ill nik-A 1-1 vs Chyeahhh Guevara 0-1 - NIK WINS

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Netcees Battle League Season VIII

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Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, June 11th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
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• Extensions are 24 hours

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• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
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First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@ill nik-A @Chyeahhh Guevara

[ill nik-A]

10
Welcome!

[Chyeahhh!!!]

@ill nik-A you're about as Cuba as Cuba Gooding Jr. nigga

I'm Alpha, and Alf is who you look like pal
MJ made Man in the Mirror...and that's enough to make you go look right now
you're nothing but net, you fake baller, there's proof if you're in doubt
the last game of 21 this old fat man played had him losing to the house
we can go back n forth but guard your points! before blickies blam at you
cuz it'll get ugly playa, when shells hit that Astro and fuckup Nik's van axel
only think you Scarface cause you're a Cuban with acne
I got dope lines for days
you couldn't blow up a strip if u went streaking nude with a Paki
hang you by your J's from street wires, triple knot em so yah Airs won't tear
and you'll have front row seats for a retro release of the Air up There
gat tucked hoping the 4 fit only way this cat will forefeit
with so much Grease on your face, I'm thinkin of making a T bird jacket for it
blamed Che and Castro, but CIA backed gorillas and drug cartels wacked your cousins
should throw a book at this fucker, but then I'd too be guilty of passing judgement
and while you hoarding hunneds, yah fam down in Florida lookin poor n buggin
if they brokedown you wouldn't give em a jump man, let alone some fuckin Jordan Jumpmans

[ill nik-A]

Ya crazy conspiracies…
aren’t making any of us here run without a choice nor a fight
it’s obvious we didn’t need Karaoke last week to prove u don’t have a voice on this site
u gettin toyed like a dike, no one respects this lame dame at hand
ya best isn’t a test for me… but the Beta one shows u won’t ask for a name change again
fuck ya fear of dyin; I pound nerdy round birdies that sound girly
u scared of real beef… so on my grind it’s easy for me to make u eat the ground, turkey
go badmouth Cubans but I’m not paranoid & therefore feel nothin
however if my peeps say code black… it’s cuz someone from ur family wants to steal somethin
smash ya melon in, got robbed last week but not like I fell off, man
u wishin for a fallin star… ur kids are under their bed hopin they didn’t get hit by Elenin
u bring filler, I go after ya biggest asset & take a swing, nigga
I got punches to knock this rat out cold… u can call my fists chinchillas
all ya conspiracy theories are in ya head contradicting fate
But with a style as shaky as yours… it’s no surprise u keep predicting quakes

[El Muffin]

Chyeahh

Opener. Ooo

Iono why I like it but I do
that was clean
21 was dope
whoa wtf so was nik van axel but Yooooooo I don't get this ..nick van exel played for lakers spurs...etc wat does the Astros hv to do w/ it? I want to like this but I'm lost I'm sorry. Or was ugly Playa the only link between the concept . If so not feeling it. Btw I know ASTRO is a brand of van.
nude w/ a paki flow was sick. But concept was ass tbh. This was old , ancient stuff man. DE feat type shit
air up there was Ehhhhh. I get it but iono Th3 visual wasn't great to me.
t bird jacket eh
passing judgement was snf Imho. Slick but not too strong
closer was nasty

Lol interesting verse but boy did it have its Peaks n valleys

Nika
opener ok
beta eh ok
u called him a turkey? Skreeeeeeeeet! Concept nice but I couldn't get passed u call in him a turkey
code black. So ur family has a birdcall for black people? Umm wtf is this fuckery?
Fallin star. Lmaaaaaaao lotb
chinchillas was dirttttty. Ewwwww. Word association. Eeww.
Closer was cool too


What in the hell lol

Yo this was prolly the weirdest battle

First of all chyeahh surprised the fuck out of me

He started off sooooo dope

But then fell off in the middle

the way I'll Nika started off I thought he was sure to lose

But then his last 6 goldeneye slapped me in the fwce

lol u guys wtf


V/I'll Nika in a close one

[Wanderer]

