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purpose is lucid
pristine in it's oxygen lack. stay pretty in Providence, black- bled the lace of that blouse. graft echinacea, pollen, and sprout. i believe that we that we borrowed *the solemn* from churches and druids- rose-tinted opiates. as fallen as out. opening opera ensembles, exit & go for my coat and cope with some coughfuls, bourbon-influenced. gurgling fluids. the nausea, clandestine, corrosive in nature and probably scalding as acid drops in your esophagus/throat as if seeing disease through chameleon goggles. echolerascope so pro-creation. so miscreant, broke- it pays to be lonely and vacant. seven seasons seeped in a bottle. and dreamed through a nostril. relearned every muse, sleeping beauty, as ghostly old sorrow. if only tomorrow could be here more soon permanence muted. sirens sound, and i'll be seeing you too Last edited by holocene; 01-01-2015 at 03:09 AM. |
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u need direction.
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so pro-creation. so miscreant, broke- it pays to be lonely and vacant.
seven seasons seeped in a bottle. and dreamed through a nostril. i enjoyed the tone of this segment and really the energy of the piece itself. really obscure but it felt almost like God's bathroom floor. you struck a chord and went with the vibration. explain to me ECHOLERASCOPE. did you just make that up to rhyme? its not something I've ever heard of. i hope you stick around, i like your verbiage. very familiar in a particular fashion. take care
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hello Dead Man and Innovator. Thank you. I thought that e. coli was short for eschera cholera but it is actually something more medical sounding, I am not a doctor. I meant to suggest that everything I see is shit, but it wasn't well done so I lost my concept
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Liked the vibes you have. Stick around. Soak in some rays. Put your feet in the sand, man.. Pce
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