work FOR the city, not in it but lemme guess - While I was debatin NYSE & airlines u were out baggin bitches dude? Cool, this Axe should help... after I hack u they can say that u just had some glitches too Your wifey ain't faithful we fuck a lotta nights, boo's face gets creamed Ya whole bed a mess... & nigga you can switch those covers out yourself like 2K16 Me and my soldiers drivin thru Queens to find King's house, and then let it blast All you'll see is Max/Tic out the window like we ain't countin the contender match You real stale wit game, like Hi... Bye... I'd say that's a failure mang Multiple hoes? Please... ain't nobody Blowin KK but Wiz & maybe the Taylor Gang I do this for sport... but come chill round my way & tell 'em bout the techs you spill You ain't the soccer chick from England. Kickin THAT shit on the wrong side'll get u killed 1 minute u coulda been loc, next u was almost piru... stop pretendin for street props How u got blue on the left AND red on the right but ain't wearin Kendrick's new reeboks If u ain't grippin them things I'm comin thru & clippin ur wings This grave I'm diggin is reeeealll spacious kid, it's fit for a King |
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Stop the gun bars white boy, I've seen plenty men get killed by guys who can't brawl
Besides if u ever let off that fire, cracker u'd probably wind up like Jason Pierre Paul So do us favor and stop talking about guns you'll never tout Nigga I'm G'd up, You couldn't take out this boss with Bags email account But when she's with me I turn your girl into a geyser Everything u say is horse shit, they only let u in the Farm cuz they needed fertilizer And I'll rob u just for kicks, doesn't matter whether my pockets'll fatten I got that 12 gauge, one blast and you'll be everywhere at once like Dr. Manhattan Joe Mets was aight too. Some of your lines was weak tho b, which suprised me. Mainly the opener which was jarring kind it was borderline straight up wack. Plus Austin Powers was a g, so how is that even a diss tho? vs Your wifey ain't faithful we fuck a lotta nights, boo's face gets creamed Ya whole bed a mess... & nigga you can switch those covers out yourself like 2K16 1 minute u coulda been loc, next u was almost piru... stop pretendin for street props How u got blue on the left AND red on the right but ain't wearin Kendrick's new reeboks If u ain't grippin them things I'm comin thru & clippin ur wings This grave I'm diggin is reeeealll spacious kid, it's fit for a King Jun you over wording shit my nigga, concepts be on point but the way u lay them out somtimes has em fall flat before the execution, like a movie or joke that goes on too long and loses steam...I wish you worded ur whole joint like ur closer. But yo, almost every bar was a dope ass concept, and creative all the way thru. I think Jun had the fresher shit in a sense, but Kar had the harder shit. Anyone reading this vote should check Chyeeah thread in discussions about harshness. Its hard to explain but I think Kar being more "harsh" here really made the difference. and he came off more harsh to me because of the crisper wording. Its like in a argument usually the one word comebacks win, or something short and effective, not the long ass speach fire from both v/ Kar
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Jun made this close, and you could probably lean either way depending on how you weigh concepts vs wording. I'm personally biased towards the smoother verse, but he definitely made this a fight so props to Junto. Vote: King Karaoke
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Stop the gun bars white boy, I've seen plenty men get killed by guys who can't brawl
Besides if u ever let off that fire, cracker u'd probably wind up like Jason Pierre Paul They call me Mandingo when I sling the D to broads Your girl's a slut, every time u fuck u feel like Diddy at the Bet awards And I'll rob u just for kicks, doesn't matter whether my pockets'll fatten I got that 12 gauge, one blast and you'll be everywhere at once like Dr. Manhattan --opener was a cool idea wasn't really brutal tho, the firecracker line was nice, the P.diddy falling in a hole bar was dope and funny lol, Maybe i missed something in the forums cus I didnt understand the Bag bar. Overall u had a nice verse. vs but lemme guess - While I was debatin NYSE & airlines u were out baggin bitches dude? Cool, this Axe should help... after I hack u they can say that u just had some glitches too your wifey ain't faithful we fuck a lotta nights, boo's face gets creamed Ya whole bed a mess... & nigga you can switch those covers out yourself like 2K16 --you had alot of nice ideas and creative concepts thru out ya verse but u didn't word alot of them harsh enough or word them well enough to cause an Impact but I liked that 2k16 line lmao. v/Kare
