Contenders Match: Jilti 8-2 Vs King Karaoke 2-0 - KARAOKE WINS

[Allen Knight]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, June 18th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

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First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

@jilti @King Karaoke

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

In...

Bye...

[jilti]

my mags firing pin recoil leave ur mom & dad murdered soon
on the ground chalked as rounds launch Offspring, just for giving birth to u
NAACP Dolezal type, cant decide if he's a black or white american
but if you keep going at this Rachel be Found Lying By Your Parents
leave u paralyzed in an old person chair once the cal. drawn
so fuck if ur from Rockaway, when thats all you'll be able to do from now on
how come he's the Heavy favorite? maybe it's the six chins
but don't take it Personal Kare, just do that before diabetes kicks in
take a rigid weapon to a bitchs midsection, then force it thru
not Intuition opponents harm, but i have this horrible gut feeling urs will too
hide the body while i get all these votes, nigga you'll lose
so if Anyone Seeking Lead, it's only detectives looking for clues
@King Karaoke

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

You're overrated plus your simple ass style is far from complicated
You've been giving us that watery shit for so long, it makes Phil feel constipated
Seeing corny faggots like u and knucklehead talk guns, just rattles
Cuz where I'm from we go outside, not netcees when we wanna have gun battles
I got a brand new revolver I've been waiting to aim at u, shit isn't a joke
The can got your name written on it like those limited editions of Coke
And I've seen your pics, your hairline has one hell of a groove
Most barbers want u to stay still during a haircut, yours actually has to tell u to move
Your gun cabinet's empty, we've never seen u at the shop picking up shells bro
The only time we say you're 'armed to the teeth' is when u try licking ur elbow
Chicks never give u TLC, your face is the reason y the girls don't wanna call
That Left Eye's so dead, I don't know if it's about to Creep, Girl Talk or chase a Waterfall

Bye...

[El Muffin]

my mags firing pin recoil leave ur mom & dad murdered soon
on the ground chalked as rounds launch Offspring, just for giving birth to u
(I get this but I wasn't feeling the spring part of the punch..Didn't think the jargon matched. Aka never heard about shots springing lol u feel ..so nah)
NAACP Dolezal type, cant decide if he's a black or white american
but if you keep going at this Rachel be Found Lying By Your Parents
(This is fucking Disgusting. My type of shit too. Creative as fuck)
leave u paralyzed in an old person chair once the cal. drawn
so fuck if ur from Rockaway, when thats all you'll be able to do from now on
(See this sounds weird too. All he be able to do is rockaway? it'd ok I guess.)
how come he's the Heavy favorite? maybe it's the six chins
but don't take it Personal Kare, just do that before diabetes kicks in
(Ok)
take a rigid weapon to a bitchs midsection, then force it thru
not Intuition opponents harm, but i have this horrible gut feeling urs will too
(this wp is fresh. Never seen that. Tie ins cool. but I had to read like 4x to fully get this..Iono why. Somethin u did. It's perceptible. U did it on purpose u fagot lol)
hide the body while i get all these votes, nigga you'll lose
so if Anyone Seeking Lead, it's only detectives looking for clues
(Why didn't u say "a lead" or at least pluralize lead. Iono. It's cool but ur doing sum strange things in this verse my nigga lol)


Interesting verse. Lol weird but interesting

You're overrated plus your simple ass style is far from complicated
You've been giving us that watery shit for so long, it makes Phil feel constipated
(Lol. Seen a few of these but your interpretation best thus far)
Seeing corny faggots like u and knucklehead talk guns, just rattles
Cuz where I'm from we go outside, not netcees when we wanna have gun battles
(ouch. Glad that ones out the,way ROFL )
I got a brand new revolver I've been waiting to aim at u, shit isn't a joke
The can got your name written on it like those limited editions of Coke
(FUCK)
And I've seen your pics, your hairline has one hell of a groove
Most barbers want u to stay still during a haircut, yours actually has to tell u to move
(dead son. I'm fkn dead .)
Your gun cabinet's empty, we've never seen u at the shop picking up shells bro
The only time we say you're 'armed to the teeth' is when u try licking ur elbow
(Ok now this sucked wtf u had me geekin then I saw this n was like oh hell naw fhis mfer would yoooo)
Chicks never give u TLC, your face is the reason y the girls don't wanna call
That Left Eye's so dead, I don't know if it's about to Creep, Girl Talk or chase a Waterfall
(Cool)


