VILLAIN

dead man · 02-26-2015, 01:11 AM

nobody is listening. i'm typing in vain
if you're reading this it's obviously time for a change
wondered how many personalities that i could sustain
while inhabiting a single body tied to a brain
responsible for making me neurotic and sad
insecure and anxious thirsty for a distraction
writing is a selfish individual act
that sets me free from living, its as simple as that
art therapy. more like a dark parody
part paper, part white lighter and part kerosene
part aerosol. kill them all. its history now
paint the town red. let the bricks burn to the ground
buy me a round. i deserve it for surviving this long
i would have killed Mowgli, domesticated Shere Khan
write his name in a song. tigers lions and rats
you're tied to the tracks and i'm the villain, relax
amoxicillin in your corridor a quarter to five
don't ask the sky to save me yet, dear, i'm still alive
i know my way, my hideaway, my reason to be
but its far away. 40,000 acres under the sea
when Sebastian sang of better days i laughed as a child
forgive me. i've been lonely for a while.
my adolescence was black & milds, cobras and blunts
since then i've been fighting how i don't give a fuck
about anything but buzzing. i've been warned in advance
not to give myself another chance

thank you

Split Eight · 02-26-2015, 02:05 AM

Both your diction and your natural selection of descriptive language to reinforce a theme are to be envied.

Geno · 03-05-2015, 11:51 AM

writing is a selfish individual act
that sets me free from living, its as simple as that

couldnt feel you more here. if only life were nothing but the time during which we write. its those times in my life when i feel the free'est. free from everything. everyone.

its the only time i am ever truly happy

Zen · 03-06-2015, 06:43 PM

my adolescence was black & milds, cobras and blunts
since then i've been fighting how i don't give a fuck
UNGH

Dr. Dog is right. Compile all your shit and get it published, man. I'm pretty sure most of the Open Mic would buy a copy.

02-26-2015, 01:11 AM	#1
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	VILLAIN nobody is listening. i'm typing in vain if you're reading this it's obviously time for a change wondered how many personalities that i could sustain while inhabiting a single body tied to a brain responsible for making me neurotic and sad insecure and anxious thirsty for a distraction writing is a selfish individual act that sets me free from living, its as simple as that art therapy. more like a dark parody part paper, part white lighter and part kerosene part aerosol. kill them all. its history now paint the town red. let the bricks burn to the ground buy me a round. i deserve it for surviving this long i would have killed Mowgli, domesticated Shere Khan write his name in a song. tigers lions and rats you're tied to the tracks and i'm the villain, relax amoxicillin in your corridor a quarter to five don't ask the sky to save me yet, dear, i'm still alive i know my way, my hideaway, my reason to be but its far away. 40,000 acres under the sea when Sebastian sang of better days i laughed as a child forgive me. i've been lonely for a while. my adolescence was black & milds, cobras and blunts since then i've been fighting how i don't give a fuck about anything but buzzing. i've been warned in advance not to give myself another chance thank you __________________ Zack Wicks for president

03-05-2015, 11:51 AM	#3
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	writing is a selfish individual act that sets me free from living, its as simple as that couldnt feel you more here. if only life were nothing but the time during which we write. its those times in my life when i feel the free'est. free from everything. everyone. its the only time i am ever truly happy __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

02-26-2015, 02:05 AM	#2
Split Eight ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Join Date: Feb 2015 Posts: 1,632 Battle Record: 3-5 Champed - Haiku Writers Challenge Rep Power: 85899380	Both your diction and your natural selection of descriptive language to reinforce a theme are to be envied.

03-06-2015, 06:43 PM	#4
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	my adolescence was black & milds, cobras and blunts since then i've been fighting how i don't give a fuck UNGH Dr. Dog is right. Compile all your shit and get it published, man. I'm pretty sure most of the Open Mic would buy a copy.