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Talkin hood shit got limits, you don't really live that 'lick some shots' gimmick The streets don't fuck wit u man. Your bitch ass been doin work FOR the city, not in it Your wifey ain't faithful we fuck a lotta nights, boo's face gets creamed Ya whole bed a mess... & nigga you can switch those covers out yourself like 2K16 You real stale wit game, like Hi... Bye... I'd say that's a failure mang Multiple hoes? Please... ain't nobody Blowin KK but Wiz & maybe the Taylor Gang I do this for sport... but come chill round my way & tell 'em bout the techs you spill You ain't the soccer chick from England. Kickin THAT shit on the wrong side'll get u killed 1 minute u coulda been loc, next u was almost piru... stop pretendin for street props How u got blue on the left AND red on the right but ain't wearin Kendrick's new reeboks If u ain't grippin them things I'm comin thru & clippin ur wings This grave I'm diggin is reeeealll spacious kid, it's fit for a King Karaoke So do us favor and stop talking about guns you'll never tout Nigga I'm G'd up, You couldn't take out this boss with Bags email ACCOUNT They call me Mandingo when I SLING the D to broads Your girl's a slut, every time u fuck u feel like Diddy at the Bet awards But when she's with me I turn your girl into a geyser Everything u say is horse shit, they only let u in the Farm cuz they needed fertilizer And I'll rob u just for kicks, doesn't matter whether my pockets'll fatten I got that 12 gauge, one blast and you'll be everywhere at once like Dr. Manhattan Your girl is hideous bro, she looks like a fucking savage She's ugly as fuck and could pass as a before pic of any don't judge me challenge This was a battle with a lot of solid ass lines... enjoyed reading it not too many corny ass bars. Anyway I think Junto showed out in this one, I've seen Kar drop better fire than this not taking anything away from him cause his verse was still dope. Junto had some nice fresh concepts which wording slowed down slightly but not enough for the bar to not be a quotable. Once he tightens up his wording he gonna be a force... even though he's an alias bastard.. v/Junto
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Opener was ooook, Firecracker was dope lol Bags email account was cool Diddy was ooook I thought horse shit was nice Dr Manhattan was sick too Before pic was light Closer was ok Vs Junto Opener was cool Hack u was ok 2k16 was nice I thought max tic woulda been doper if not in like firm but still ok Blowing kk was slick imo Soccor chick was ooooook Kendrick reeboks was dope Closer was nice too... Shit this was a dope match.. No bad misses, very consistent on both ends.. See I don't got a problem with juntos barz I feel like he puts the pause where it need to be n just has a different style n I dig it.. Ok in an extremely close toe ta toe bout I just feel like junto took a more personal route n imo in a close as match that'll be the difference likewise to this battle I feel that's what determined my pick.. So there be it I got junto barely edging this l.. Props to both for the entertaining read n gl Junto |
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4-2 kar
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fire cracker, boss email, fertilizer, dr Manhattan
vs opener, max, closer got k with one more quote but I felt he was more consistent and his verse flowed a lot better all around. good shit for a champ match tho v/king |
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They call me Mandingo when I sling the D to broads
Your girl's a slut, every time u fuck u feel like Diddy at the Bet awards But when she's with me I turn your girl into a geyser Everything u say is horse shit, they only let u in the Farm cuz they needed fertilizer And I'll rob u just for kicks, doesn't matter whether my pockets'll fatten I got that 12 gauge, one blast and you'll be everywhere at once like Dr. Manhattan ^^^^ This section was dope, I really enjoyed that JPP bar too that Joe Metts line was pretty funny too, dope shit all around the only bar I didn't really get was the Bags line, but this was a tight verse regardless Your wifey ain't faithful we fuck a lotta nights, boo's face gets creamed Ya whole bed a mess... & nigga you can switch those covers out yourself like 2K16 1 minute u coulda been loc, next u was almost piru... stop pretendin for street props How u got blue on the left AND red on the right but ain't wearin Kendrick's new reeboks If u ain't grippin them things I'm comin thru & clippin ur wings This grave I'm diggin is reeeealll spacious kid, it's fit for a King ^^^^^^ this section was dope on the opposite end, but the rest seemed filler ish I couldn't fuck with that AXE line, and that opening line felt kind of cheesy but other then that you had that contender match line which worked for you I felt had you worded some of your lines properly it would have came off smoother but I felt like you slipped far too much in the beginning...either way nice work v/Karaoke, He came with an all around stinging verse, a few misfires but the whole flow of the piece was so slick, it didn't effect it too much as for the contender, I felt like his opener seemed off & didn't work well the NYSE thing kind of backfired, the concept was cool, but the wording didn't work Karaoke just had more lines that hit as opposed to the other guy... nice battle though...
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