Ok

not gonna lie lol...jilti u were mad creative


But holy shit karaoke murdered it this week

Lickin my elbow was wtf tho I'm fkn mad at kara for wiping the smile I had on my face reading his verse

shit was funny

fk that niga but still


V/kara

[Greed]

my mags firing pin recoil leave ur mom & dad murdered soon
on the ground chalked as rounds launch Offspring, just for giving birth to u
Ehh okay

NAACP Dolezal type, cant decide if he's a black or white american
but if you keep going at this Rachel be Found Lying By Your Parents
Stretch but its cool

leave u paralyzed in an old person chair once the cal. drawn
so fuck if ur from Rockaway, when thats all you'll be able to do from now on
Okay

how come he's the Heavy favorite? maybe it's the six chins
but don't take it Personal Kare, just do that before diabetes kicks in
A little off

take a rigid weapon to a bitchs midsection, then force it thru
not Intuition opponents harm, but i have this horrible gut feeling urs will too
I like this concept, a little off

hide the body while i get all these votes, nigga you'll lose
so if Anyone Seeking Lead, it's only detectives looking for clues
Nice



Join Date: Mar 2013

Posts:


Hi...

You're overrated plus your simple ass style is far from complicated
You've been giving us that watery shit for so long, it makes Phil feel constipated
Lol

Seeing corny faggots like u and knucklehead talk guns, just rattles
Cuz where I'm from we go outside, not netcees when we wanna have gun battles
Ha

I got a brand new revolver I've been waiting to aim at u, shit isn't a joke
The can got your name written on it like those limited editions of Coke
Okay

And I've seen your pics, your hairline has one hell of a groove
Most barbers want u to stay still during a haircut, yours actually has to tell u to move
Lol

Your gun cabinet's empty, we've never seen u at the shop picking up shells bro
The only time we say you're 'armed to the teeth' is when u try licking ur elbow
Ehh

Chicks never give u TLC, your face is the reason y the girls don't wanna call
That Left Eye's so dead, I don't know if it's about to Creep, Girl Talk or chase a Waterfall
Solid

V kar

[Amen.]

Rockaway & Seeking Leads

Intuition was close, execution was weak, tho.

vs

Watery shit. Barbers was dope, lol. TLC's an old reference but cool & creative.

Share a coke concept was alright, Knuck used it last week, tho.

Yea... Karaoke bodied Jilti, w/ a lot of solid personals tho. SMH, was expecting a lot more from Jil, tbh... So this was kind of a let down but w/e.

Karaoke got it

[Junto]

NAACP Dolezal type, cant decide if he's a black or white american
but if you keep going at this Rachel be Found Lying By Your Parents
take a rigid weapon to a bitchs midsection, then force it thru
not Intuition opponents harm, but i have this horrible gut feeling urs will too

vs.

Seeing corny faggots like u and knucklehead talk guns, just rattles
Cuz where I'm from we go outside, not netcees when we wanna have gun battles
And I've seen your pics, your hairline has one hell of a groove
Most barbers want u to stay still during a haircut, yours actually has to tell u to move

solid battle... Jilti had creative stuff throughout but execution was lacking.
other people sayin Seeking Lead was nice. idk I wasn't feelin that one or Personal Kare
Rockaway was cool. Opener didn't come off right for me.
Kar on the other hand followed through a little more on those punches I quoted...
Then a little more consistent wit his opener solid, Coke not bad.

Kinda close to me but I got Karaoke takin it as well.

