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Old 07-06-2015, 03:13 PM   #1
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Default Championship Match: King Karaoke 5-0 Vs Junto 6-2 {Karaoke wins}

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Old 07-10-2015, 11:09 PM   #2
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Hi...

Fuck an alias, I'm about to surround his corpse with flowers
So what ur an international Man of Mystery, we said the same about Austin Powers
Stop the gun bars white boy, I've seen plenty men get killed by guys who can't brawl
Besides if u ever let off that fire, cracker u'd probably wind up like Jason Pierre Paul
So do us favor and stop talking about guns you'll never tout
Nigga I'm G'd up, You couldn't take out this boss with Bags email account
They call me Mandingo when I sling the D to broads
Your girl's a slut, every time u fuck u feel like Diddy at the Bet awards
But when she's with me I turn your girl into a geyser
Everything u say is horse shit, they only let u in the Farm cuz they needed fertilizer
And I'll rob u just for kicks, doesn't matter whether my pockets'll fatten
I got that 12 gauge, one blast and you'll be everywhere at once like Dr. Manhattan
Your girl is hideous bro, she looks like a fucking savage
She's ugly as fuck and could pass as a before pic of any don't judge me challenge
I can never respect u cuz hiding under an alias is not something the best do
Your lines are played as fuck, they're so old they could be part of Joe Metts crew

Bye...
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Old 07-11-2015, 06:49 AM   #3
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Hi...

I got there at 10 and left at 1...
She has work in the morning...
I'm considerate...
And I got another at home wondering where I'm at...

Bye...
Quote:
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Hi...

I dont fuck with him but hes right...
I work for the city...
the contractors that work with us make $60 to $100 an hour plus they get time and a half from overtime...
They work over 80 hours a week...

Bye...

yo...

Talkin hood shit got limits, you don't really live that 'lick some shots' gimmick
The streets don't fuck wit u man. Your bitch ass been doin work FOR the city, not in it
but lemme guess - While I was debatin NYSE & airlines u were out baggin bitches dude?
Cool, this Axe should help... after I hack u they can say that u just had some glitches too
Your wifey ain't faithful we fuck a lotta nights, boo's face gets creamed
Ya whole bed a mess... & nigga you can switch those covers out yourself like 2K16
Me and my soldiers drivin thru Queens to find King's house, and then let it blast
All you'll see is Max/Tic out the window like we ain't countin the contender match
You real stale wit game, like Hi... Bye... I'd say that's a failure mang
Multiple hoes? Please... ain't nobody Blowin KK but Wiz & maybe the Taylor Gang
I do this for sport... but come chill round my way & tell 'em bout the techs you spill
You ain't the soccer chick from England. Kickin THAT shit on the wrong side'll get u killed
1 minute u coulda been loc, next u was almost piru... stop pretendin for street props
How u got blue on the left AND red on the right but ain't wearin Kendrick's new reeboks
If u ain't grippin them things I'm comin thru & clippin ur wings
This grave I'm diggin is reeeealll spacious kid, it's fit for a King
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Old 07-11-2015, 08:25 AM   #4
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Hi...

Fuck an alias, I'm about to surround his corpse with flowers
So what ur an international Man of Mystery, we said the same about Austin Powers
ok
Stop the gun bars white boy, I've seen plenty men get killed by guys who can't brawl
Besides if u ever let off that fire, cracker u'd probably wind up like Jason Pierre Paul
cool
So do us favor and stop talking about guns you'll never tout
Nigga I'm G'd up, You couldn't take out this boss with Bags email account
sorry, don't get it
They call me Mandingo when I sling the D to broads
Your girl's a slut, every time u fuck u feel like Diddy at the Bet awards
haha ok
But when she's with me I turn your girl into a geyser
Everything u say is horse shit, they only let u in the Farm cuz they needed fertilizer
cool
And I'll rob u just for kicks, doesn't matter whether my pockets'll fatten
I got that 12 gauge, one blast and you'll be everywhere at once like Dr. Manhattan
cool
Your girl is hideous bro, she looks like a fucking savage
She's ugly as fuck and could pass as a before pic of any don't judge me challenge
not feelig
I can never respect u cuz hiding under an alias is not something the best do
Your lines are played as fuck, they're so old they could be part of Joe Metts crew
netcees will hate me but who joe metts?

