Cred 4-4 Vs Bust 2-2 - CRED WINS

[Allen Knight]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, July 9th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
@Cred @Bust

[Cred]

Cash.

How many? @Bust

[Bust]

I'm good with 10

[Bust]

Yall could bet on gat talk,difference is he drops the mag i let the mag pop
See I'll put the piece to his head n tell um "let the kangol",then blow his fuckin cap off
I tote weaponry u joke excessively dude, DAMN!
If we write our life in bars, why u always hide the part where u choke on every D u can
N for liking nuts u ain't gettin props plus ur writing sucks, u sound queer
Faggit, it's clear u like heavy D, n exactly why u ain't findin love around here,
U ain't proven kid, u lose to stiff comp n still think u the shit
But when I look at the list of ur actual wins..eye/wander how anyone would think u could spit
My hits'll bruise u kid, expose a bitch till u lose respect from the crew n the set u claiming
I'm fuckin sayin tho..when I discredit won't just hurt...it'll ruin his reputation

[Cred]

First off. . .

Ya wife a slut.. god damn. She b bustin dem slobs fam
Nickname da bitch Crazy Head the way she b suckin the fuk out my Rodman
U triumph? Never. Wit da uzi I'm all type a better
30 shot clip zip up his Whole Hood like designer sweaters
Get robbed for ya chains if u flauntin.. U aint squeezin heat
I'll have my Hispanic homie at ya Neck wit da Glock.. dats a Jesus Piece
Last week u got flawlessed. Now u shook, dats facts
Ended up gettin smashed like heavy weights for tryna push the Max
U ain't a shooter.. Never shot a gun in ya life man
Givem da banger & watch'em Clap Himself like a Indian Tribe dance

[Hush]

Originally Posted by Bust

Yall could bet on gat talk,difference is he drops the mag i let the mag pop
See I'll put the piece to his head n tell um "let the kangol",then blow his fuckin cap off
oddly I like the opener more than the punch here, if u turned that i let the mag drop/drop the mag line against allen knight or a mod that would of been punch of the week, good creativity tho.. just didnt feel the can go wp, espeically cuz i pronounce it cain goal
I tote weaponry u joke excessively dude, DAMN!
If we write our life in bars, why u always hide the part where u choke on every D u can
is this a punch tho?
N for liking nuts u ain't gettin props plus ur writing sucks, u sound queer
Faggit, it's clear u like heavy D, n exactly why u ain't findin love around here,
two d lines in a row? am i missing something bro this aint hitting
U ain't proven kid, u lose to stiff comp n still think u the shit
But when I look at the list of ur actual wins..eye/wander how anyone would think u could spit
damn b u lost me, im really out of this verse now
My hits'll bruise u kid, expose a bitch till u lose respect from the crew n the set u claiming
I'm fuckin sayin tho..when I discredit won't just hurt...it'll ruin his reputation
obvious bar, but u put it together well. im happy this verse ended on a high note

Originally Posted by Cred

First off. . .

Ya wife a slut.. god damn. She b bustin dem slobs fam
Nickname da bitch Crazy Head the way she b suckin the fuk out my Rodman
eh this shit feel dated
U triumph? Never. Wit da uzi I'm all type a better
30 shot clip zip up his Whole Hood like designer sweaters
this light
Get robbed for ya chains if u flauntin.. U aint squeezin heat
I'll have my Hispanic homie at ya Neck wit da Glock.. dats a Jesus Piece
lol fire
Last week u got flawlessed. Now u shook, dats facts
Ended up gettin smashed like heavy weights for tryna push the Max
nah
U ain't a shooter.. Never shot a gun in ya life man
Givem da banger & watch'em Clap Himself like a Indian Tribe dance
fire

yea, cred had two hot lines, rest missed. Bust had some good lines, the opener an closer mainly, and two D lines. That hurt him alot for me

v/cred

[Mr. J]

N for liking nuts u ain't gettin props plus ur writing sucks, u sound queer
Faggit, it's clear u like heavy D, n exactly why u ain't findin love around here,
^^^^
this was the strongest bar you had, the rest didn't really land a punch imo
otherwise I may have missed it, the closer was decent as well...
this sounds like it's built for an actual battle you know what I mean?
either way keep it up yo...

