Champ Match: Cashius 2-0 vs Allen Knight - ALLEN WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Champ Match
Cashius vs Allen Knight

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, May 14th 2014 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 14, maximum of 20
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@Cashius @Allen Knight

[Allen Knight]

wattup u faggot, wanna go 14?

[Cashius]

Okay!

[Sharp]

@Allen Knight I have 14 from cashius

[Allen Knight]

Originally Posted by Sharp

@Allen Knight I have 14 from cashius

i just got home an seen this i didnt even kno the site was back up but i will post asap

[Allen Knight]

u fuckin coke fiend, shit'll turn u to a corpse fast dude
for White Castle sell all his stuff till the faggot cant afford fast food
ur girls vag stores dicks daily, ur whore takes it well
that bitch is Fowler pussy reeks & its ripped worse than a torn ACL
u try to brawl w/ the wrong ppl, stomped & ran in ur place
cuz last time C-walk into a fight abunch of gangstas danced on his face
im gangsta uzi aimed at ur skull, ur wack & a sleaze
im Trilby, ur just a bitch gettin his top blown off like a hat in a breeze
this shits like beatin a dead horse, i'll bang'em w/ the heat
fight back Orphan to get murdered & ur body abandoned in the street
u'd neva be picked for a crew, u'll get sent back quick
no ones investing in ur Stockholm's they just feel bad for ur wack shit
u been trash for so long, i leave the fuckin best shook
ur not even OKC & i'll stomp ur skull till theres a dent worse than Westbrooks

[Sharp]

Cashius verse




Fuck you Mexicans!
...in your Pintos with hydraulics. Them fuckers just need to stop
But the only time we'll see Allen's ass in low riders is the cut of the jeans he rocks
Girls let me put it wherever...and usually an ass fuck is first
So, the kid is just bitter, cause he couldn't slip in the shitter if he was Bags drunk at work
Every month I'm making jewelry decisions so crazy the cost would floor ya...
His broke ass would only be on the fence over ICE if they were chasing him across the border
"Motivated" "Aggressive" s'why the mag gave you the nod. That's sillyness yo, it's a hoax
So, the next time you get a Sharp edge...we hope that you REALLY go for the throat
Always talking bout cars and girls you DON'T have. That's real annoying, you queer
No wonder he's spreading Lysol over the place...his family been cleaning toilets for years
He's taking E and dick from the homos he's hooking up with at night
So, mechanic work ain't the only time you're rolling, on your back looking up at a pipe
It was pure luck that you got to 50...So, bitch just don't get it confused
EVERY SINGLE windfall into the category of a gift that was given to you

[Burd]

u fuckin coke fiend, shit'll turn u to a corpse fast dude
for White Castle sell all his stuff till the faggot cant afford fast food
okay hit
ur girls vag stores dicks daily, ur whore takes it well
that bitch is Fowler pussy reeks & its ripped worse than a torn ACL
okay again
u try to brawl w/ the wrong ppl, stomped & ran in ur place
cuz last time C-walk into a fight abunch of gangstas danced on his face
nahhh too easy to do a one letter np
im gangsta uzi aimed at ur skull, ur wack & a sleaze
im Trilby, ur just a bitch gettin his top blown off like a hat in a breeze
unghhhhhhhhhh nice
this shits like beatin a dead horse, i'll bang'em w/ the heat
fight back Orphan to get murdered & ur body abandoned in the street
forced to me
u'd neva be picked for a crew, u'll get sent back quick
no ones investing in ur Stockholm's they just feel bad for ur wack shit
doesn't tie into the wp ?
u been trash for so long, i leave the fuckin best shook
ur not even OKC & i'll stomp ur skull till theres a dent worse than Westbrooks
easy to do again man but nice relevant flip

v

...in your Pintos with hydraulics. Them fuckers just need to stop
But the only time we'll see Allen's ass in low riders is the cut of the jeans he rocks
okay heree
Girls let me put it wherever...and usually an ass fuck is first
So, the kid is just bitter, cause he couldn't slip in the shitter if he was Bags drunk at work
slick wording makes it better
Every month I'm making jewelry decisions so crazy the cost would floor ya...
His broke ass would only be on the fence over ICE if they were chasing him across the border
ehhhh not feeling
"Motivated" "Aggressive" s'why the mag gave you the nod. That's sillyness yo, it's a hoax
So, the next time you get a Sharp edge...we hope that you REALLY go for the throat
sharp flips r done to death
Always talking bout cars and girls you DON'T have. That's real annoying, you queer
No wonder he's spreading Lysol over the place...his family been cleaning toilets for years
this was nice
He's taking E and dick from the homos he's hooking up with at night
So, mechanic work ain't the only time you're rolling, on your back looking up at a pipe
jesus this is played. come on
It was pure luck that you got to 50...So, bitch just don't get it confused
EVERY SINGLE windfall into the category of a gift that was given to you
okay i guess



ehhhhhhh idk, not a stellar battle. both came light, actually, maybe not light but a lot of shit that anyone could do. usually two of my favs to read in the new school of good battlers but they took the easy route on some bars, here. trilby was lotb that was so dope -- followed by lysol. it's hard to choose who won. i'll give the edge to Allen bcause he had lotb and everything else was close. vote AK, barely