Originally Posted by Baldo the Beta

@ill nik-A you're about as Cuba as Cuba Gooding Jr. nigga

I'm Alpha, and Alf is who you look like pal
MJ made Man in the Mirror...and that's enough to make you go look right now
nah
you're nothing but net, you fake baller, there's proof if you're in doubt
the last game of 21 this old fat man played had him losing to the house
what?
we can go back n forth but guard your points! before blickies blam at you
cuz it'll get ugly playa, when shells hit that Astro and fuckup Nik's van axel
dont think I'm following but this can't be good
only think you Scarface cause you're a Cuban with acne
I got dope lines for days
you couldn't blow up a strip if u went streaking nude with a Paki
no
hang you by your J's from street wires, triple knot em so yah Airs won't tear
and you'll have front row seats for a retro release of the Air up There
don't get
gat tucked hoping the 4 fit only way this cat will forefeit
with so much Grease on your face, I'm thinkin of making a T bird jacket for it
ok
blamed Che and Castro, but CIA backed gorillas and drug cartels wacked your cousins
should throw a book at this fucker, but then I'd too be guilty of passing judgement
Set up too wordy and just nah
and while you hoarding hunneds, yah fam down in Florida lookin poor n buggin
if they brokedown you wouldn't give em a jump man, let alone some fuckin Jordan Jumpmans
alright

Vs

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

Ya crazy conspiracies…
aren’t making any of us here run without a choice nor a fight
it’s obvious we didn’t need Karaoke last week to prove u don’t have a voice on this site
Ohh dope. Don't think you needed the "it's obvious" part of the punch though
u gettin toyed like a dike, no one respects this lame dame at hand
ya best isn’t a test for me… but the Beta one shows u won’t ask for a name change again
I don't pronounce Beta like that
fuck ya fear of dyin; I pound nerdy round birdies that sound girly
u scared of real beef… so on my grind it’s easy for me to make u eat the ground, turkey
not that great but for some reason I was lolin
go badmouth Cubans but I’m not paranoid & therefore feel nothin
however if my peeps say code black… it’s cuz someone from ur family wants to steal somethin
ehhh nah
smash ya melon in, got robbed last week but not like I fell off, man
u wishin for a fallin star… ur kids are under their bed hopin they didn’t get hit by Elenin
Nah
u bring filler, I go after ya biggest asset & take a swing, nigga
I got punches to knock this rat out cold… u can call my fists chinchillas
Very nice
all ya conspiracy theories are in ya head contradicting fate
But with a style as shaky as yours… it’s no surprise u keep predicting quakes
Haha cool again, nice closer

So.. here's the thing. I had this same problem with first dude last week in that I'm not sure I'm getting half his shit at times. I go with the theory though that if I can understand everyone else's references/punches from overseas then he must just be reachin or poorly wording. Wasn't feeling the verse much at all.

Nik was very slick at times and I dug the wording more. The karaoke line was cool, I dig the chinchilla line & the closer was dope too.

With more quotables, a more comprehensible read and overall better wording & sting...

Vill nik-A

[Hush]

