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dead man, TARNISH
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habit dependent. majora's mask of resentment its sad when solitude becomes your antidepressant back at the breakfast table you were asking me questions which i answered indirectly for the palpable tension relish the wait, a hunter's etiquette. the silence erupts 7 seconds delayed. now we're feeling awkward as fuck tar-stained smiles. tarmac roads on Clark street parking the truck you put the tar in tarnished cause you're coughing it up lost in the lust. like august at dusk, lights in the distance its transportive. dope per dosage like a licensed physician writer of sentences. writer of truth. writer of fiction stretching artistic nuance with no type of extension shine opalescent. cybergenetic hydrogen weapon biosynthetic spikes delivered via viral infection sniper attention. grad student indecisive as freshman misguide me with your intellect, satire, disconnection your eyes are electric like your skin is velour silky and porous. a bit complex like adding 60 to 4 system disorder. prisoner, you're pretty as porn road tripping Discordia for an idol to mourn less insightful than bored. too desensitized to rebel believing half of what i see and every lie that you tell put your ear to the shell. now put your eye to the chamber its not goodbye. its suicide. its, i'll see you later DEADMAN
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12-19-2014, 10:22 PM
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When you are the only person you want to be with. Fuck lol I'm drunk as always, maybe more than usual, but this was dope as usual. I like how you make words feel like they have been resting within me forever and the only way they get free is when you write them. for real...you're my favourite.
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12-19-2014, 11:40 PM
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Wat witty said
Real shit.
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12-20-2014, 11:40 AM
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First four were bonkers,
A bit complex like adding 60 to 4 was slick Eyes are electric and artistic nuances were dope...really the whole thing was solid. Verse hit home hard and never lost its luster dope
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12-20-2014, 02:05 PM
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this was sickness, the middle part wowed me
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12-21-2014, 11:01 AM
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interesting read
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12-21-2014, 11:47 AM
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Yeah? Say true?
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12-21-2014, 12:05 PM
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witty gay irl
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12-21-2014, 12:39 PM
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Lol @ me for being gay? Lol i get it.
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12-21-2014, 01:04 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,709
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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defensive. offended.
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ridiculous. flow bonk. everything dope.
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12-21-2014, 02:26 PM
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The flow was bonk.
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12-21-2014, 06:53 PM
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"its sad when solitude becomes your antidepressant"
HITS HOME LIKE COLLISIONS W/ CATCHERS
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12-23-2014, 07:50 PM
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real name no gimmicks
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12-24-2014, 12:21 PM
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10/10
this has been said before but it's a shame that we pieces of shit of theNC community are your only audience. If you spit this at open mics in NY you'd get mad librarian pussy. Record this shit my nigga...make it a habit just start with a cheap lil 10 dollar mic and doors will open where you'll meet somebody who likes you with a home studio
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12-26-2014, 05:31 PM
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start making music. your writing is amazing
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great flow
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Hello dead man. This verse stood out among the other open mic verses because of the melodic feel and careful word choice. The writing was cohesive but still organic. The last lined struck me as tacked on, though. It might have been because you signed your name (:
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Do what is right.
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Genius,i wish,to write like u
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