V/ KK

[fraze]

Originally Posted by jilti

my mags firing pin recoil leave ur mom & dad murdered soon
on the ground chalked as rounds launch Offspring, just for giving birth to u
i feel like you need to word this differently to hit with impact. its not even a bad concept but not set up well
NAACP Dolezal type, cant decide if he's a black or white american
but if you keep going at this Rachel be Found Lying By Your Parents
nice current events bar
leave u paralyzed in an old person chair once the cal. drawn
so fuck if ur from Rockaway, when thats all you'll be able to do from now on
choppy wording in the punch but concept is cool
how come he's the Heavy favorite? maybe it's the six chins
but don't take it Personal Kare, just do that before diabetes kicks in
this is ok.
take a rigid weapon to a bitchs midsection, then force it thru
not Intuition opponents harm, but i have this horrible gut feeling urs will too
dope wp but i didnt like the punch at all
hide the body while i get all these votes, nigga you'll lose
so if Anyone Seeking Lead, it's only detectives looking for clues
weak punch

Originally Posted by King Karaoke

You're overrated plus your simple ass style is far from complicated
You've been giving us that watery shit for so long, it makes Phil feel constipated
ok. nothing world changing but solid (no pun)
Seeing corny faggots like u and knucklehead talk guns, just rattles
Cuz where I'm from we go outside, not netcees when we wanna have gun battles
clever wit. liked this
I got a brand new revolver I've been waiting to aim at u, shit isn't a joke
The can got your name written on it like those limited editions of Coke
cool
And I've seen your pics, your hairline has one hell of a groove
Most barbers want u to stay still during a haircut, yours actually has to tell u to move
this made me LOL
Your gun cabinet's empty, we've never seen u at the shop picking up shells bro
The only time we say you're 'armed to the teeth' is when u try licking ur elbow
ill pass on this
Chicks never give u TLC, your face is the reason y the girls don't wanna call
That Left Eye's so dead, I don't know if it's about to Creep, Girl Talk or chase a Waterfall
this had me dying. nice closer

Cool battle. Jilti had a couple really nice concepts but suffered on the wording in a few places. Kar was pretty simple / straightforward with the punches, but brought in the humour and made almost all of them connect. Jilti might have been able to beat half the league with this verse, but unfortunately that's not the half Karaoke belongs to. Gotta bring the A-game again the top tier.

Vote: Karaoke

[IAmRhetoric]

my mags firing pin recoil leave ur mom & dad murdered soon
on the ground chalked as rounds launch Offspring, just for giving birth to u
not bad

NAACP Dolezal type, cant decide if he's a black or white american
but if you keep going at this Rachel be Found Lying By Your Parents
meh

leave u paralyzed in an old person chair once the cal. drawn
so fuck if ur from Rockaway, when thats all you'll be able to do from now on
okay

how come he's the Heavy favorite? maybe it's the six chins
but don't take it Personal Kare, just do that before diabetes kicks in
lol i like this

take a rigid weapon to a bitchs midsection, then force it thru
not Intuition opponents harm, but i have this horrible gut feeling urs will too
meh

hide the body while i get all these votes, nigga you'll lose
so if Anyone Seeking Lead, it's only detectives looking for clues
meh

King Karaoke

You're overrated plus your simple ass style is far from complicated
You've been giving us that watery shit for so long, it makes Phil feel constipated
lol
Seeing corny faggots like u and knucklehead talk guns, just rattles
Cuz where I'm from we go outside, not netcees when we wanna have gun battles
..okay.. statement?

I got a brand new revolver I've been waiting to aim at u, shit isn't a joke
The can got your name written on it like those limited editions of Coke
played but okay

And I've seen your pics, your hairline has one hell of a groove
Most barbers want u to stay still during a haircut, yours actually has to tell u to move
lmao bro

Your gun cabinet's empty, we've never seen u at the shop picking up shells bro
The only time we say you're 'armed to the teeth' is when u try licking ur elbow
dope

Chicks never give u TLC, your face is the reason y the girls don't wanna call
That Left Eye's so dead, I don't know if it's about to Creep, Girl Talk or chase a Waterfall

lmao

v/ Karaoke

[Cred]

Rockaway, personal kare & intuition cuda been sooo dope but ehh

vs

Opener, gun battles, & barber


Expected more from both but nonetheless a cool read. Jilti kinda disappointed though & kar did jus enough to snag the dub. Barber line was funny af lotb. Good shit

V/ - king

[Tic]

Rachel, rockaway - intuition could've been nice but I think I've seen that wp and it didn't end well for me. The connection was there but 'yours will too' lost me. Could've been really dope.

Kar had opener and groove (lol). Almost the closer but idk I wasn't crazy about the execution.

Decent battle. I think Jil tried to outdo himself here and had a couple misses. Kar had a decent verse and had LOTB. Kar edges this.