Greed 2-3 vs Knucklehead 2-3 - KNUCK WINS

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Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, June 18th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@Greed @Knucklehead

[~RustyGunZ~]

Keying so you don't claim u'd win

U think I can't use gunbars? Bitch plz you ain't roll with a set
You only rockin' those bandanas to cover the hole in your neck
Come to my town, I'll show u how legends blast w/ rounds dude
U can try & make a Titanfall.. If u step in here I'll put metal all around you
& no crew will save ya, them fuckbois scared to be outlinin in chalk
If you show up w/ Shooters behind ya, u just found out I wasn't trying to talk
U'd duck & run quick, u're what we call a gay man
Banksy ain't making art, but I will corner you to the wall & spray cans
Break in ur place & rape ur slut, u'll hide while I bulldoze her
I got the mind of a Stark... I'll run in that Hodor & throw her body all over
But she BEEN fuckin me, I'll drive by ur crib & have it doused w/ sparks
Don't have to show vids of ur girl & me to have these Clips tear ur house apart
U an e-thug, soft as fuck but fronts bout the life like he know shit
Only time u got Blood on your hands, ur makin' gang signs for ur pro pic
U know ur bars are trash, u've spit bad plenty
The namechange to Greed is fitting, u dropped Pryde 'cus u never had any

[Greed]

The only bombs you drop are the N ones, i dont know whos fault it is this nerd breathes
But Knuck actually likes all the races.. Daytona, Indy.. Wacky 'n even the Kentucky Derby
Yo girl loves the D, n She take jizz loads 4 a fee
After i steal ur wifi password everyone of my niggas get on it for free
I aint with that social media, dont have an instagram 'n wont start an account
That doesnt mean i wont DoubleTap ur chest until a heart'll come out
Crybaby ass bitch.... like des, but truly more so
This redhead WINEEEEEEEEEEEE..... UB40
I really be jumping off them top ropes, i cannot fake it
But that 380 bar was the Sho stopper + ur HeartBreak, Kid
Thought jews were frugal. Ur whole religions been doubted
How u spend hella time on that verse but none of them discounted?
Getting loud in the chat n shit..something like hoes do
But this gingersnaps on me one more time and he gon crumble like those do
That star wars line was awful bruh, how you figure you aint missed it?
I never believed a line about Hanukkah be terrible, but THAT was like not having a Christmas

[Hush]

U think I can't use gunbars? Bitch plz you ain't roll with a set
You only rockin' those bandanas to cover the hole in your neck
U know ur bars are trash, u've spit bad plenty
The namechange to Greed is fitting, u dropped Pryde 'cus u never had any



vs


The only bombs you drop are the N ones, i dont know whos fault it is this nerd breathes
But Knuck actually likes all the races.. Daytona, Indy.. Wacky 'n even the Kentucky Derby
Thought jews were frugal. Ur whole religions been doubted
How u spend hella time on that verse but none of them discounted?



both came eh

Knucks Banksy line edged it for him imo

I read this battle afew times
the more I read it the worst Greeds bad lines look so those misses just hurt too much in the long run

v knuck

[Junto]

Hit or miss on both sides but there were a good amount I liked to be honest...

U think I can't use gunbars? Bitch plz you ain't roll with a set
You only rockin' those bandanas to cover the hole in your neck
mean... I like it
& no crew will save ya, them fuckbois scared to be outlinin in chalk
If you show up w/ Shooters behind ya, u just found out I wasn't trying to talk
not a crazy concept but the execution was good
U'd duck & run quick, u're what we call a gay man
Banksy ain't making art, but I will corner you to the wall & spray cans
nice
Break in ur place & rape ur slut, u'll hide while I bulldoze her
I got the mind of a Stark... I'll run in that Hodor & throw her body all over
that play coulda been fire worded a little differently. not bad.
But she BEEN fuckin me, I'll drive by ur crib & have it doused w/ sparks
Don't have to show vids of ur girl & me to have these Clips tear ur house apart
clips/vid real old... decent twist though

vs.

