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Old 02-14-2015, 02:42 PM   #1
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Fucking stud, look at all of Oregon squirting
Torture insurgents with one thrust through the porcelain curtain
Keep em closed- every dream is gold in gorgeous cursive
Pour your worth in, my fist fuck charm gets the corpse a'flirtin
Bow tie bullet holes have this low tide shore a'bursting
This idle tongue is sniper fun where I store inertia
Board of tumbleweeds, do your chores while I explore
Wars that buckle me, brain spores where I store the substance key
We're just short of lovely spring. But that might dwarf a couple things
Hit the club & pick a slut- go score a troubled queen
This suicide king knife slash hair piece
You've seen it all? Well I can't even see past an eye lash, barely
I'm mad; therapy, witness a brilliant time lapse rarity
Just a fucking hi-jack parody. Your mom sold Wise crack, parenting
Used to drain grape vines, not like I miss the wine glass, terribly
But this clarity sucks, pairing me up with flying monkey lost style
Turn my back for a second & they're prying stuffing straw out
Jaw down, teething on side walk edge
With my legion of eye-pop friends, Fiending a cyclops death
A sequence of life dawns fresh juniper fragrance
Beware of lucifer patience. Scared of new inspiration
All this fucking beauty is flagrant, my dignity is chained
Nude in the basement, oh so cruel with basics
Fork lifting fuck you's to fuse into face lifts
To hold something so precious, you usually break it
Answer hidden within land of snitches- this mutiny angel
Acid author, adapt as water- so fluid's the angle
And so brutal's the halo stitched to crown remnant
Just fidget & lounge, pensive. The trick is to sound eminent
My insides might be rough, but it's all liquid around edges
And I'm lifting the cloud pressure
Y'all can piece it together, I fiend to dislodge the puzzle
What- y'all think I forgot my uncle?
And the shit he taught me? See I have reason to chop the muscle
Fuck you, your family & your awkward hustle
Bet y'all counting down days til my jaw gets muzzled
No rain dance but Wise doing the worm through the longest puddle
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Old 02-14-2015, 06:25 PM   #2
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Old 02-14-2015, 08:49 PM   #3
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Dopeness.

"This suicide king knife slash hair piece
You've seen it all? Well I can't even see past an eye lash, barely"

"Just a fucking hi-jack parody. Your mom sold Wise crack, parenting"

"A sequence of life dawns fresh juniper fragrance"

"To hold something so precious, you usually break it"

Were all ridiculous. Schemes on schemes on schemes, with content.
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Old 02-15-2015, 03:37 PM   #4
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This was fucking gnarly. Basically every line was quotable. Some of them for the rhyming, some because of the schemes, but most of them because its so fucking raw. Nice.
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