Bye...
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yo...

Talkin hood shit got limits, you don't really live that 'lick some shots' gimmick
The streets don't fuck wit u man. Your bitch ass been doin work FOR the city, not in it
solid opener
but lemme guess - While I was debatin NYSE & airlines u were out baggin bitches dude?
Cool, this Axe should help... after I hack u they can say that u just had some glitches too
ok
Your wifey ain't faithful we fuck a lotta nights, boo's face gets creamed
Ya whole bed a mess... & nigga you can switch those covers out yourself like 2K16
not feeling
Me and my soldiers drivin thru Queens to find King's house, and then let it blast
All you'll see is Max/Tic out the window like we ain't countin the contender match
ok
You real stale wit game, like Hi... Bye... I'd say that's a failure mang
Multiple hoes? Please... ain't nobody Blowin KK but Wiz & maybe the Taylor Gang
cool
I do this for sport... but come chill round my way & tell 'em bout the techs you spill
You ain't the soccer chick from England. Kickin THAT shit on the wrong side'll get u killed
sorta
1 minute u coulda been loc, next u was almost piru... stop pretendin for street props
How u got blue on the left AND red on the right but ain't wearin Kendrick's new reeboks
cool
If u ain't grippin them things I'm comin thru & clippin ur wings
This grave I'm diggin is reeeealll spacious kid, it's fit for a King
nahh this doesn't really hit
Really close, dope match up. Got 5 vs 5. Ehh shit, I reckon KK was better worded and had better flow although I thought junto came with some creative and different shit. I can't even pick a LOTB. Erm, this is purely coming down to style preference for me, and on that basis, I'm leaning towards KK.. I think the hits were slightly stronger, although I was really feeling juntos opener.

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Old 07-11-2015, 11:20 AM   #5
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Stop the gun bars white boy, I've seen plenty men get killed by guys who can't brawl
Besides if u ever let off that fire, cracker u'd probably wind up like Jason Pierre Paul
So do us favor and stop talking about guns you'll never tout
Nigga I'm G'd up, You couldn't take out this boss with Bags email account
But when she's with me I turn your girl into a geyser
Everything u say is horse shit, they only let u in the Farm cuz they needed fertilizer
And I'll rob u just for kicks, doesn't matter whether my pockets'll fatten
I got that 12 gauge, one blast and you'll be everywhere at once like Dr. Manhattan

Joe Mets was aight too. Some of your lines was weak tho b, which suprised me. Mainly the opener which was jarring kind it was borderline straight up wack. Plus Austin Powers was a g, so how is that even a diss tho?


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Ya whole bed a mess... & nigga you can switch those covers out yourself like 2K16
1 minute u coulda been loc, next u was almost piru... stop pretendin for street props
How u got blue on the left AND red on the right but ain't wearin Kendrick's new reeboks
If u ain't grippin them things I'm comin thru & clippin ur wings
This grave I'm diggin is reeeealll spacious kid, it's fit for a King





Jun you over wording shit my nigga, concepts be on point but the way u lay them out somtimes has em fall flat before the execution, like a movie or joke that goes on too long and loses steam...I wish you worded ur whole joint like ur closer. But yo, almost every bar was a dope ass concept, and creative all the way thru.

I think Jun had the fresher shit in a sense, but Kar had the harder shit. Anyone reading this vote should check Chyeeah thread in discussions about harshness. Its hard to explain but I think Kar being more "harsh" here really made the difference. and he came off more harsh to me because of the crisper wording. Its like in a argument usually the one word comebacks win, or something short and effective, not the long ass speach


