Scrappy Doo, Thelma & Shaggy Too..

Mr. J · 11-11-2014, 08:20 PM

With each question I give, I'm expecting it quick, for instance I spit...
Top, you could answer with lid, circus or what covers up your wig
or the drop with a shorty who gives you wisdom in a split...
second, we speaking time or the position you in? this is the switch
does it confuse you the seconds you get? or truly..the position you in
that's my side piece, is it my girl or the millimeter I keep beside me
I usher in a new era and that's how you remind me, parting is so timely
keep the future & present behind me, I pass time like the Shining
Here's Johnny, I cash in, you can't cage the monster behind the silence
you lambs, you puppets, you yellow canary wearing costume huggers
how can you walk through public as you lying ass cartoon fuckers
I nod to publishers clearing, cause it gets millions to stay in they house
fenced in cause they weighing us down, their back changin' en-route
I took a look around at the garbage and I all I feel like sayin' is "Ouch!"
these mosquito's I'm sprayin' em down, til' their buzz ain't makin' a sound
I'm playin' around, I'm bias when it comes to buzz when I'm sprayin' the ground
make my name in mound and put a line across just to say that I'm proud
feelin' like a elephant when I'm makin' the pound your situation is doubt..
don't be a hero take the L and bounce, it's elementary lets play that he counts
back on your sesame street I guess the whole meaning just came it's way around
shh, don't make any sounds...don't make any moves...

Geno · 11-15-2014, 10:56 AM

Clearly just having fun. Seemed like you were aiming for something in the beginning. Some kind of similie concept. Iono.. seemed to lose focuss and just start blabbering. Whatever. Seems to be the norm in all the shit imreading here now. Anyway. Not trying to single u out. Just sayibg

Mr. J · 11-19-2014, 09:34 PM

The title represents the whole idea of the piece in a odd way does it not
scrappy doo=my verse for the league, thelma is the analysis of monkey see, monkey do
Shaggy represents my laziness to keep it cohesive due to high strung anxiety
also Scrappy is quick to go head on, Thelma is the views based on my representative Shaggy
therefore I don't fuck with how things are looking but let them play out and ride with it

11-11-2014, 08:20 PM	#1
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	Scrappy Doo, Thelma & Shaggy Too.. With each question I give, I'm expecting it quick, for instance I spit... Top, you could answer with lid, circus or what covers up your wig or the drop with a shorty who gives you wisdom in a split... second, we speaking time or the position you in? this is the switch does it confuse you the seconds you get? or truly..the position you in that's my side piece, is it my girl or the millimeter I keep beside me I usher in a new era and that's how you remind me, parting is so timely keep the future & present behind me, I pass time like the Shining Here's Johnny, I cash in, you can't cage the monster behind the silence you lambs, you puppets, you yellow canary wearing costume huggers how can you walk through public as you lying ass cartoon fuckers I nod to publishers clearing, cause it gets millions to stay in they house fenced in cause they weighing us down, their back changin' en-route I took a look around at the garbage and I all I feel like sayin' is "Ouch!" these mosquito's I'm sprayin' em down, til' their buzz ain't makin' a sound I'm playin' around, I'm bias when it comes to buzz when I'm sprayin' the ground make my name in mound and put a line across just to say that I'm proud feelin' like a elephant when I'm makin' the pound your situation is doubt.. don't be a hero take the L and bounce, it's elementary lets play that he counts back on your sesame street I guess the whole meaning just came it's way around shh, don't make any sounds...don't make any moves... __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

11-15-2014, 10:56 AM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Clearly just having fun. Seemed like you were aiming for something in the beginning. Some kind of similie concept. Iono.. seemed to lose focuss and just start blabbering. Whatever. Seems to be the norm in all the shit imreading here now. Anyway. Not trying to single u out. Just sayibg __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

11-19-2014, 09:34 PM	#3
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	The title represents the whole idea of the piece in a odd way does it not scrappy doo=my verse for the league, thelma is the analysis of monkey see, monkey do Shaggy represents my laziness to keep it cohesive due to high strung anxiety also Scrappy is quick to go head on, Thelma is the views based on my representative Shaggy therefore I don't fuck with how things are looking but let them play out and ride with it __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you