Originally Posted by Baldo the Beta

@ill nik-A you're about as Cuba as Cuba Gooding Jr. nigga
lol that was funny

I'm Alpha, and Alf is who you look like pal
MJ made Man in the Mirror...and that's enough to make you go look right now
ok so. I kinda dont get what ur angle was here. are u saying he looks like alf so he should go look in the mirror cuz MJ made man in the mirror and he.. eh too much of a reach, I also think u mean MJ as a double jordan wp but its just not clickin b
you're nothing but net, you fake baller, there's proof if you're in doubt
the last game of 21 this old fat man played had him losing to the house
thats fire, thats really good. props
we can go back n forth but guard your points! before blickies blam at you
cuz it'll get ugly playa, when shells hit that Astro and fuckup Nik's van axel
aight keeping it 100 this is aight, in a diff way, I dont like it personally but the angle is cool and I respect what u tried to do
only think you Scarface cause you're a Cuban with acne
I got dope lines for days
you couldn't blow up a strip if u went streaking nude with a Paki
ehhh this is just alot of nothing man, honestly. its just no. especially bcuz I dont see how the word "strip" is relevant to anything
hang you by your J's from street wires, triple knot em so yah Airs won't tear
and you'll have front row seats for a retro release of the Air up There
again I dug this, but I think only cuz "Swag" or whatever. shit had a cool vibe to it. if a nigga said that irl and put the stink face and maybe give him a "don demarco" tbh this is fire for real life. as a txt line im like whatever
gat tucked hoping the 4 fit only way this cat will forefeit
with so much Grease on your face, I'm thinkin of making a T bird jacket for it
nah lol nah this been done alot.
blamed Che and Castro, but CIA backed gorillas and drug cartels wacked your cousins
should throw a book at this fucker, but then I'd too be guilty of passing judgement
trash lmao straight fucking pidgeon pooop lol this shit fools gold right hea
and while you hoarding hunneds, yah fam down in Florida lookin poor n buggin
if they brokedown you wouldn't give em a jump man, let alone some fuckin Jordan Jumpmans
lmao the fuc? if he hoarding money how he lookin poor n buggin that setup was jus rhymin words for the fuck of it. u obv gave up half way threw this verse..

[QUOTE=ill nik-A;490099]Ya crazy conspiracies

[Hush]

Quote:
Originally Posted by Baldo the Beta @ill nik-A you're about as Cuba as Cuba Gooding Jr. nigga
lol that was funny

I'm Alpha, and Alf is who you look like pal
MJ made Man in the Mirror...and that's enough to make you go look right now
ok so. I kinda dont get what ur angle was here. are u saying he looks like alf so he should go look in the mirror cuz MJ made man in the mirror and he.. eh too much of a reach, I also think u mean MJ as a double jordan wp but its just not clickin b
you're nothing but net, you fake baller, there's proof if you're in doubt
the last game of 21 this old fat man played had him losing to the house
thats fire, thats really good. props
we can go back n forth but guard your points! before blickies blam at you
cuz it'll get ugly playa, when shells hit that Astro and fuckup Nik's van axel
aight keeping it 100 this is aight, in a diff way, I dont like it personally but the angle is cool and I respect what u tried to do
only think you Scarface cause you're a Cuban with acne
I got dope lines for days
you couldn't blow up a strip if u went streaking nude with a Paki
ehhh this is just alot of nothing man, honestly. its just no. especially bcuz I dont see how the word "strip" is relevant to anything
hang you by your J's from street wires, triple knot em so yah Airs won't tear
and you'll have front row seats for a retro release of the Air up There
again I dug this, but I think only cuz "Swag" or whatever. shit had a cool vibe to it. if a nigga said that irl and put the stink face and maybe give him a "don demarco" tbh this is fire for real life. as a txt line im like whatever
gat tucked hoping the 4 fit only way this cat will forefeit
with so much Grease on your face, I'm thinkin of making a T bird jacket for it
nah lol nah this been done alot.
blamed Che and Castro, but CIA backed gorillas and drug cartels wacked your cousins
should throw a book at this fucker, but then I'd too be guilty of passing judgement
trash lmao straight fucking pidgeon pooop lol this shit fools gold right hea
and while you hoarding hunneds, yah fam down in Florida lookin poor n buggin
if they brokedown you wouldn't give em a jump man, let alone some fuckin Jordan Jumpmans
lmao the fuc? if he hoarding money how he lookin poor n buggin that setup was jus rhymin words for the fuck of it. u obv gave up half way threw this verse..
Quote:
Originally Posted by ill nik-A
Ya crazy conspiracies…
aren’t making any of us here run without a choice nor a fight
it’s obvious we didn’t need Karaoke last week to prove u don’t have a voice on this site
aight nik, cmon bro. read ur setup lmao that shit was cringe worthy. that shit should and could never be said aloud. I know this txt but zam man. maybe its cuz chyeah had some shit worded realistically that this line was so jarringly awkward. punch was weak too
u gettin toyed like a dike, no one respects this lame dame at hand
ya best isn’t a test for me… but the Beta one shows u won’t ask for a name change again
eh I dont like this line at all
fuck ya fear of dyin; I pound nerdy round birdies that sound girly
u scared of real beef… so on my grind it’s easy for me to make u eat the ground, turkey
lol this was fire. lol at calling him a turkey, but whatever now im just picking bones for nothing. this shit was tight
go badmouth Cubans but I’m not paranoid & therefore feel nothin
however if my peeps say code black… it’s cuz someone from ur family wants to steal somethin
lol ok cuz racist, but its mad regular. u could of went harder with this line but its still a solid jab
smash ya melon in, got robbed last week but not like I fell off, man
u wishin for a fallin star… ur kids are under their bed hopin they didn’t get hit by Elenin
I wish u would of used ur setup a bit more effectively here. u didnt really sell the fact that the fallin star was u fallin off last week. I mean I got it, but u had to use the word fell in the setup and the word fall in the punch, which we both know is a bit of a sting killer. I mean I dug the concept and angle. just not the execution so much
u bring filler, I go after ya biggest asset & take a swing, nigga
I got punches to knock this rat out cold… u can call my fists chinchillas
LOL fire. dug it
all ya conspiracy theories are in ya head contradicting fate
But with a style as shaky as yours… it’s no surprise u keep predicting quakes
this regular but a good closer