The only bombs you drop are the N ones, i dont know whos fault it is this nerd breathes
But Knuck actually likes all the races.. Daytona, Indy.. Wacky 'n even the Kentucky Derby
haha nice
I aint with that social media, dont have an instagram 'n wont start an account
That doesnt mean i wont DoubleTap ur chest until a heart'll come out
creative... a little bit off to me but still solid
Thought jews were frugal. Ur whole religions been doubted
How u spend hella time on that verse but none of them discounted?
not bad
Getting loud in the chat n shit..something like hoes do
But this gingersnaps on me one more time and he gon crumble like those do
ginger snaps play was good... not a fan of this style of execution though

The ones I didn't quote were the misses.
I see hush got Knuck closer as a quotable. too simple for my taste.
Knuck was more consistent though, I got him here too. Much better than last week to me

V/ Knuck

[fraze]

Originally Posted by Knucklehead

U think I can't use gunbars? Bitch plz you ain't roll with a set
You only rockin' those bandanas to cover the hole in your neck
gotta love a throwback neckhole bar. smooth execution
Come to my town, I'll show u how legends blast w/ rounds dude
U can try & make a Titanfall.. If u step in here I'll put metal all around you
little straightforward but i liked this
& no crew will save ya, them fuckbois scared to be outlinin in chalk
If you show up w/ Shooters behind ya, u just found out I wasn't trying to talk
didn't like the way you set this up but the concept was nice
U'd duck & run quick, u're what we call a gay man
Banksy ain't making art, but I will corner you to the wall & spray cans
didn't like this. starting to seem like the gunbars are overused here.
Break in ur place & rape ur slut, u'll hide while I bulldoze her
I got the mind of a Stark... I'll run in that Hodor & throw her body all over
aight. GoT cool.
But she BEEN fuckin me, I'll drive by ur crib & have it doused w/ sparks
Don't have to show vids of ur girl & me to have these Clips tear ur house apart
meh. simple. video/gun clips flip is overdone.
U an e-thug, soft as fuck but fronts bout the life like he know shit
Only time u got Blood on your hands, ur makin' gang signs for ur pro pic
this was straight
U know ur bars are trash, u've spit bad plenty
The namechange to Greed is fitting, u dropped Pryde 'cus u never had any
nice personal closer

Originally Posted by Greed

The only bombs you drop are the N ones, i dont know whos fault it is this nerd breathes
But Knuck actually likes all the races.. Daytona, Indy.. Wacky 'n even the Kentucky Derby
i would have taken this in a diff direction. the punch isn't really a diss
Yo girl loves the D, n She take jizz loads 4 a fee
After i steal ur wifi password everyone of my niggas get on it for free
wife i pass word... dope concept, decent wording
I aint with that social media, dont have an instagram 'n wont start an account
That doesnt mean i wont DoubleTap ur chest until a heart'll come out
aight i guess. didnt setup the heart part tho
Crybaby ass bitch.... like des, but truly more so
This redhead WINEEEEEEEEEEEE..... UB40
no sir
I really be jumping off them top ropes, i cannot fake it
But that 380 bar was the Sho stopper + ur HeartBreak, Kid
i would have dropped the reference to 380 and added better wrestling tie ins
Thought jews were frugal. Ur whole religions been doubted
How u spend hella time on that verse but none of them discounted?
discounted is forced here. liked the concept tho.
Getting loud in the chat n shit..something like hoes do
But this gingersnaps on me one more time and he gon crumble like those do
need diff wording to make this a strong diss. make it clear you made him crumble.
That star wars line was awful bruh, how you figure you aint missed it?
I never believed a line about Hanukkah be terrible, but THAT was like not having a Christmas
forced wp. the concept is there but this bar doesn't pull it off

Cool battle gents. Knuck I feel like youre over doing the gun bars a little bit. If all you're basically saying is "I'm going to shoot you", you probably don't need to repeat it in half your bars. You had some creative ones so I can't knock you too much, but just something to keep in mind, cause they get old. I liked opener, Titanfall, Hodor, blood on hands, and pryde.

Greed, wifi password was line of the battle to me and you had some nice concepts through out, but some of them fell flat on forced wording (discounted, closer). Should tweak the bars until you get them smooth or just drop it from your verse, because in these tight battles, those misses will keep you from winning.

Knuck takes this on better execution over all. Greed didnt have much other than Wifi, and Knuck dropped a solid verse with few misses.