[Cred]

White castle, c walk, hat breeze, westbrook

VS

Lowrider, bags line, up at a pipe

Nice battle I thought. Both had sum nices lines which wrre yhe ones I quoted above. Oth err lines were forced or jus not good on how they were executed. Allen had a bit more of a consistent ver ess hete tho imo. Cud go eithrr way though

V allen k

[iSpaz]

u fuckin coke fiend, shit'll turn u to a corpse fast dude
for White Castle sell all his stuff till the faggot cant afford fast food
\\ ok
ur girls vag stores dicks daily, ur whore takes it well
that bitch is Fowler pussy reeks & its ripped worse than a torn ACL
\\ lol
u try to brawl w/ the wrong ppl, stomped & ran in ur place
cuz last time C-walk into a fight abunch of gangstas danced on his face
// this was ok, not a fan of referring to cashius as just C
im gangsta uzi aimed at ur skull, ur wack & a sleaze
im Trilby, ur just a bitch gettin his top blown off like a hat in a breeze
\\ cool
this shits like beatin a dead horse, i'll bang'em w/ the heat
fight back Orphan to get murdered & ur body abandoned in the street
// not bad, but or fin'
u'd neva be picked for a crew, u'll get sent back quick
no ones investing in ur Stockholm's they just feel bad for ur wack shit
// i liked this
u been trash for so long, i leave the fuckin best shook
ur not even OKC & i'll stomp ur skull till theres a dent worse than Westbrooks
// like i said, but i liked this bar dope

v

...in your Pintos with hydraulics. Them fuckers just need to stop
But the only time we'll see Allen's ass in low riders is the cut of the jeans he rocks
// lol cool
Girls let me put it wherever...and usually an ass fuck is first
So, the kid is just bitter, cause he couldn't slip in the shitter if he was Bags drunk at work
//cool
Every month I'm making jewelry decisions so crazy the cost would floor ya...
His broke ass would only be on the fence over ICE if they were chasing him across the border
// meh
"Motivated" "Aggressive" s'why the mag gave you the nod. That's sillyness yo, it's a hoax
So, the next time you get a Sharp edge...we hope that you REALLY go for the throat
// not bad
Always talking bout cars and girls you DON'T have. That's real annoying, you queer
No wonder he's spreading Lysol over the place...his family been cleaning toilets for years
// i liked this
He's taking E and dick from the homos he's hooking up with at night
So, mechanic work ain't the only time you're rolling, on your back looking up at a pipe
// kind of funny
It was pure luck that you got to 50...So, bitch just don't get it confused
EVERY SINGLE windfall into the category of a gift that was given to you
// not bad


v/ AK got him being a little more consistent, dope battle guys

[Wanderer]

Originally Posted by Allen Knight

u fuckin coke fiend, shit'll turn u to a corpse fast dude
for White Castle sell all his stuff till the faggot cant afford fast food
nice
ur girls vag stores dicks daily, ur whore takes it well
that bitch is Fowler pussy reeks & its ripped worse than a torn ACL
cool
u try to brawl w/ the wrong ppl, stomped & ran in ur place
cuz last time C-walk into a fight abunch of gangstas danced on his face
ok
im gangsta uzi aimed at ur skull, ur wack & a sleaze
im Trilby, ur just a bitch gettin his top blown off like a hat in a breeze
haha slick
this shits like beatin a dead horse, i'll bang'em w/ the heat
fight back Orphan to get murdered & ur body abandoned in the street
not feeling
u'd neva be picked for a crew, u'll get sent back quick
no ones investing in ur Stockholm's they just feel bad for ur wack shit
I could be missing something here but I'm gonna go with the fact it's probably the bar that's missing something, not feeling
u been trash for so long, i leave the fuckin best shook
ur not even OKC & i'll stomp ur skull till theres a dent worse than Westbrooks
haha ok

Vs

Originally Posted by Sharp

Cashius verse




Fuck you Mexicans!
...in your Pintos with hydraulics. Them fuckers just need to stop
But the only time we'll see Allen's ass in low riders is the cut of the jeans he rocks
ok I guess
Girls let me put it wherever...and usually an ass fuck is first
So, the kid is just bitter, cause he couldn't slip in the shitter if he was Bags drunk at work
bags line blah
Every month I'm making jewelry decisions so crazy the cost would floor ya...
His broke ass would only be on the fence over ICE if they were chasing him across the border
meh
"Motivated" "Aggressive" s'why the mag gave you the nod. That's sillyness yo, it's a hoax
So, the next time you get a Sharp edge...we hope that you REALLY go for the throat
meh
Always talking bout cars and girls you DON'T have. That's real annoying, you queer
No wonder he's spreading Lysol over the place...his family been cleaning toilets for years
nice, dope
He's taking E and dick from the homos he's hooking up with at night
So, mechanic work ain't the only time you're rolling, on your back looking up at a pipe
ok
It was pure luck that you got to 50...So, bitch just don't get it confused
EVERY SINGLE windfall into the category of a gift that was given to you
Not feeling