U triumph? Never. Wit da uzi I'm all type a better
30 shot clip zip up his Whole Hood like designer sweaters
Get robbed for ya chains if u flauntin.. U aint squeezin heat
I'll have my Hispanic homie at ya Neck wit da Glock.. dats a Jesus Piece
^^^
this was clean right here, I lol'd at the Jesus piece line
I thought that heavy weights pushing the max was dope too
the closer was nice as well..nice work


V/Cred, He came with the punches that landed
as for Bust he kind of lost me with some of his lines
he only had one line that stood out to me, so this went to the more quotable one
other then that, dope battle fella's

[Bash]

Heavy D, discredit

Vs

Opener

V/Bust. By no means was bust anything special but I think Creds excess use of gun bars kinda ruined it for me. I don't mind em every so often but urs got repetitive after a while. There's more creative ways to drop a punch nowadays.

[Amen.]

opener slight reach but cool idea
life in bars was ok - I liked it bro
heavy D was nice too
eye/wander - I wounder was dope IMO, props fam
discredit mad played

vs

rodman was solid lol
designer sweater was slicKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK
hahaha jesus / heyzuz? nahhh bruh - dope idea tho fam. I may be thinkin to hard bout the shit but hispanic homies at his neck w/ the glock and the jesus piece? idk... I liked the tie in and shit but didn't sit well w/ me on how it was executed.
heavy weights was mild
clap himself lmaoooo dope

yo this battle was nice yo. both niggas went in IMO.

Bust had: life in bars, heavy d and eye wander
Cred had: rodman, designer sweater and clap himself

fuck yo... mad close... so I'm hit the misses real quick

discredit vs heavy weights

I'm have to go w/ heavy weights out weighin discredit here... executed a little cleaner.

cred got the edge yo

[Pinot Grij]

Bust, the Heavy D line was alright, but it kinda implies the exact opposite of the song title, no? That took away from it for me. I thought the closer was solid. Every other line, I was reading through waiting for a punchline to connect to something else in the couplet and it never really connected for me.

Cred, pretty heavy on the gun bars... your attempts connected better than Bust's imo. Rodman had potential but was worded poorly. Designer sweaters, Jesus piece, and /indian tribe were all enough to edge this one out.

Vote --> Cred

[Ronin]

I got bust last two lines vs cred's whole verse, but creds whole verse felt really basic n the concepts were played or bland. Idk I want to like it but some ofbitbdidnt make sense and some of it was just blah, honestly I felt ya whole verse was a bit off. Wierd cause I usually like ur shit. Bust started off terrible lol honest. Opener was a bad wp then he got stuck on d for 2 bars strait n idk why. But his last two I thought were nice. So I gotta give him my vote.

V/ bust

[Kill Spree]

Yall could bet on gat talk,difference is he drops the mag i let the mag pop
See I'll put the piece to his head n tell um "let the kangol",then blow his fuckin cap off
ok
I tote weaponry u joke excessively dude, DAMN!
If we write our life in bars, why u always hide the part where u choke on every D u can
nah, set up was weak to
N for liking nuts u ain't gettin props plus ur writing sucks, u sound queer
Faggit, it's clear u like heavy D, n exactly why u ain't findin love around here,
more D jokes? this was aight
U ain't proven kid, u lose to stiff comp n still think u the shit
But when I look at the list of ur actual wins..eye/wander how anyone would think u could spit
decent
My hits'll bruise u kid, expose a bitch till u lose respect from the crew n the set u claiming
I'm fuckin sayin tho..when I discredit won't just hurt...it'll ruin his reputation
played nameplay on him


Ya wife a slut.. god damn. She b bustin dem slobs fam
Nickname da bitch Crazy Head the way she b suckin the fuk out my Rodman
aight
U triumph? Never. Wit da uzi I'm all type a better
30 shot clip zip up his Whole Hood like designer sweaters
cool
Get robbed for ya chains if u flauntin.. U aint squeezin heat
I'll have my Hispanic homie at ya Neck wit da Glock.. dats a Jesus Piece
weak
Last week u got flawlessed. Now u shook, dats facts
Ended up gettin smashed like heavy weights for tryna push the Max
decent
U ain't a shooter.. Never shot a gun in ya life man
Givem da banger & watch'em Clap Himself like a Indian Tribe dance
aight


overall...ok battle here, bust didnt have much that caught my eye really, cred came light here as well but i felt he was more consistent and his misses were better than bust's


v/cred

[ribbit]

Yeah I wasnt too impressed with bust. His verse just kept missing whereas credit had a polished verse even though his verse wasn't top notch I though he had a couple good punches and half the shit bust spit was just like gun talk...I though bust couldve done better and when I first started reading his verse I thought oh he'll take this easily...but he didn't even though he took the battle..I thought he could be done better than he did

Vote: cred