drunk n high... twisted

Lost in Thought · 08-21-2013, 01:44 PM

Hunched over on the computer "Composing Greatness"
Redbull laced wit vodka and I'm totaly waisted
Sit back and spit raps thinking its dopeness created
Composed and focused this is suppose to be great shit
If thats what it is why dont nobody say it
At a loss for words and i can hardly contain it
Someone make it clear and help me explain it
Or at least open your lips and tell peeps the name bitch!

I dont do this for money... not try'n to be famous
Respect is the debt... still wait'n for payment
Listed CLOSELY cuz L.i.T likes to play tricks
Say quick "I", (SPELL out) "M.A.P" n quickly say "ness"
So what was your statement? or do I need to explain it
YOUR THE ONLY FAGGOT IN YOUR HOUSE WHO SAID "I. am. A. P.ee nis!"
Disgrauding the praises, its a matter of speaking
Respect is about how your treated no matter the reasons
Conceited? I dont believe it, but you can ask your self
Then yell in awe or help when they pass the belt
Its easy to spell just sound out L.i.T
OR duck n dip when I twitch its a round house kick

I'm rough around the egdes so its coarse when you touch me
Always scratch a never, you'll be forced to just love me
On the open mic there's nothing north of above me
Cuz the cold of the north pole is... sort of "just ugly"...

Exis · 08-21-2013, 02:10 PM

Hunched over on the computer "Composing Greatness"
Redbull laced wit vodka and I'm totaly waisted
Sit back and spit raps thinking its dopeness created
Composed and focused this is suppose to be great shit

^^Aight.

Wasn't really feelin' much of the middle section, seemed Idk...just not my thing...alot of stuff didn't hit me hard, the connections were off...some parts flowed nicely but were let down by either content or failin' to deliver what you wanted to do successfully...it was cool, not great tho.

No hate just sayin', stay upwards.

Eŋg · 08-21-2013, 07:28 PM

i thought first stanza was okish. then you sort of lost of me but i did read it all the way through. that spell-out line was gai af. don't do that. and i think disgrauding is disregarding? or something. idk. write sober.

pz

08-21-2013, 01:44 PM	#1
Lost in Thought Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 70 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 37	drunk n high... twisted Hunched over on the computer "Composing Greatness" Redbull laced wit vodka and I'm totaly waisted Sit back and spit raps thinking its dopeness created Composed and focused this is suppose to be great shit If thats what it is why dont nobody say it At a loss for words and i can hardly contain it Someone make it clear and help me explain it Or at least open your lips and tell peeps the name bitch! I dont do this for money... not try'n to be famous Respect is the debt... still wait'n for payment Listed CLOSELY cuz L.i.T likes to play tricks Say quick "I", (SPELL out) "M.A.P" n quickly say "ness" So what was your statement? or do I need to explain it YOUR THE ONLY FAGGOT IN YOUR HOUSE WHO SAID "I. am. A. P.ee nis!" Disgrauding the praises, its a matter of speaking Respect is about how your treated no matter the reasons Conceited? I dont believe it, but you can ask your self Then yell in awe or help when they pass the belt Its easy to spell just sound out L.i.T OR duck n dip when I twitch its a round house kick I'm rough around the egdes so its coarse when you touch me Always scratch a never, you'll be forced to just love me On the open mic there's nothing north of above me Cuz the cold of the north pole is... sort of "just ugly"... __________________ Look up to the sky to try n find god in the clouds Hopin when he looks down I dont get lost in the crowd Last edited by Lost in Thought; 08-21-2013 at 01:47 PM.

08-21-2013, 02:10 PM	#2
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Hunched over on the computer "Composing Greatness" Redbull laced wit vodka and I'm totaly waisted Sit back and spit raps thinking its dopeness created Composed and focused this is suppose to be great shit ^^Aight. Wasn't really feelin' much of the middle section, seemed Idk...just not my thing...alot of stuff didn't hit me hard, the connections were off...some parts flowed nicely but were let down by either content or failin' to deliver what you wanted to do successfully...it was cool, not great tho. No hate just sayin', stay upwards.

08-21-2013, 07:28 PM	#3
Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,150 Rep Power: 0	i thought first stanza was okish. then you sort of lost of me but i did read it all the way through. that spell-out line was gai af. don't do that. and i think disgrauding is disregarding? or something. idk. write sober. pz