Fraze 2-0 Vs DaGGer 1-0 - FRAZE WINS BY NOSHOW

[Allen Knight]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, May 21th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

@fraze @DaGGer

[fraze]

check do.

[fraze]

what’s killing text… y’all motherfuckers ‘feel yourselves too much’
just a bunch of ‘immature kids who never grew up’
you're 'internet text battle champ’?…. i’d rather make a few bucks,
i'll ‘pimp your sisters’ on the strip and still ‘not give two fucks’,
‘phrases’ better than ever, yet i never battled for years,
your skills are ‘decrepit’… that's how 'long you’ve been posting' here.
its a little bit ironic to me most of yall are ‘homophobes’,
when there’s ‘more dickriding’ going on than ‘gay cowboy rodeos’,
don’t believe your ‘glocks’, 'techs', 'straps', 'piece', or your ‘nine’,
you've only ever shot a webcam.... you’re ‘posing online’
all these fucking ‘quotes’ are lame, that’s how i feel about em,
but niggas barely read so they ain’t seeing ‘mine’ without em,
ever bar i wrote was played? you heard every flip before?
all that 'shade' makes sense… you DO 'spend all your time indoors’
you don’t like my rhyme scheme? like i give a fuck dude,
all that hating shit is for the burds…. so fuck you

[Sharp]

UP

[jilti]

what’s killing text… y’all motherfuckers ‘feel yourselves too much’
just a bunch of ‘immature kids who never grew up’
miss
you're 'internet text battle champ’?…. i’d rather make a few bucks,
i'll ‘pimp your sisters’ on the strip and still ‘not give two fucks’,
i like
‘phrases’ better than ever, yet i never battled for years,
your skills are ‘decrepit’… that's how 'long you’ve been posting' here.
ok
its a little bit ironic to me most of yall are ‘homophobes’,
when there’s ‘more dickriding’ going on than ‘gay cowboy rodeos’,
dope. Very true
don’t believe your ‘glocks’, 'techs', 'straps', 'piece', or your ‘nine’,
you've only ever shot a webcam.... you’re ‘posing online’
cool
all these fucking ‘quotes’ are lame, that’s how i feel about em,
but niggas barely read so they ain’t seeing ‘mine’ without em,
not feeling it
ever bar i wrote was played? you heard every flip before?
all that 'shade' makes sense… you DO 'spend all your time indoors’
lol, real nice
you don’t like my rhyme scheme? like i give a fuck dude,
all that hating shit is for the burds…. so fuck you
shot at orc


Overall it was a good read. The mechanics were a bit off but your point came across

Fraze gets my vote in a close one..

[Sn00p]

Originally Posted by fraze

what’s killing text… y’all motherfuckers ‘feel yourselves too much’
just a bunch of ‘immature kids who never grew up’
.......this is not really directed at ur opponent and thus doesn't have much impact.
you're 'internet text battle champ’?…. i’d rather make a few bucks,
i'll ‘pimp your sisters’ on the strip and still ‘not give two fucks’,
........eh. why is internet text battle champ in quotes? line is kinda generic and basic, but a decent punch. personally, I have never seen it but it could be played.
‘phrases’ better than ever, yet i never battled for years,
your skills are ‘decrepit’… that's how 'long you’ve been posting' here.
........aite, decent concept
its a little bit ironic to me most of yall are ‘homophobes’,
when there’s ‘more dickriding’ going on than ‘gay cowboy rodeos’,
.......i'd advise not using quotes unless lines are reeeeally hard to get otherwise. and this simile is pretty lazy, becuz the connection is too obvious. also, not directed at ur opponent
don’t believe your ‘glocks’, 'techs', 'straps', 'piece', or your ‘nine’,
you've only ever shot a webcam.... you’re ‘posing online’
......cool. I like the concept. but quotes are unnecessary again.
all these fucking ‘quotes’ are lame, that’s how i feel about em,
but niggas barely read so they ain’t seeing ‘mine’ without em,
.......again not directed at ur opponent
ever bar i wrote was played? you heard every flip before?
all that 'shade' makes sense… you DO 'spend all your time indoors’
.....the angle was good, the flip could've been harsher
you don’t like my rhyme scheme? like i give a fuck dude,
all that hating shit is for the burds…. so fuck you
........cool concept, unfortunately most burd flips are played

try and keep ur lines relevant to ur opponent. and use quotes only when absolutely necessary. maybe read snore battles to see what flies around here. the basics are all there tho. u have many dope concepts