man

yall dig it tbh
liked more lines than usual in both verses
good battle

I got nik with the better txt battle verse here tho


wtf

its chopping my vote up so I copy pasted it from another tab

[Bust]

21 nice
Nick van exel/ nicks van axle is forced bit the fuckin idea was brilliant referencing an astro van.. Creativity was dope wp was forced

That's all I really enjoyed, paki oooooook, creativity is cool tho oh air up there was decent



Ground turkey
Code black
Falling star
Chinchillas lorb
Closer
Sold verse overall n def enuff to take this.. Mvgt nikka more quotes more effective good ish

Nikka

[8===D~~~~(}:]

@ill nik-A you're about as Cuba as Cuba Gooding Jr. nigga

I'm Alpha, and Alf is who you look like pal
MJ made Man in the Mirror...and that's enough to make you go look right now
tbh I don't get this at all man
you're nothing but net, you fake baller, there's proof if you're in doubt
the last game of 21 this old fat man played had him losing to the house
lol good one
we can go back n forth but guard your points! before blickies blam at you
cuz it'll get ugly playa, when shells hit that Astro and fuckup Nik's van axel
oh man creative concept but the wording was all over the place, hurt this a lot but with that kind of concept it's gonna be forced regardless..decent at best for the attempt at least
only think you Scarface cause you're a Cuban with acne
I got dope lines for days
you couldn't blow up a strip if u went streaking nude with a Paki
wack here
hang you by your J's from street wires, triple knot em so yah Airs won't tear
and you'll have front row seats for a retro release of the Air up There
i liked this
gat tucked hoping the 4 fit only way this cat will forefeit
with so much Grease on your face, I'm thinkin of making a T bird jacket for it
ahh man if you had a diff setup this could have been dope, first it doesn't connect as is
blamed Che and Castro, but CIA backed gorillas and drug cartels wacked your cousins
should throw a book at this fucker, but then I'd too be guilty of passing judgement
ehhh not feelin
and while you hoarding hunneds, yah fam down in Florida lookin poor n buggin
if they brokedown you wouldn't give em a jump man, let alone some fuckin Jordan Jumpmans
nah wording killed this


Vs



Ya crazy conspiracies

[8===D~~~~(}:]

Ya crazy conspiracies

[8===D~~~~(}:]

Stupid ass thread

[Paradigm]

