10-07-2014, 02:32 AM | #2 |
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10-10-2014, 09:58 AM | #3 |
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vets give my style the Nod..say i have the beast within
only thing u getting Signed Off is the cast imma leave u in. u winning is a long shot, for me it's point blank range b you'd need cia, fbi, AND kgb training to even graze me. I'm climbing ranks, making quick work of sloppy newbies I'm slowly taking the BA over..u were just assigned modding duties. skill set is of a peasant. u know it in ur heart so ur hurting NEVER b a match for this Titan..when u can't do that to your wording. my hoes love to experiment. when I'm done they swallow clean admittedly your girl's a Freak too..w/ a face just in time for Halloween. |
10-14-2014, 06:24 AM | #5 |
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ugly as fuck, asking a chick out is instant rejection
Only person ever saying 'you wanna fuk bb' is that troll in the discussion section names in a crossword , I'm top 5 n u wouldn't take long to seal see if we're askin to fill in the blanc, it's bad wording, horrible flow and got raped by Jilti tryna get him a win, pathetic how easy your head'll rattle ironic I gave you murda sho, when that describes the last 10 of your battles His record w/ chicks is nill, ull never see there hurl end His whole style isnt just imperfection, he'd consider one as his girlfriend lost to camp, jil, unfuckwitable, n don't think that that's all Ya record is so Pathetic close up, muffys tryna use it for a pic battle Last edited by Defiant; 10-14-2014 at 06:31 AM. |
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10-16-2014, 05:56 AM | #7 |
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vets give my style the Nod..say i have the beast within
only thing u getting Signed Off is the cast imma leave u in. I'm climbing ranks, making quick work of sloppy newbies I'm slowly taking the BA over..u were just assigned modding duties. skill set is of a peasant. u know it in ur heart so ur hurting NEVER b a match for this Titan..when u can't do that to your wording. my hoes love to experiment. when I'm done they swallow clean admittedly your girl's a Freak too..w/ a face just in time for Halloween. vs ugly as fuck, asking a chick out is instant rejection Only person ever saying 'you wanna fuk bb' is that troll in the discussion section tryna get him a win, pathetic how easy your head'll rattle ironic I gave you murda sho, when that describes the last 10 of your battles His record w/ chicks is nill, ull never see there hurl end His whole style isnt just imperfection, he'd consider one as his girlfriend entertaining battle. havent seen blanco so polished. dont change your style. keep this format, this exact format and dont revert back to your previous one. this one is much better. defiant made it close, could of had a haymaker with his last bar but the wording negated it. good shit by both. mvgt bishop blanco |
10-16-2014, 11:55 AM | #8 |
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Blanco
Signed off Modding duties The last two were played as fuck. Especially Titan. Because I can link you to a match in rm where I used that wordplay back in 08(hall of champ thread. Its there just saw it) . Your version was better imo. But its something ive personally done sooo nope Defiant Opener Fill in the blanc Murda sho That closer was wack tho. N Im usually inclined to like with lines w/ my name in em lol V/ defiant for one more quote n less played shit that I dint come up with 6-7 yrs ago I agree tho that style chng shows promise. Jus think u came played . U were unaware tho.
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10-28-2014, 12:13 AM | #9 |
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10-28-2014, 03:41 PM | #10 |
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vets give my style the Nod..say i have the beast within
only thing u getting Signed Off is the cast imma leave u in. cool u winning is a long shot, for me it's point blank range b you'd need cia, fbi, AND kgb training to even graze me. miss I'm climbing ranks, making quick work of sloppy newbies I'm slowly taking the BA over..u were just assigned modding duties. lol dope skill set is of a peasant. u know it in ur heart so ur hurting NEVER b a match for this Titan..when u can't do that to your wording. liked it my hoes love to experiment. when I'm done they swallow clean admittedly your girl's a Freak too..w/ a face just in time for Halloween. haha and its almost halloween, perfect Vs ugly as fuck, asking a chick out is instant rejection Only person ever saying 'you wanna fuk bb' is that troll in the discussion section lmao nice names in a crossword , I'm top 5 n u wouldn't take long to seal see if we're askin to fill in the blanc, it's bad wording, horrible flow and got raped by Jilti lol nice tryna get him a win, pathetic how easy your head'll rattle ironic I gave you murda sho, when that describes the last 10 of your battles nah. could either be a diss or compliment His record w/ chicks is nill, ull never see there hurl end His whole style isnt just imperfection, he'd consider one as his girlfriend miss lost to camp, jil, unfuckwitable, n don't think that that's all Ya record is so Pathetic close up, muffys tryna use it for a pic battle ok good battle LOTB was either assigned modies duties or wanna fuk bb Vote Blanco |
10-31-2014, 12:19 AM | #11 |
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vets give my style the Nod..say i have the beast within
only thing u getting Signed Off is the cast imma leave u in. ok u winning is a long shot, for me it's point blank range b you'd need cia, fbi, AND kgb training to even graze me. not really feeling this I'm climbing ranks, making quick work of sloppy newbies I'm slowly taking the BA over..u were just assigned modding duties. nice skill set is of a peasant. u know it in ur heart so ur hurting NEVER b a match for this Titan..when u can't do that to your wording. cool my hoes love to experiment. when I'm done they swallow clean admittedly your girl's a Freak too..w/ a face just in time for Halloween. Alright ugly as fuck, asking a chick out is instant rejection Only person ever saying 'you wanna fuk bb' is that troll in the discussion section lol nice names in a crossword , I'm top 5 n u wouldn't take long to seal see if we're askin to fill in the blanc, it's bad wording, horrible flow and got raped by Jilti cool tryna get him a win, pathetic how easy your head'll rattle ironic I gave you murda sho, when that describes the last 10 of your battles ok His record w/ chicks is nill, ull never see there hurl end His whole style isnt just imperfection, he'd consider one as his girlfriend eh lost to camp, jil, unfuckwitable, n don't think that that's all Ya record is so Pathetic close up, muffys tryna use it for a pic battle okish Cloooose battle. Reread it but I think defs first two hit the hardest so he gets the edge for me. But Blanco's taking the ba over line was dope V/Defiant |
11-04-2014, 12:11 PM | #12 |
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vets give my style the Nod..say i have the beast within
only thing u getting Signed Off is the cast imma leave u in. I'm climbing ranks, making quick work of sloppy newbies I'm slowly taking the BA over..u were just assigned modding duties. those were the only okay ones, still not great. rest was played/weak vs ugly as fuck, asking a chick out is instant rejection Only person ever saying 'you wanna fuk bb' is that troll in the discussion section names in a crossword , I'm top 5 n u wouldn't take long to seal see if we're askin to fill in the blanc, it's bad wording, horrible flow and got raped by Jilti lost to camp, jil, unfuckwitable, n don't think that that's all Ya record is so Pathetic close up, muffys tryna use it for a pic battle all better than his but still eh. bad wording. bb in butt was cool v/def |
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11-05-2014, 01:17 AM | #14 |
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Blanco Bishop: Nothing here was at all original. I think you may be burning out because of how often you battle. The actual punch concepts (cast signed, Titan and Halloween) were played as hell. The personal even was pretty played because it's be used against so many moderators. And the CIA, FBI and KGB line didn't go anywhere.
Defiant: You went heavy on personals, which was enough to win. But the personals weren't well-executed. The opener was good enough, and the closer was a decent concept. But the jilti line was a complete flop, and the murda sho line didn't make sense as worded. Vote: Defiant
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