[Wanderer]

Originally Posted by fraze

what’s killing text… y’all motherfuckers ‘feel yourselves too much’
just a bunch of ‘immature kids who never grew up’
ridiculous
you're 'internet text battle champ’?…. i’d rather make a few bucks,
i'll ‘pimp your sisters’ on the strip and still ‘not give two fucks’,
I like it actually but again, can't take this serious not even directed right
‘phrases’ better than ever, yet i never battled for years,
your skills are ‘decrepit’… that's how 'long you’ve been posting' here.
no
its a little bit ironic to me most of yall are ‘homophobes’,
when there’s ‘more dickriding’ going on than ‘gay cowboy rodeos’,
made me laugh, still stupid
don’t believe your ‘glocks’, 'techs', 'straps', 'piece', or your ‘nine’,
you've only ever shot a webcam.... you’re ‘posing online’
no
all these fucking ‘quotes’ are lame, that’s how i feel about em,
but niggas barely read so they ain’t seeing ‘mine’ without em,
no
ever bar i wrote was played? you heard every flip before?
all that 'shade' makes sense… you DO 'spend all your time indoors’
lol
you don’t like my rhyme scheme? like i give a fuck dude,
all that hating shit is for the burds…. so fuck you

no

Fraze clearly had some other agenda here (as in attacking everyone on netcees rather than his opponent) but yeah.. Have some feed anyway

Oh and Jesus. If the apostrophes were serious they've gotta stop.

[Tic]

Originally Posted by fraze

what’s killing text… y’all motherfuckers ‘feel yourselves too much’
just a bunch of ‘immature kids who never grew up’
This isn't saying much and it's not directed at your opponent.
you're 'internet text battle champ’?…. i’d rather make a few bucks,
i'll ‘pimp your sisters’ on the strip and still ‘not give two fucks’,
This was ok I guess
‘phrases’ better than ever, yet i never battled for years,
your skills are ‘decrepit’… that's how 'long you’ve been posting' here.
Nah
its a little bit ironic to me most of yall are ‘homophobes’,
when there’s ‘more dickriding’ going on than ‘gay cowboy rodeos’,
Nope
don’t believe your ‘glocks’, 'techs', 'straps', 'piece', or your ‘nine’,
you've only ever shot a webcam.... you’re ‘posing online’
This was meh.
all these fucking ‘quotes’ are lame, that’s how i feel about em,
but niggas barely read so they ain’t seeing ‘mine’ without em,
Nah idk what this is
ever bar i wrote was played? you heard every flip before?
all that 'shade' makes sense… you DO 'spend all your time indoors’
Ok
you don’t like my rhyme scheme? like i give a fuck dude,
all that hating shit is for the burds…. so fuck you
No

Ok this seems to be a site diss. There were a couple ok lines and a few that were easy to pick up on in terms of concepts. Obviously you aren't motivated for battling. Seems like if you tried you could be pretty decent based on what I'm seeing, at least if you directed your lines at someone. But it seems you have no drive.

You need to think out of the box when you come up with concepts. Tons of concepts have been done, but try to put a new spin on it. If it came easy and it's the first thing you thought of, it's most likely been done before.

[fraze]

Ftr:
All the quotes are not serious, I was setting up the bar about people not reading. Also ignoring my opponent was intentional, basically just felt like doing something different. Thanks for all the feed tho.