Vote: Knucklehead

[Ronin]

Knucks had spray can, hodor wp, I liked the flips on clips/vid n blood on ur hands lines, closer was nice. Ur first few lines werent bad but they weren't great.

Yo that opener was stolen from fb c'mon man u worded it exactly like the fuckn meme. Anyway, greed had the discounted line n gingersnaps. I really like gingersnaps I thought it was nice, wp n personal.

Seems to me like knuck knew exactly how hard to go to win this one. If greed would of had a cpl more nice lines he would've took it tho

Vote knuckz

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

nothing...

the gunbars weren't creative and Ive seen all those neckhole lines b4...

vs.

The only bombs you drop are the N ones, i dont know whos fault it is this nerd breathes
But Knuck actually likes all the races.. Daytona, Indy.. Wacky 'n even the Kentucky Derby
I aint with that social media, dont have an instagram 'n wont start an account
That doesnt mean i wont DoubleTap ur chest until a heart'll come out
Crybaby ass bitch.... like des, but truly more so
Thought jews were frugal. Ur whole religions been doubted
How u spend hella time on that verse but none of them discounted?
Getting loud in the chat n shit..something like hoes do
But this gingersnaps on me one more time and he gon crumble like those do

your opener and the gingersnaps line were fire...
all your verses should be well written like those lines....

I think Greed was more creative and consistent here...

vote- Greed...

Bye...

[Tic]

Opener

Vs

Opener, double tap, frugal

Honestly, greed came pretty nice this time. All his quotes were hard, whereas Knuckle is either getting too cocky or lazy. I liked the old Knuck better without the gun bars.

Greed got it

[Allen Knight]

U think I can't use gunbars? Bitch plz you ain't roll with a set
You only rockin' those bandanas to cover the hole in your neck
& no crew will save ya, them fuckbois scared to be outlinin in chalk
If you show up w/ Shooters behind ya, u just found out I wasn't trying to talk
U'd duck & run quick, u're what we call a gay man
Banksy ain't making art, but I will corner you to the wall & spray cans


Vs

The only bombs you drop are the N ones, i dont know whos fault it is this nerd breathes
But Knuck actually likes all the races.. Daytona, Indy.. Wacky 'n even the Kentucky Derby
Thought jews were frugal. Ur whole religions been doubted
How u spend hella time on that verse but none of them discounted?


V/Knuck, cool battle greed dropped solid here but i think kucklehead was a lil more consistent he had one more nice quote but honestly can go either way tbh, props to both, enjoyed the read.

[El Muffin]

Mmkay. Hype for this. I like u both for DIffy reasons

Knick. Open . Well damn. Colld bloooded. Made me sound like the pimp from saints row. Coooooooooo00000llld bl0000ded. Not super dope but like yeah nigga this is how it's gunna be tonight.

Titanfall. Creative. I think the metal around was ok. I like it. Abv avg

Shooters? I think Im missing sumthin but this is worded good I just don't like the concept I guess but I think it's just me

Banksy. Don demaaaarco

Hodor ok

Clips is played butttt I'm from the school of thought. It doesn't matter how played it 8sm if I heard this outloud I'd be like damn. Same way w/ creds muff line. I thought that was dope but ppl said no just coz he said muff. Even tho the snoop ref was fresh
blood eh

Closer was pretty cool

[El Muffin]

Greed

Races was kinda corny. Wacky'n . Daytona 500 lol. The fuk

WiFi was dope AFFFFFF THO

NIGGAS YO HOW U MISS THAT LOTB

Dbl tap is usually to the head fam. Well one center mass. Then one in the skully. But ok

Winnne. This one was a negative


Heartbreak reminded me of daylyt lol but it was kinda weak considering I think daylyt is ass most of the time

Discounted. Another live bar . Thing is this one I have a gripe

Diss in discounted rolls off the tung quick. The way u have it phrased is that the word diss is significant. A Lil reach on 5he wp

Ginger snaps niiiice

Hannuakah. Saaaay whay?


Lol greed u fkn crack head. U had sum dope shit but sum wtf shit breh


I thought this was close. Let me look


Yeah I got open/banksy n almost close

Vs WiFi (lotb) n Ginger snaps

So tied in quoted. I thought Knucks misses were better

But damn at WiFi

That's thst good shit. More of that greed n ur a prollem

V/knuck