fire from both


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Fuck an alias, I'm about to surround his corpse with flowers
So what ur an international Man of Mystery, we said the same about Austin Powers
dope concept @ an alias, but don't like the way you directed the punch. it comes off statement-ish instead of harsh
Stop the gun bars white boy, I've seen plenty men get killed by guys who can't brawl
Besides if u ever let off that fire, cracker u'd probably wind up like Jason Pierre Paul
nice current events.
So do us favor and stop talking about guns you'll never tout
Nigga I'm G'd up, You couldn't take out this boss with Bags email account
cool
They call me Mandingo when I sling the D to broads
Your girl's a slut, every time u fuck u feel like Diddy at the Bet awards
would have liked more set up for falling in a hole. but this was cool
But when she's with me I turn your girl into a geyser
Everything u say is horse shit, they only let u in the Farm cuz they needed fertilizer
aight
And I'll rob u just for kicks, doesn't matter whether my pockets'll fatten
I got that 12 gauge, one blast and you'll be everywhere at once like Dr. Manhattan
this was dope to me. lotb candidate
Your girl is hideous bro, she looks like a fucking savage
She's ugly as fuck and could pass as a before pic of any don't judge me challenge
not feeling this
I can never respect u cuz hiding under an alias is not something the best do
Your lines are played as fuck, they're so old they could be part of Joe Metts crew
nice.
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Talkin hood shit got limits, you don't really live that 'lick some shots' gimmick
The streets don't fuck wit u man. Your bitch ass been doin work FOR the city, not in it
cool but not really hard hitting
but lemme guess - While I was debatin NYSE & airlines u were out baggin bitches dude?
Cool, this Axe should help... after I hack u they can say that u just had some glitches too
nice concept. wording is a little off but not bad
Your wifey ain't faithful we fuck a lotta nights, boo's face gets creamed
Ya whole bed a mess... & nigga you can switch those covers out yourself like 2K16
straight.
Me and my soldiers drivin thru Queens to find King's house, and then let it blast
All you'll see is Max/Tic out the window like we ain't countin the contender match
wp is a little forced but this was cool
You real stale wit game, like Hi... Bye... I'd say that's a failure mang
Multiple hoes? Please... ain't nobody Blowin KK but Wiz & maybe the Taylor Gang
nah son
I do this for sport... but come chill round my way & tell 'em bout the techs you spill
You ain't the soccer chick from England. Kickin THAT shit on the wrong side'll get u killed
meh
1 minute u coulda been loc, next u was almost piru... stop pretendin for street props
How u got blue on the left AND red on the right but ain't wearin Kendrick's new reeboks
aight i guess
If u ain't grippin them things I'm comin thru & clippin ur wings
This grave I'm diggin is reeeealll spacious kid, it's fit for a King
this was cool
Nice battle gents. I've seen better verses from KK, but this was still a nice one. Bags email, Dr. Manhattan, and the closer were quotes to me. Junto had glitches, Max/Tic, and fit for a King. KK had slightly simpler concepts, but his wording was generally flawless, while Junto had a few places where the creativity was diminished by poor execution.

Jun made this close, and you could probably lean either way depending on how you weigh concepts vs wording. I'm personally biased towards the smoother verse, but he definitely made this a fight so props to Junto.

Vote: King Karaoke
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Stop the gun bars white boy, I've seen plenty men get killed by guys who can't brawl
Besides if u ever let off that fire, cracker u'd probably wind up like Jason Pierre Paul
They call me Mandingo when I sling the D to broads
Your girl's a slut, every time u fuck u feel like Diddy at the Bet awards
And I'll rob u just for kicks, doesn't matter whether my pockets'll fatten
I got that 12 gauge, one blast and you'll be everywhere at once like Dr. Manhattan

--opener was a cool idea wasn't really brutal tho, the firecracker line was nice, the P.diddy falling in a hole bar was dope and funny lol, Maybe i missed something in the forums cus I didnt understand the Bag bar. Overall u had a nice verse.

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but lemme guess - While I was debatin NYSE & airlines u were out baggin bitches dude?
Cool, this Axe should help... after I hack u they can say that u just had some glitches too
your wifey ain't faithful we fuck a lotta nights, boo's face gets creamed
Ya whole bed a mess... & nigga you can switch those covers out yourself like 2K16

--you had alot of nice ideas and creative concepts thru out ya verse but u didn't word alot of them harsh enough or word them well enough to cause an Impact but I liked that 2k16 line lmao.