I gotta say cash verse was not as bad as my comments would suggest but then after reading Allen's which I thought was one of the better drops I've seen so far it just didn't match up. Lysol was absolutely dope though bit then Trilby was so sick. Gotta go with allen

V/Allen

[Destroyer]

man I got cashius here
maybe I read a different battle... but wasn't feeling much from Allen at all
though Lysol was lotb and hilarious windfall was dope too

v/Cashius

[Sn00p]

u fuckin coke fiend, shit'll turn u to a corpse fast dude
for White Castle sell all his stuff till the faggot cant afford fast food
^yes, kinda stretched, cuz cas, but the line was cool
ur girls vag stores dicks daily, ur whore takes it well
that bitch is Fowler pussy reeks & its ripped worse than a torn ACL
^cool
u try to brawl w/ the wrong ppl, stomped & ran in ur place
cuz last time C-walk into a fight abunch of gangstas danced on his face
^1 letter np. so not that hard a hit
im gangsta uzi aimed at ur skull, ur wack & a sleaze
im Trilby, ur just a bitch gettin his top blown off like a hat in a breeze
^dope
this shits like beatin a dead horse, i'll bang'em w/ the heat
fight back Orphan to get murdered & ur body abandoned in the street
^decent
u'd neva be picked for a crew, u'll get sent back quick
no ones investing in ur Stockholm's they just feel bad for ur wack shit
^if referring to the stockholm syndrome this works. so not bad
u been trash for so long, i leave the fuckin best shook
ur not even OKC & i'll stomp ur skull till theres a dent worse than Westbrooks
^aite

vs.

...in your Pintos with hydraulics. Them fuckers just need to stop
But the only time we'll see Allen's ass in low riders is the cut of the jeans he rocks
^didnt rly like. i evn googled & low rider jeans dont rly exist. it's low rise. but yea. didn't hit to me
Girls let me put it wherever...and usually an ass fuck is first
So, the kid is just bitter, cause he couldn't slip in the shitter if he was Bags drunk at work
^nice wording. cool
Every month I'm making jewelry decisions so crazy the cost would floor ya...
His broke ass would only be on the fence over ICE if they were chasing him across the border
^decent
"Motivated" "Aggressive" s'why the mag gave you the nod. That's sillyness yo, it's a hoax
So, the next time you get a Sharp edge...we hope that you REALLY go for the throat
^sharp wp is played at this point. flip was pretty good tho
Always talking bout cars and girls you DON'T have. That's real annoying, you queer
No wonder he's spreading Lysol over the place...his family been cleaning toilets for years
^rly nice
He's taking E and dick from the homos he's hooking up with at night
So, mechanic work ain't the only time you're rolling, on your back looking up at a pipe
^personally i have nvr seen it, so giving u the benefit of the doubt. dece
It was pure luck that you got to 50...So, bitch just don't get it confused
EVERY SINGLE windfall into the category of a gift that was given to you
^wp was dope. but i didnt rly like the way u ended the punch. wasn't as harsh as ur usual flips

lysol and top blown were rly dope. so yall were even on the really hard hits. rest of both was mostly cool, but i feel like cash had more lines i didn't feel as much. still, this was a very quality battle and a good read. props to both. allen's verse was very smooth, and while cash's was rlly harsh at times, at some points it just didn't work as well for me. so yea. this is closer than the votes show atm in my opinion. and i can def see ppl giving it to cash, but i for one have allen on consistency. good shit to both. enjoyed this.
v/ak

[Razah]

Allen Knight:

this shits like beatin a dead horse, i'll bang'em w/ the heat
fight back Orphan to get murdered & ur body abandoned in the street

That was dope. It read well and it wasn't forced.

Cashius:

"Motivated" "Aggressive" s'why the mag gave you the nod. That's sillyness yo, it's a hoax
So, the next time you get a Sharp edge...we hope that you REALLY go for the throat

He's taking E and dick from the homos he's hooking up with at night
So, mechanic work ain't the only time you're rolling, on your back looking up at a pipe


I liked those. I kind of feel like your wording is too wordy. I dunno, it's like it's all making sense, and the flow is kinda on point cuz the wording is the same in both lines, I'd just feel like it would hit so much harder if the wording was shorter and smoother.


Cashius had more stuff that stood out to me, I think if there was less syllables per line, it would come off so much smoother and harder hitting, still..

vCashius