Originally Posted by Alpo the Alpha

I'm Alpha, and Alf is who you look like pal
MJ made Man in the Mirror...and that's enough to make you go look right now
LOL this kinda slayed me a better setup and this wouldve been good imo. still funny but connection is flat
you're nothing but net, you fake baller, there's proof if you're in doubt
the last game of 21 this old fat man played had him losing to the house
solid, good connection/personal
we can go back n forth but guard your points! before blickies blam at you
cuz it'll get ugly playa, when shells hit that Astro and fuckup Nik's van axel
nah connection is blah, mispronounced wp
only think you Scarface cause you're a Cuban with acne
I got dope lines for days
you couldn't blow up a strip if u went streaking nude with a Paki
bad concept blah
hang you by your J's from street wires, triple knot em so yah Airs won't tear
and you'll have front row seats for a retro release of the Air up There
kind of a cool concept. ok bar i guess
gat tucked hoping the 4 fit only way this cat will forefeit
with so much Grease on your face, I'm thinkin of making a T bird jacket for it
nah weak
blamed Che and Castro, but CIA backed gorillas and drug cartels wacked your cousins
should throw a book at this fucker, but then I'd too be guilty of passing judgement
nothing really here ending connection sucked... shouldve tied it in better
and while you hoarding hunneds, yah fam down in Florida lookin poor n buggin
if they brokedown you wouldn't give em a jump man, let alone some fuckin Jordan Jumpmans
you repeated jumpman lol this is actually a dope concept/personal connection but you ended it terribly

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

Ya crazy conspiracies…
aren’t making any of us here run without a choice nor a fight
it’s obvious we didn’t need Karaoke last week to prove u don’t have a voice on this site
weak basic
u gettin toyed like a dike, no one respects this lame dame at hand
ya best isn’t a test for me… but the Beta one shows u won’t ask for a name change again
meh lol beta wp is kind of a reach also
fuck ya fear of dyin; I pound nerdy round birdies that sound girly
u scared of real beef… so on my grind it’s easy for me to make u eat the ground, turkey
cool connection bar digging it
go badmouth Cubans but I’m not paranoid & therefore feel nothin
however if my peeps say code black… it’s cuz someone from ur family wants to steal somethin
kind of a reach and lazy
smash ya melon in, got robbed last week but not like I fell off, man
u wishin for a fallin star… ur kids are under their bed hopin they didn’t get hit by Elenin
LOL cool bar good tie in/setup... there is the real nika (you didnt get robbed though imo just saying)
u bring filler, I go after ya biggest asset & take a swing, nigga
I got punches to knock this rat out cold… u can call my fists chinchillas
nah connection is bad lol
all ya conspiracy theories are in ya head contradicting fate
But with a style as shaky as yours… it’s no surprise u keep predicting quakes
solid bar good connection

Conceptually chin was pretty cool here but he just fucking sucks at finnishing his bars off with the connection. ill nika was kind of lazy with his verse but he had that elenin turkey and his closer that i was feeling that were better than any of chins quotables.

Vote - ill nika

[jilti]

you're nothing but net, you fake baller, there's proof if you're in doubt
the last game of 21 this old fat man played had him losing to the house
gat tucked hoping the 4 fit only way this cat will forefeit
with so much Grease on your face, I'm thinkin of making a T bird jacket for it

Vs.

Ya crazy conspiracies…
aren’t making any of us here run without a choice nor a fight
it’s obvious we didn’t need Karaoke last week to prove u don’t have a voice on this site
u gettin toyed like a dike, no one respects this lame dame at hand
ya best isn’t a test for me… but the Beta one shows u won’t ask for a name change again
fuck ya fear of dyin; I pound nerdy round birdies that sound girly
u scared of real beef… so on my grind it’s easy for me to make u eat the ground, turkey
go badmouth Cubans but I’m not paranoid & therefore feel nothin
however if my peeps say code black… it’s cuz someone from ur family wants to steal somethin
all ya conspiracy theories are in ya head contradicting fate
But with a style as shaky as yours… it’s no surprise u keep predicting quakes


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