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Junto

Talkin hood shit got limits, you don't really live that 'lick some shots' gimmick
The streets don't fuck wit u man. Your bitch ass been doin work FOR the city, not in it

Your wifey ain't faithful we fuck a lotta nights, boo's face gets creamed
Ya whole bed a mess... & nigga you can switch those covers out yourself like 2K16

You real stale wit game, like Hi... Bye... I'd say that's a failure mang
Multiple hoes? Please... ain't nobody Blowin KK but Wiz & maybe the Taylor Gang
I do this for sport... but come chill round my way & tell 'em bout the techs you spill
You ain't the soccer chick from England. Kickin THAT shit on the wrong side'll get u killed
1 minute u coulda been loc, next u was almost piru... stop pretendin for street props
How u got blue on the left AND red on the right but ain't wearin Kendrick's new reeboks
If u ain't grippin them things I'm comin thru & clippin ur wings
This grave I'm diggin is reeeealll spacious kid, it's fit for a King


Karaoke

So do us favor and stop talking about guns you'll never tout
Nigga I'm G'd up, You couldn't take out this boss with Bags email ACCOUNT
They call me Mandingo when I SLING the D to broads
Your girl's a slut, every time u fuck u feel like Diddy at the Bet awards
But when she's with me I turn your girl into a geyser
Everything u say is horse shit, they only let u in the Farm cuz they needed fertilizer
And I'll rob u just for kicks, doesn't matter whether my pockets'll fatten
I got that 12 gauge, one blast and you'll be everywhere at once like Dr. Manhattan
Your girl is hideous bro, she looks like a fucking savage
She's ugly as fuck and could pass as a before pic of any don't judge me challenge



This was a battle with a lot of solid ass lines... enjoyed reading it not too many corny ass bars. Anyway I think Junto showed out in this one, I've seen Kar drop better fire than this not taking anything away from him cause his verse was still dope. Junto had some nice fresh concepts which wording slowed down slightly but not enough for the bar to not be a quotable. Once he tightens up his wording he gonna be a force... even though he's an alias bastard.. v/Junto
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Opener was ooook,
Firecracker was dope lol
Bags email account was cool
Diddy was ooook
I thought horse shit was nice
Dr Manhattan was sick too
Before pic was light
Closer was ok

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Opener was cool
Hack u was ok
2k16 was nice
I thought max tic woulda been doper if not in like firm but still ok
Blowing kk was slick imo
Soccor chick was ooooook
Kendrick reeboks was dope
Closer was nice too...


Shit this was a dope match.. No bad misses, very consistent on both ends.. See I don't got a problem with juntos barz I feel like he puts the pause where it need to be n just has a different style n I dig it.. Ok in an extremely close toe ta toe bout I just feel like junto took a more personal route n imo in a close as match that'll be the difference likewise to this battle I feel that's what determined my pick.. So there be it I got junto barely edging this l.. Props to both for the entertaining read n gl

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fire cracker, boss email, fertilizer, dr Manhattan

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opener, max, closer

got k with one more quote but I felt he was more consistent and his verse flowed a lot better all around. good shit for a champ match tho

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They call me Mandingo when I sling the D to broads
Your girl's a slut, every time u fuck u feel like Diddy at the Bet awards
But when she's with me I turn your girl into a geyser
Everything u say is horse shit, they only let u in the Farm cuz they needed fertilizer
And I'll rob u just for kicks, doesn't matter whether my pockets'll fatten
I got that 12 gauge, one blast and you'll be everywhere at once like Dr. Manhattan

^^^^
This section was dope, I really enjoyed that JPP bar too
that Joe Metts line was pretty funny too, dope shit all around
the only bar I didn't really get was the Bags line, but this was a tight verse regardless

Your wifey ain't faithful we fuck a lotta nights, boo's face gets creamed
Ya whole bed a mess... & nigga you can switch those covers out yourself like 2K16
1 minute u coulda been loc, next u was almost piru... stop pretendin for street props
How u got blue on the left AND red on the right but ain't wearin Kendrick's new reeboks
If u ain't grippin them things I'm comin thru & clippin ur wings
This grave I'm diggin is reeeealll spacious kid, it's fit for a King

^^^^^^
this section was dope on the opposite end, but the rest seemed filler ish
I couldn't fuck with that AXE line, and that opening line felt kind of cheesy
but other then that you had that contender match line which worked for you
I felt had you worded some of your lines properly it would have came off smoother
but I felt like you slipped far too much in the beginning...either way nice work


v/Karaoke, He came with an all around stinging verse, a few misfires
but the whole flow of the piece was so slick, it didn't effect it too much
as for the contender, I felt like his opener seemed off & didn't work well
the NYSE thing kind of backfired, the concept was cool, but the wording didn't work
Karaoke just had more lines that hit as opposed to the other guy...
nice battle though...
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